Sacred System : Deviant Dragon's Whispers

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slowpokeChaos

There are a few things to note for the new readers. 1) Though I have already planned a few key plot points and have an idea of the ending, for the majority of the story we will be together. So we all are in for many surprises. 2) I am still learning English so feel free to correct me if you see any error. It will also be my first time writing NSFW scenes. I'll still say that the quality of the writing is better than many novels I have read on wn. 3) The story may seem generic (and yes a few things are like that) but the world, the mysteries surrounding it, and the plot line are pretty complex so it will be a fun and challenging task mixing all of them. Overall, I'll do my best to give you all quality content. 4) I'll still provide you with the NSFW scenes animated media on discord. :) Though I'll answer all of your questions here, I still prefer using discord. You can find the link under the synopsis.

LV 4

XcrapttS

I feel that if you are still reading this review. Then you make alot of bad devisions. Why would you read this when there is a materpiece to read. Stop reading this GO AND OPEN THIS BOOK NOW.

LV 3

LazyAngel

A very interesting start. Even though the story barely started, there is great potential in it. The author is fleshing out the MC's character really well and is taking slow steps in creating the world. We still don't know much but nevertheless, I recommend it. keep up the good work, author.

LV 13

Ethel_Imaginations

The story is great honestly. The writing quality is top notch, no problem in breezing through the chaps despite the author being a non-native English speaker. As for the story itself... We get a system that is more human like and not robotic. A main character that is smart and a bit teen like, yet chad nonetheless. We also got introduced to a few female chars pretty quick along with a few intriguing points in the start regarding the start and stuff. It's a bundle of mysteries and lewd stuff which is a nice sweet cup of tea you wanna have to freshen up your morning. Much of the plot and world background is left to be discovered so I will give 3 points on that, other than that it's lovely. Keep up the good work!!

LV 13

K7RM4

there is something about the mc i just cant find myself to like but dislike instead i dont know if its beacuse hes uninterested in knowing all his stats and the possible powers this world has like when he says he only wants to see his strength and he doesn't care about energy like you're in a new world shouldn't you use everything to your advantage and figure the type of situation your are in? the actual situation not you just sitting in a hospital like what is energy the system is talking about? can you use it? i just don't like or understand how mc can be satisfied not knowing as much as he can about his current situation. That disinterest in the beginning chapters just makes me uninterested to continue reading cause it makes me wonder if he would ignore things like this in the future and how detrimental it would be to him in the future from my understanding the system is bounded to the body which makes no sense cause systems are usually bounded to the soul in the novels i usually read but I can't think of it being transferred to hunt in any other method unless the system was given to chase after hunt souls took over i can understand doing a different approach but its kinda confusing to me. In the first chapter when mc reincarnated it said nothing about him fusing/absorbing/consuming Ethan Chase's soul so how can there be a remnant will when a body is just a shell and a soul is what controls it that just makes no sense Why is MC miving like a dumb virgin when step mother was introduced not even thinking properly and i also dont like how the system was not made for hunt hut for chase i gave the rating i did beacuse thats how i am feeling rn after giving it a second try Despite all i said still give it a try you just my find the perfect novel for you as everyone is different and has different opinions and preferences (i found no grammatical errors and author writing seems fluid and easy to read to me

LV 2

VillainousMC

A book with a promising story and catchy synopsis. Interesting and unique plot and likeable main character. The grammar and reading flow were also good to read, am curious to see what will happen next and how fast will the author update?

LV 3

Garessta

The start is slow, but the intrigue is here, and the time is spent on character development and stuff like that. Very nice writing style, btw, 5 stars. There's some humor, too, I like that. Overall I can't say much about this novel except that it's a solid system story. I'd personally move the exposition somewhat farther from the start and make it more... action-ny? Idk. But yeah, action is solely missing in the first chaps.

LV 1

BishopsNemesis

This review has been written based on the first 5 chapters of the novel. I highly recommend reading this novel since it is written by non other than Chaos himself. Writing Quality: The writing quality in the first five chapters seems reasonably good. The author has effectively established the main character, Ethan Chase, and his inner agitation and desires. The writing is clear and straightforward, and the author does an incredible job of describing the setting and characters in detail. SlowpokeChaos is a fantastic author as evident to this. World Building: The idea of triggering memories through specific events adds depth to the plot and creates a potential for pretty lovely character development. The details provided on the system are intriguing and leave room for further exploration. The system's user-friendly nature is a nice touch and makes it easier for the reader to understand the plot. The fact that the system can answer questions based on the protagonist's intentions is a clever addition and adds complexity to worldbuilding. The world building in the novel has potential and is sure to keep the reader engaged. The combination of reincarnation and a memory-navigating system is unique and sets the stage for a fascinating story. Character Development: Ethan is driven by his desires and willing to do anything to get what he wants. However, as he lies on the rooftop and reflects on his life, I see the weight of his regrets and the emptiness that comes with them. This is a significant development as it shows that Ethan is starting to realise the consequences of his actions and the pain he has caused others. I started to see a change in Ethan's perspective as he was reincarnated into his current body. He needs clarification initially about his new life and the memories that come with it. However, as he interacts with the system, Ethan becomes more accepting of his new reality and the information that is revealed to him. This is a crucial development as it shows that Ethan is becoming more open-minded and willing to explore new possibilities. One more thing, Ethan's desire for revenge is a driving point throughout the first five chapters. This aspect of his personality is complicated and multi-faceted, providing a more in-depth understanding of Ethan's inspirations and what drives him. This also delivers an excellent opportunity for the author to delve into Ethan's character development as the story progresses. I'm waiting for the day that Ethan start to break hearts left and right.

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Tzakar

Keep up the good work ! You already know what I think of your work since I had the privilege of reading the first few chapters in advance !

LV 2

NyxReveuse

I can't rate below 5 since I enjoyed the chapters a little too much xD Writing Quality: Couldn't spot a single grammar mistake, and no problem in reading or understanding the words and paragraphs. Great job Author 😅 Story Development: It's not too fast or too slow, perfect speed. It didn't get boring either since a cliffhanger made my curiosity rise and well, the system was one of the best parts 🤣😂 Character design and World: The World hasn't been explored in detail THAT much so can't say much about it for now but the character design is quite awesome. The physical descriptions and stuff and the MC isn't one of those thirsty people since that gets boring sooner or later 😅🤣 Overall, 5/5 for everything, all the best Author~ Can't wait to read further on 🤩