Multiversal: The Shop

LV 13

Charlottes

I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.

LV 2

Merlin58

The author deleted all reviews so I won't write a long review.There is r*pe in the story...........................................................................................................................

LV 4

ArdaPendragon

The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)

LV 5

Chaos_Order8

I really love all your works Charlotte sensai but at lesst finish them first, then start a new one, u will definitely or most likely will Lose interest in the previous ones like that.

LV 4

Adrian_Nyel

I really like your stories Charlotte and this story also has promise but, you should really focus more on your stories considering all the stories that you left hanging or you just forgotten.

LV 11

LuminousValentine

where is the 1 star review I thought before this fanfic rating was 3.5...................................................................................................................

LV 4

Haku_Ouroboros

Parece que el autor borró todas las calificaciones bajas, El MC tiene una relación con personajes de H de violaciones . 🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 10

Ased

Well, I'm really sorry about your dad, but that doesn't change my opinion... Fanfic. All the action in the store is the same (when a new customer shows up). Also, I don't remember exactly because it's been a long time since I read it, but I definitely remember the problem with the MC and his Chinese stereotype persona. Well, the rating should have been 3.5-3.7, but you just deleted the reviews. Disappointment.

LV 10

iffats

Pretty bad OC and Force interactions, and imagine shipping Lorelei and Shirou Emiya being Lorelei his sister? Simply disgusting as it's obvious it'll be quite force and I won't even bother seeing it through.

LV 1

Fracasso

Now I understand why my friend recommended this story to me, hahahahaha my God, the author almost kills me with so much hate, the author's choices are the worst possible hahahahaha

LV 1

Cleiton_Sena_6677

Unnecessary R*p*, MC Gone Stupid, Ridiculous Shirou vs Lorelei Romance, and more ...................................................................................................................................

LV 11

Shivam_Thakur_1883

nah after few chapter author become stupid... mc action is logicless... mc have no motivation or ambition and have poor syndrome.. now 10 years after mc reincarnation everyone told him to behave well for family status and mc have way too much money still after coming to tower he complain that room is too big for him.. his sister still warned to keep his image but guess what mc does next-- he went to low class cafeteria.. and yes you can guess all this.. before reincarnation mc wanted best life after reincarnation he lost all motivation and jjust wanted to live and don't want to involve in anything magi related but guess what he doing poor like stuff despite being rice make it sound like ridiculas brro.... even chinese mc are not that cliche.... I mean what's wronge with living in big room or what's wrong with eating expensive food.. mc have like hundreds of millions every month and he doesn't knows how to spend... I mean my brain just can't process his foolish like actions... which made me drop this story as mc seems too ambitionless and stupid with poor syndrome ..

LV 3

Orsted_sama

Typical Charlotte... Doesn't complete his stories.... Ugh.. It's really frustrating you know? Going on hiatus or drop the story every now on then...

LV 5

MorningWood_Dao

got hyped because it's "Shop-kind genre novel" highly disappointed to say the least. it lack shop interaction. at one point i forgot what this novel is about because his interaction with D is dominating the novel or his daily life that bring no real value aside from time waster. the moment we get shop interaction, it's kinda disappointing. for the past few chapters, i guess about ch 40+, the pace got slower and slower. it takes 1 chapter to explain 1 interaction at ch 60+. at one point, 1 chapter can be summed as "I can use Magic, no you don't don't you lie, i don't lie, I can't believe it, here's proof" that conversation didn't even take about 5 minutes if it's happening in real life

LV 1

Drako_0692

looks like a chinese tale looks like a chinese tale, looks like a chinese tale looks like a chinese tale looks like a chinese tale, looks like a chinese tale, looks like a chinese tale looks like a chinese tale, looks like a chinese tale

LV 4

Big_Nigg4

i'd rather have lorelei be a single but powerful leader than be together than shirou tbh. currently at chapter 11 and lost all motivation to continue due to the phasing of the story and things i'd rather not say. couldve read further to see what kind of shop this novel is talking about but nah

LV 10

iffats

The author deleted all reviews so I won't write a long review.author is c*ck..........................................................................................................................