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3.74 (16 Bewertungen)
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A middle-aged office worker returns home after, a tiering day and falls asleep cursing life the next day when he wakes his life turns upside down with the Gamer system welcoming him for his new day.
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English is not my first language, so there will be several problems to be aware of.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionI don't know if I should write that I enjoy the story because of the progression or not but why are you making the MC into a villain like character .... he's attacking everyone it's like the system is sabotaging him
so far this novel is pretty good it takes a different route compared to other Jujutsu kaisen fanfic with the mc not going with gojo to study at the Jujutsu school. kinda sad you decided to give him cursed energy i would have preferred if you had just left it with mana. the grammar is pretty good not bad but not great. I like that you didn't drag out beginning and overall good pacing 👍
Spoiler enthüllenthe main character is stupid, even the player's intelligence doesn't help... the antihero and villain tag should be added here. appeal to the author: if you tried to do this for the story, you failed
Loved the story in the begining but its getting too edgy, MC is turning into the typical chinese “young master” and the grammar is inconsistent. There are so many spelling mistakes that its impossible to read. Even if English is your second language, there are free spell check softwares and you can use Grammarly to help fix your grammar. Hope you improve this Author and edit your earlier chapters.
i simply love this , one of the best ive ever read , so exiting and cool , p'ease dont drop this fanfic
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A exemplary story, the author never disappoints. A top tier fanfic; read if you want to be satisfied.
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just like how you dont have to eat trash to know its not trash, i dont need to read this to know that its garbage. how can you go through the entire of jujutsu kaisen without realizing that giving mc who probably already has metaknowledge (and no, regardless of how much stupid "underdog" stories wish to tell you, just because your a normal human doesnt mean your an underdog. "underdogs" usually become gods with this alone) will inevitably end with you writing yourself into a corner? i didnt come here for a story i can anticipate just from the title.
MC nya ga jelas, seperti kepribadian ganda dan mudah sekali di sabotase sama sistem. Ga punya pendirian banget sumpah dah. Ga ngerti lagi dah cerita nya mau di bawa kemana ini.
Autor jay_Godara
1 star deserved, the development of the story is very strange, the MC acts like a random NPC with no personality of his own, he is a 30-year-old transmigrator but he acts like a hyperactive teenager without comon sense. The interactions also feel like NPCs, sadly I didn't read anything good in what little I did read