MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

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Champsing

So here I am with my shameless review. Mc will get reincarnated in time to play Liberty Online. Now, the catch is he will only get reincarnated after 1 year of the game launch. So you will not get one player face-slapping all others or girls screaming I want your monkey. No instead you will get some interesting plot development. Oh yeah, I forget to mention that mc will have a dungeon that he needs to protect at all costs. If you want to try something new with old touch sure try my new novel first few chapters will hint to you what to expect but those were not even proper trailers so after reading those if you like even one of the points interesting point then go ahead and read more. Tyyy to those readers who support me from the start. ( enough rambling). Byyyyyye will see you in the chapter comment and PS donation list. [img=faceslap] (shameless heheehe)

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Sinonthe1st

While I give 5 Stars, for me personaly there are not enough chapters releasing.🤣 Well can't say anything though being an author is hard. As of when I am writing this review I finished reading chapter 146. So as some might already see I really like this novel, but will give my best not to be biased. Pros: --> Class Whe need to absolutely talk about the class. Dungeon Master is just such an amazing class in this novel that this class alone without any other player and only him and his class is enough to write a great novel. From inner working, in the dungeon to how he needs knowledge, Evolution, usw. is just amazing and since I don't want to spoiler too much read it yourself. --> time mc is reborn one year after the game launch so all others are a year head of him. This gives him huge disadvantages, but it also Shows us how he wants to catch up and another Perspektive to the usual Storyline in an mmorpg novel. --> evil mc I wouldn't directly say he is evil but many propably would give him in this category. Anyway I like his Personality and if you are not 100% in moralitys shakles bis personality shouldn't be a Problem for you since of right now, you can only really speak of one really evil moment, and we must say that he is a Gangster more or less at the Moment. --> relationships his relationships are fairly unique as of now with his Brother and assistant. This spices things up quite nicely. -->character growth To be true many decisions of mc at the beginning are questionable, his personality at some points unlikeable but all this has a turningpoint very early on when he realises those things himself. So we have a character with a growing personality which is always a nice trait to have. Besides what is also very important side characters also have this growth👍 really great Job author. -->flexibility even though he is a reincarnator, not everything works out fine for him. But he can adapt to the Situation quite well. -->Smooth story Everything feels extremely Smoothe even though not everything works fine for the mc. I just can't comprehend how the author made it so nicely balanced. -->side characters the hated children of authors, but whe don't have that here. Every sidecharacter from his brother, assistant, dungeon assistant, or even the fat City Leader of his first City have their own personalitys, Motives, Background usw. Overall they are great and we even have here and there 1 or 2 chapters of what is going on with only sidecharacters involved. Which is just the right amount. -->snakes this is a completely personal opinion but I love snakes and poison, but authors don't really think they are worth it to Become one of the main themes of the novel. So I am really glad to have them here. Many thanks author. So to the cons.... to be serious I don't really have any but since there should be ones I will pick out what I can but they are either minor ones or don't represent my own opinion. -->early buttlerfly The buttergly effect is a little too early into the story and a little random for me but it is only a few chapters since then and I am surfe author will let is know in a future chapter why it happend. -->evil mc while not a Problem for me a lot of people just can't or might not like a mc who is not completely innocent. So while theoretically is a pro lets also put it in cons -->slow leveling and building is relativ slow, but I like it slow in this novel and even hope it to be even slower. But there are people who can't appreciate it propably so lets also put it into cons. -->early personality mc mcs early personality is a little trash, while it is Part of the development of the mc there will propably be people who will stop reading it because of it while Passing on a gem. So this is a personal Con because of Pity for all the people who drop it too early. Ok this concludes my review. Overall I heavily recommend this Novel, and I am Sure you won't regret reading it. But make your own opinion of it. ***Note to Author*** If you every read this, Thank you for such a great work, I always wanted to be an Author myself but my grammar just sucks too much. So I have a little bit of an idea how hard it is to write a book in generall, and I can only imagine how hard it is to write such a good one. I feel a little Pity to only find this book so late, so I was unable to join the Journey of this story from the Start but I am happy to be Part of it now. Please keep up the fantastic work and don't drop the novel. I am sure all people who like the novel (me included) can understand if you need a break and it is okay to not Stress yourself over Updates. New chapters are nice but quality is better than quantity and while we all hope for more chapters, this is purely because we like the novel so much and it is not that we want to pressure you. with kind regards Sinone

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Kotik_Kotik

Mom can we have 'rebirth of the strongest dungeon master' No. We have 'rebirth of the strongest dungeon master' at home. At home:

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hard_obsidian

i dont have much to say other than it has a smooth story development. I like the mc backstory and a overall plot even though it only has 11 chapter still. 4 3 2 1 auther i hope you continue your grate works.

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TheprimordialGod

Wait why is he joining a guild this doesn’t make sense they already know who he is so get ready to be a slave again

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Manoj_Jha_1017

fun to read, this novel follow the common video games novel settings with some interesting twist here and there. Writing quality can be improved but it easy to read not any huge upsetting mistake. Love the story switch that happen around 33-34th chapter. There are some funny interesting chapter. I do say try reading till 40th chapter, you will find that how it starts from a cliche and then it keep getting more and more interesting with some unique development. Definitely worth to try.

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Roran14

As much as I liked the initial premise of the story, the way that the author seemed to put exponentially less effort into writing complete words chapter by chapter, I felt forced to give up reading by chapter 15 . I have read other works by this author as well and I was not disappointed with those at all, however this one is no good from a literate reader perspective .

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AppleCheese0

Interesting premise and work the author has created however that cannot redeem the story from the MC. The MC lacks any appeal to me and the story seems to actively make you want to dislike him. Not a fan

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Fero_Germanicus

Good really, good, as a pureblooded german I love the combination of dungeons and gaming genre. The whole story development moved in refreshing out of norm directions. Aufwidersen meine freunde!

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AnonymUser

Alright, I like this novel, it feels very fresh when compared to the rest of the genre with its developments. I would give it five stars, but there is one problem the author not knowing the principle of show vs tell. Otherwise, it's a nice story.

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei

Amazing writing! After reading five chapters, i was hooked. This book has everything you could ask for. For me, game elements was the center of attraction. Give it a try. You won't regret it.

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mujaki2

This is a really fun regression novel. The biggest differences are, it's super VR mmorpg in India, where our MC gets a dungeon class. Get ready to watch the MC use his foreknowledge to climb out of extreme poverty and become a respectable gangster. Story has a big helping of Bollywood and Indian humor. So don't be culture shocked and enjoy the creative process.

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Iseeyou

A good addicting read. Characters are good and fleshed out. Some comedy mixed with seriousness makes the story tense and relaxing to read. I recdomend this story to anyone wanting to read a solid novel. My only gripe is not enough chapters.

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ShamelessGengar

Writing Quality: 3.8/5 Little to no, misspelled words, grammar is good enough to not lose your mind. My last English class was over 10 years ago in freshman year of college but it’s perfectly understandable. You may notice some mistakes but nothing that makes you upset like you’re reading MTL. Author could use more contractions in character dialogue which would make the conversations seem more natural. The thing that stands out the most is the unnecessary capitalization but again, grammar is going to be better than 90% of the novels out there. Author should also look into utilizing semi-colons (;) and look into Pro-writing aid or at least run it through Grammarly. Some sentences are…odd. Stability of Updates: 4/5 I just read it today and took a peek at the table of contents to see how the release schedule is. It looks very stable to me at nearly daily releases. Can’t comment on the rest of it as I didn’t read too far. The novel feels a bit too formal and stiff, for lack of a better term. I'm still gonna give it 5 stars because I'm soft and dislike giving reviews that lower the ratings. I leave that for other people, I also don't want to be the reason that someone might miss this novel and it turns out to be what they were looking for.

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MorningStar00

i see this story is inspired by rebirth of strongest dungeon master with a few twist like the new aditions to story and hope u wont drop it.Love story for now

Dungeon novels are always a treat to me, the quality of the writing can be a bit weird as I sometime feel like what I read didn't actually make much sense but it isn't rubbish, the updates seem consistent enough, the story progresses at a good enough pace, overall, I would recommend to give it a read.

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funkiller_562

Reading something different for once in a gaming novel was refreshing. You managed to execute the first chapter really well. I do feel like there was a bit of info dumping while explaining the game to us and the dungeons he was trying to conquer but either way, it didn't affect the overall flow and pacing of the story. Keep it up, Author

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the_god_of_plot

hahahaa, everything aside... the indian tone in this novel is Hillarious ch 14/15 were amazing 🤣🤣🤣😭😭

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ADOLF_KITLER

great novel amazing concept u should make a discord server for the novel