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Okay, now you got me intrigued. A parallel world of ours and livestreaming actual pokemon for the people to enjoy? This will actually may lead to really funny moments like livestream comments about certain things (Pog). Or great emotional beats that may gain audience sympathy as they too have a heart. Oh and memes, don't forget the average stream watcher can and will clip any embarrassing or cool moment to spread it throughout the internet like a disease. This could be interesting as the writer has to write both MC and audience reacting to the pokemon world. I will support this as this has great potential. As for you writer I have a bit of advice, you can take it or leave it as you wish. First off don't make the MC overpowered. Make him fail at times, he is only human and is prone to make mistakes like any average guy, this will make the MC to grow and find advantages in his unique situation being a streamer and trainer. Also give benefits in the real world like owning a pokemon at his house/apartment so the transition between regular world and pokemon world will be less jarring and more cohesive to the narrative. Not an overpowered one, as stated before the pokemon needs to grow too. And last but not least, just have fun with it! This is an unique take on the isekai trope and is practically set up for brilliant scenes based on how viewers act and how sarcastic yet brutally honest they can be. But of course just focus on the MC and only let the chat come in when you deem necessary, as it will be annoying to constantly read comments on everything to react to. That's all I can give along with my full hearted support, good luck! 👍
Author is really good. I'm currently reading 2 or 3 of their stories and they have great plots and have me cackling with how funny some are. Keep up the great work.
Okay, now you got me intrigued. A parallel world of ours and livestreaming actual pokemon for the people to enjoy? This will actually may lead to really funny moments like livestream comments about certain things (Pog). Or great emotional beats that may gain audience sympathy as they too have a heart. Oh and memes, don't forget the average stream watcher can and will clip any embarrassing or cool moment to spread it throughout the internet like a disease. This could be interesting as the writer has to write both MC and audience reacting to the pokemon world. I will support this as this has great potential. As for you writer I have a bit of advice, you can take it or leave it as you wish. First off don't make the MC overpowered. Make him fail at times, he is only human and is prone to make mistakes like any average guy, this will make the MC to grow and find advantages in his unique situation being a streamer and trainer. Also give benefits in the real world like owning a pokemon at his house/apartment so the transition between regular world and pokemon world will be less jarring and more cohesive to the narrative. Not an overpowered one, as stated before the pokemon needs to grow too. And last but not least, just have fun with it! This is an unique take on the isekai trope and is practically set up for brilliant scenes based on how viewers act and how sarcastic yet brutally honest they can be. But of course just focus on the MC and only let the chat come in when you deem necessary, as it will be annoying to constantly read comments on everything to react to. That's all I can give along with my full hearted support, good luck! 👍
Author is really good. I'm currently reading 2 or 3 of their stories and they have great plots and have me cackling with how funny some are. Keep up the great work.