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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionloved the book, but me, being me, wished they had kids and stayed with their friends
Spoiler enthüllentotally unexpected ending. it started to involve so many dimensions and magic items that it started to confuse. good thing that author didn't dwell on it too deep.
There's no denial at all this book deserves a five star rating!!! I know I am a bit late in reading but the story made my toes curl in excitement. I'm so happy! I love strong female lead books. Overall this was perfect!
I just finished reading and I must say that the plot its's awesome, the characters' development is outstanding. The slow burn it's sometimes annoying but when it gets on fire you just realize that its's just perfect and well written, nothing forced or out of nowhere. If you're looking for a novel with a good plot, lots of fantasy, a sweet steamy romance and a great end I surely recommend this one!
This is the first novel that I have read all the way through that features fantasy/magic elements! It is a good introductory novel to the genre, with a plot that is only slightly complicated (I’ve seen some that are ridiculously confusing), likeable main characters, and villains that make you want to go into the story yourself so that you can stab them in their black hearts. Definitely give it a shot if you’re on the fence about starting it!
I cannot remove this from my library nor did i even add it to my library. I won 24 hours free reading, but I didn't want to read it. This straight up looks like a scam to say "look how many people have this in their library" but forget to say against their will.@a
Amazing story. The characters are well developed. A ML that will burn the world for the FL happiness. 🥰🥰🥰
must add book to library..I like character building , environment setup and background explanation. most importantly I like Lucas
Love the book! I have followed it since the beginning and couldn't be more satisfied😍The characters and world building are truly incredible! A must read for sure!!
Rosalind and Lucas Rothley's love story is worthy to remember for a very long time. Their love for each other is still real in this world. It's a fantasy book but relatable characters in the real world like the power hungry Ena Thun, or the hypocrite Martin Lux, the arrogant yet caring Lachlan, dog-cat friendship of Valentin and Elias, the ever loyal/trustworthy Denys, Huig and Magda. Thank you Author Mitch for the opportunity to read your Book. The money I bought chapters for advance reading is worth it. More power and God bless.
it keeps on edge, anticipating new pages. Overall ? Just amazing !!❤️❤️ Love it to the max. I'm looking forward to their side story .
It is absolutely on point, I love how your main characters aren't unnecessarily morally righteous in a world where only the strong survive.
I love a good revenge story and fantasy romance is a bonus! This novel has a bug cast of characters and great storylines. I am just 10 chapters in and I can’t put the novel down for a second!!
This was such a beautiful novel with many twists and turns and sweetness and revenge and at last true love! The ending has me in tears!
The world building is great, but it's not a romance. Slow burn is an under statement - 400 chapters and a single kiss.
One of my favorites story , I really enjoy to read this story so exciting and amazing to to read .My friend just add this in your Library you won't regret to read it until the end......❤️❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️👌🌺👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I just came across this novel accidentally and gave it a go. I was amazed to have found a gem from this book. i love how the author minds work to create such characters and story line. its hard not to read the next page every single time. im loving the story and im falling inlove with Lucas character and commending Rosie's character as well. i hope their romance will develop sooner than later i just hope this story will not drag too long and focus on the main characters journey together. i have definitely added B.Mitchylle as one of my few fave authors in this platform. you have an amazing mind. keep it up hun 🥰😍
I've read all the free chapters of this book and what i got from it all , is that this book is entertaining but also very lacking. First, the pros : - The characters' interactions are good. -The MI is funny yet mysterious. - The plot is interesting and it seems to promise more than what was said in the synopsis. - The pace is nor quick nor slow . -The fl makes good use of her future knowledges. - The author's updates are rather constant and the writing is ok. Then, the cons : - The Fl was poorly designed. First, her relationship with her past-timeline husband. I know she's been hurt by him. But why is it that it isn't shown? What i mean is that the author only tells us that she wants revenge yet the fl's lack of negative feelings makes us think otherwise.To truly believe in her thirst for revenge, we must feel that fl is emotionally invested in her revenge. And this goes through seeing her actions , reactions and negative feelings when she faces the architects of her downfall. But the author has done nothing of the sort. Moreover , the author could have created a contrast between Mc's past feelings and her present ones . After all, she used to love the man so much and only recently( just before she died in the past timeline) had she learnt that he had been cheating on her the whole time with her half-sister. So just how come she passed so quickly from love to hate ? And what hate ? She basically doesn't care about him( can someone pass so quickly from love to indifference; did she even really love him?)and only wants revenge on her half sister while that ex-husband of hers is as guilty as her. Second,the FI/ Mc is not that smart.Seriously, that chapter where she played dumb before another noble lady just to slap that lady's face wasn't satisfying . She was supposed to look smart but the way she chose to deal with things just made the whole face slapping underwhelming. If anything , Mc doesn't seem that smart(which is not a problem as long as the book doesn't force us to see her as a genius). Another problem i have with this FI (and with most of romance novels' Fls) is that apart from avenging herself , she doesn't have a goal nor any other motivation in life. lf i had to resume her personality, she would be a sympathetic and mysterious girl that would have been a good side character in another character's story , if not for the fact that she possesses two blessings. - The grammar is lacking. The first chapter was perfect( at least, i didn't spot any mistake or problem). Yet in the second chapter, all this care was nowhere to be seen. And the situation was the same with the other chapters.Overall, the errors aren't so much that they can deter one from reading the book. But still, they hinder the reading experience ( some paragraphs are strangely structured or some sentences are incomprehensible ). - The pay wall. If anything, the pay wall appears too quickly for me. Recently on this platform, authors start to lock chapters under the 50 chapters bar (and often , like with this book, under the 30 chapters bar) and i think , as a reader, that it's a bummer. First , with this little number of chapters , there is a greater chance to be disappointed , because we do not know the characters and the story enough. Second,the chapters are locked so quickly yet the quality of writing displayed by this author( and some others authors on this platform) is not that good. Plus, it gives the idea that authors are only interested in readers' money and do not care about producing a quality content. All in all, this book is a big disappointment and it sadens me even more that in this review section, no one has talked about what was good and what was bad about it but rather, just stated that it was amazing. Finally, author, i pray for your improvement and hope that my review wasn't too harsh.As for others author that might read this review, please think as a reader when you write. We know you have your difficulties but we have ours too. So please make quality content and we will gladly pay for more.
Not knocking the author but as a reader this story is pretty expensive especially if you just start reading it. Its a good story with interesting leads, some good sidekicks and other new characters with a fair amount of twists/mystery. Hence its addictive, thus I wont give spoilers. To appease my twinges of conscience, I have to call it an early Christmas present (a big one) and count myself lucky to be able to somewhat afford this. I do recommend others to read the novel, keep up the good work author.
I'm currently at chapter 215 and still our leads are not married! I mean wth is this they left for North and it literally took 100 or more than those chapters to reach north! I agree! the story must be interesting but i feel the author is stretching too much. as for Rosie's revenge there were not even more than 10 chapters in which she took revenge, I mean i agree she would slowly take care of them but it's tooo slow! i honestly felt that story diverts it's attention to ml and this doings!🤷 bro story is based on fl so she shld be the focus not ml! If you want to focus on ml change the novel's name as Lucas game!🙄 at some point it felt like fl is like a puppy following ml. she does things on her own but not much. They keep adding new plots and there's no need for that I think...... there's no one way to the story. they keep adding new characters, plots which i feel didn't need. the story itself is truly great. the character building, story narration, background details everything is awesome. But adding more and more plots doesn't help in story development. if you add everything once it would be a mess.It would be great if you'd add plot one by one and focus more on the fl side. Rest you are great❤️
Hello, I am going to shamelessly review my own novel. I included the map. It's too big but I am going to post something smaller soon. We are currently on ASTER EMPIRE. She will travel to the north very soon. This novel will focus on revenge and face slapping. It's a slowburn romance with a strong female lead. Thank you.
Spoiler enthüllenloved the book, but me, being me, wished they had kids and stayed with their friends
Spoiler enthüllentotally unexpected ending. it started to involve so many dimensions and magic items that it started to confuse. good thing that author didn't dwell on it too deep.
There's no denial at all this book deserves a five star rating!!! I know I am a bit late in reading but the story made my toes curl in excitement. I'm so happy! I love strong female lead books. Overall this was perfect!
I just finished reading and I must say that the plot its's awesome, the characters' development is outstanding. The slow burn it's sometimes annoying but when it gets on fire you just realize that its's just perfect and well written, nothing forced or out of nowhere. If you're looking for a novel with a good plot, lots of fantasy, a sweet steamy romance and a great end I surely recommend this one!
This is the first novel that I have read all the way through that features fantasy/magic elements! It is a good introductory novel to the genre, with a plot that is only slightly complicated (I’ve seen some that are ridiculously confusing), likeable main characters, and villains that make you want to go into the story yourself so that you can stab them in their black hearts. Definitely give it a shot if you’re on the fence about starting it!
I cannot remove this from my library nor did i even add it to my library. I won 24 hours free reading, but I didn't want to read it. This straight up looks like a scam to say "look how many people have this in their library" but forget to say against their will.@a
Amazing story. The characters are well developed. A ML that will burn the world for the FL happiness. 🥰🥰🥰
must add book to library..I like character building , environment setup and background explanation. most importantly I like Lucas
Love the book! I have followed it since the beginning and couldn't be more satisfied😍The characters and world building are truly incredible! A must read for sure!!
Rosalind and Lucas Rothley's love story is worthy to remember for a very long time. Their love for each other is still real in this world. It's a fantasy book but relatable characters in the real world like the power hungry Ena Thun, or the hypocrite Martin Lux, the arrogant yet caring Lachlan, dog-cat friendship of Valentin and Elias, the ever loyal/trustworthy Denys, Huig and Magda. Thank you Author Mitch for the opportunity to read your Book. The money I bought chapters for advance reading is worth it. More power and God bless.
it keeps on edge, anticipating new pages. Overall ? Just amazing !!❤️❤️ Love it to the max. I'm looking forward to their side story .
It is absolutely on point, I love how your main characters aren't unnecessarily morally righteous in a world where only the strong survive.
I love a good revenge story and fantasy romance is a bonus! This novel has a bug cast of characters and great storylines. I am just 10 chapters in and I can’t put the novel down for a second!!
This was such a beautiful novel with many twists and turns and sweetness and revenge and at last true love! The ending has me in tears!
The world building is great, but it's not a romance. Slow burn is an under statement - 400 chapters and a single kiss.
One of my favorites story , I really enjoy to read this story so exciting and amazing to to read .My friend just add this in your Library you won't regret to read it until the end......❤️❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰❤️👌🌺👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I just came across this novel accidentally and gave it a go. I was amazed to have found a gem from this book. i love how the author minds work to create such characters and story line. its hard not to read the next page every single time. im loving the story and im falling inlove with Lucas character and commending Rosie's character as well. i hope their romance will develop sooner than later i just hope this story will not drag too long and focus on the main characters journey together. i have definitely added B.Mitchylle as one of my few fave authors in this platform. you have an amazing mind. keep it up hun 🥰😍
I've read all the free chapters of this book and what i got from it all , is that this book is entertaining but also very lacking. First, the pros : - The characters' interactions are good. -The MI is funny yet mysterious. - The plot is interesting and it seems to promise more than what was said in the synopsis. - The pace is nor quick nor slow . -The fl makes good use of her future knowledges. - The author's updates are rather constant and the writing is ok. Then, the cons : - The Fl was poorly designed. First, her relationship with her past-timeline husband. I know she's been hurt by him. But why is it that it isn't shown? What i mean is that the author only tells us that she wants revenge yet the fl's lack of negative feelings makes us think otherwise.To truly believe in her thirst for revenge, we must feel that fl is emotionally invested in her revenge. And this goes through seeing her actions , reactions and negative feelings when she faces the architects of her downfall. But the author has done nothing of the sort. Moreover , the author could have created a contrast between Mc's past feelings and her present ones . After all, she used to love the man so much and only recently( just before she died in the past timeline) had she learnt that he had been cheating on her the whole time with her half-sister. So just how come she passed so quickly from love to hate ? And what hate ? She basically doesn't care about him( can someone pass so quickly from love to indifference; did she even really love him?)and only wants revenge on her half sister while that ex-husband of hers is as guilty as her. Second,the FI/ Mc is not that smart.Seriously, that chapter where she played dumb before another noble lady just to slap that lady's face wasn't satisfying . She was supposed to look smart but the way she chose to deal with things just made the whole face slapping underwhelming. If anything , Mc doesn't seem that smart(which is not a problem as long as the book doesn't force us to see her as a genius). Another problem i have with this FI (and with most of romance novels' Fls) is that apart from avenging herself , she doesn't have a goal nor any other motivation in life. lf i had to resume her personality, she would be a sympathetic and mysterious girl that would have been a good side character in another character's story , if not for the fact that she possesses two blessings. - The grammar is lacking. The first chapter was perfect( at least, i didn't spot any mistake or problem). Yet in the second chapter, all this care was nowhere to be seen. And the situation was the same with the other chapters.Overall, the errors aren't so much that they can deter one from reading the book. But still, they hinder the reading experience ( some paragraphs are strangely structured or some sentences are incomprehensible ). - The pay wall. If anything, the pay wall appears too quickly for me. Recently on this platform, authors start to lock chapters under the 50 chapters bar (and often , like with this book, under the 30 chapters bar) and i think , as a reader, that it's a bummer. First , with this little number of chapters , there is a greater chance to be disappointed , because we do not know the characters and the story enough. Second,the chapters are locked so quickly yet the quality of writing displayed by this author( and some others authors on this platform) is not that good. Plus, it gives the idea that authors are only interested in readers' money and do not care about producing a quality content. All in all, this book is a big disappointment and it sadens me even more that in this review section, no one has talked about what was good and what was bad about it but rather, just stated that it was amazing. Finally, author, i pray for your improvement and hope that my review wasn't too harsh.As for others author that might read this review, please think as a reader when you write. We know you have your difficulties but we have ours too. So please make quality content and we will gladly pay for more.
Not knocking the author but as a reader this story is pretty expensive especially if you just start reading it. Its a good story with interesting leads, some good sidekicks and other new characters with a fair amount of twists/mystery. Hence its addictive, thus I wont give spoilers. To appease my twinges of conscience, I have to call it an early Christmas present (a big one) and count myself lucky to be able to somewhat afford this. I do recommend others to read the novel, keep up the good work author.
I'm currently at chapter 215 and still our leads are not married! I mean wth is this they left for North and it literally took 100 or more than those chapters to reach north! I agree! the story must be interesting but i feel the author is stretching too much. as for Rosie's revenge there were not even more than 10 chapters in which she took revenge, I mean i agree she would slowly take care of them but it's tooo slow! i honestly felt that story diverts it's attention to ml and this doings!🤷 bro story is based on fl so she shld be the focus not ml! If you want to focus on ml change the novel's name as Lucas game!🙄 at some point it felt like fl is like a puppy following ml. she does things on her own but not much. They keep adding new plots and there's no need for that I think...... there's no one way to the story. they keep adding new characters, plots which i feel didn't need. the story itself is truly great. the character building, story narration, background details everything is awesome. But adding more and more plots doesn't help in story development. if you add everything once it would be a mess.It would be great if you'd add plot one by one and focus more on the fl side. Rest you are great❤️
Hello, I am going to shamelessly review my own novel. I included the map. It's too big but I am going to post something smaller soon. We are currently on ASTER EMPIRE. She will travel to the north very soon. This novel will focus on revenge and face slapping. It's a slowburn romance with a strong female lead. Thank you.
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