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Am interesting concept for a story. Even though it’s a little quick at the beginning, as long as you know you have to take every word in, you should be fine. Thanks for the read!
The writing quality is great and the way things are portrayed is unique. Overall, it's a good read.
Nice creation author, the first chapters of the book made me want to invest in the book, you did a great job author. kudos to the author. Lovers of fantasy, invest in the creation, it is worth your time.
Was honestly getting tired of repeating stories. hope this author continues to steer clear of cliches we need fresh stories like this. and did I mention that the writing is impeccable?
Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰
Great story telling skill. The world building is fascinating and intriguing. The character development so far is great. I hope it still the same. If you want to correct grammar which is small mistakes from my point of view u can use Grammarly.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a very good story. Writing quality is not the best but it's very good. Story is developing nicely. Though grandma is weird since she likes deserts lol. Your stability of updates is really bad you need to write one chapter everyday! Otherwise it's good.
Wow, a very nice first chapter. The main characters personality is shown, leaving a foundation for the rest of the novel which should be the goal of most chapter ones. along with that some conflicts and unsolved mysteries are also present for readers, leading to a more enjoyable story. There are a good amount of Grammer, punctuation, and overall writing mistakes, but that comes with a new author. still it seems you have potential, continue writing 😁!
An interesting and intriguing story. The title and the synopsis itself as speak for the story. Am looking forward to see how Rainer struggles and find the truth about her dream. And also the king who wants to make her his🤭. Your story is so good. please don't stop writing as you have gained a fan( me ). Good Luck Author!
Great storytelling skill. The word building is fascinating and intriguing. The character s' developments are great so far. Few small grammar mistakes, though. It's a work of art. Gonna save this one to the library~[img=update]
Overall, the writing is super good! Description/Vocabulary-wise it's superb. I loved Rainer's personality and really identified with her situation at the boarding school (I've always been an oddball myself). Was a good read! Nice work!
Am interesting concept for a story. Even though it’s a little quick at the beginning, as long as you know you have to take every word in, you should be fine. Thanks for the read!
The writing quality is great and the way things are portrayed is unique. Overall, it's a good read.
Nice creation author, the first chapters of the book made me want to invest in the book, you did a great job author. kudos to the author. Lovers of fantasy, invest in the creation, it is worth your time.
Was honestly getting tired of repeating stories. hope this author continues to steer clear of cliches we need fresh stories like this. and did I mention that the writing is impeccable?
Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰
Great story telling skill. The world building is fascinating and intriguing. The character development so far is great. I hope it still the same. If you want to correct grammar which is small mistakes from my point of view u can use Grammarly.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a very good story. Writing quality is not the best but it's very good. Story is developing nicely. Though grandma is weird since she likes deserts lol. Your stability of updates is really bad you need to write one chapter everyday! Otherwise it's good.
Wow, a very nice first chapter. The main characters personality is shown, leaving a foundation for the rest of the novel which should be the goal of most chapter ones. along with that some conflicts and unsolved mysteries are also present for readers, leading to a more enjoyable story. There are a good amount of Grammer, punctuation, and overall writing mistakes, but that comes with a new author. still it seems you have potential, continue writing 😁!
An interesting and intriguing story. The title and the synopsis itself as speak for the story. Am looking forward to see how Rainer struggles and find the truth about her dream. And also the king who wants to make her his🤭. Your story is so good. please don't stop writing as you have gained a fan( me ). Good Luck Author!
Great storytelling skill. The word building is fascinating and intriguing. The character s' developments are great so far. Few small grammar mistakes, though. It's a work of art. Gonna save this one to the library~[img=update]
Overall, the writing is super good! Description/Vocabulary-wise it's superb. I loved Rainer's personality and really identified with her situation at the boarding school (I've always been an oddball myself). Was a good read! Nice work!