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very interesting fan fic .in this app every 2 novel is harem and mindless fighting or milking the good novel .this novel is gem .if you want some good story with great writing you should read this. only problem is chapter is low or thats why chapter are good but i hope author write more chapter and fast .🙏😁
This story become my favorite, everything is so good (I'm in chapter 30 currently), the only thing that I'm not sure about is the love interest. I hope it's not gonna be his mom.. ( a lot of fanfics do this kind of love interest ). The author is really good at writing it's not even funny. This is the greatest Mcu x Hp fanfic ever (:
This story is pretty awesome , I like the way Lilly's protection worked , their story makes me a little uncomfortable but nothing that I could not get used to , I hope the body he will make for Lily won't look like him, and that he won't tell people that technically it's his mother. In short, I find the chapters too short, the mutant power of Harry is OP I hate Harry meeting Dumbledore to remove the idea that Harry is Tom and watch him struggle on HP who killed these loved ones alone and that he is indifferent to him . Can't wait to read more
Look, do yourself a favor and read this. Dont like crossovers? It is worth it. Harry too evil? It is worth it. Dont like too much AU? It is worth it. Trust me, when you get to ch110 you will see...
I’m loving the story but I was wondering if the hp side of the story is ending any time soon. ❔❔❔❔❔❔❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Since I finished chapter 1 I promised myself to make a review but the story was soooo good that Only after reaching almost chapter 80 I could comvince myself to stop reading lol ghe writing quality is phenomenal, the only imperfections that we reader may find are some small typos and it is far from being a frequent thing. As far as the plot is concerned, well He is mashing the hp and Mcu universe in a very natural and almost seamless way; he is covering all the plotholes and for all I mean even the ones of the canon Hp story. In short Mr.Author is absolutely awesome and among the best fanfic writers both for his grammar and his ability to create "airtight" plots. The character's development is gradual and consistent. The characters ( even the ocs) are fleshed out masterfully. SO IT IS WORTH BEING READ, even for people who does not like harem stories (here the harem is small, is not banal and I have no doubt it will be created in a very nice way)
Absolutely phenomenal, the characters feel real and the mcu introduction isn’ jarring
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I like the story 😇 but I want more fights in the story 👊👊, stories progress is great but the mc need more fight and kills because I like fight
A very good and interesting HPxMCU fanfic! I especially like the fact that it isn't the common and somewhat boring Hogwarts storyline!
It's pretty good. It started out very good, but after Harry awakened his x-gene it starts going downhill a little. He becomes too OP and it's as if everything's being handed to him on a silver platter. On top of that there's the introduction of the Ancient One, which seems to always be the point in mcu fanfics when they start to go downhill. I think it's the fact that she can see the future? it kinda takes the immersion out of it. There's a reason most fantasy literature depicts prophets' visions as very vague and hard to understand; because a character knowing every detail of the future takes all the fun out of the story. Anyways, not bad, but it starts to become very cliché while also not including any of the canon HP characters we all know and love.
Is a AU Harry Potter universe/Marvel and the main point ..... has a harem and a goooood plot [img=More pls] 😁👍
Perfect work! I have no words to describe this great work! Greatly deserves more than 5 🌟 if it were up to me. I hope you continue this work, with at least 1 chapter a day.
Easy 5 / 5 Have to admit this is perhaps one of the best HP fanfics I have read. There are numerous good reviews already so no need to repeat it all. There are some things that I have a few problems / doubts with, so don't read if you don't want to get spoilered. The sheer volume of Rituals is a bit of a stretch. It is interesting but he keeps on spamming those rituals but never fights anyone besides sparring with his "Guardian". It feels weird to keep improving his overall powers but never create a chance where he actually uses it. The MCU part.... There are so many characters and it is beginning to feel a bit forced to introduce harry to them. The harry potter lore and characters are only "the tutorial" in terms on strength. Harry is already at a point where only Dumbledore / Voldemort are a slight challenge to him. It feels like him awakening his X gene made every HP character trivial. It would have been better to either wait for him to activate his X gene or change his power into a power that starts weak and slowly grows with him. Instead it pushed him way too much in terms of power. Anyway I only mentioned my doubts and the potential problems but overall I love this story and the only reason why I am even mentioning these things is because I really like everything else. Most other HP fanfics do not even deserve detailed analysis or criticism since they are way too childish for that.
Spoiler enthüllen I like the story, in the story you have MCU and Harry Potter world you are using only Harry Potter world, you need to increase the use of MCU
I rarely read HP fanfic but it is one of the best fic,I read this year, the author took the character development very seriously,so when you read the story you will feel that they are actual characters with personality not just some Cardboard characters,there is not much I can tell without spoilers but give it a read you will not regret it
Definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. Very good work, Mr. Author! . ……………………………………………………………………………………….,…,………….…………. ………..
Mr author hope you make this protagonist a bit smarter than the one of leviathan fic that guy was just plain weird no offence even with magnetism powers he never thought of using scientific knowledge to improve them later on they were hardly used. Also it would be better to keep mc decently strong the old novel hardly any sense of danger to it And you said presence of x gene (try fundamental force manipulation powers of franklin richards 😂) try something new rather than telekinesis and stuff maybe like one fanfic of hp I saw him having x gene which allows him to absorb all magical powers so a power complementing his magical side
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Thank you for the story! I hope that the MC will have a harem (including his mother, and this is not discussed))) I also hope that you will not forget the nonagic side of the world. I.e. I want to say that there are many interesting and useful things for MC that it can find there for its improvement and get new ideas. There are martial arts, medicine, psychology, mathematics, physics, programming, video games and fantasy stories (more ideas for new spells, for new uses of magic, alternative points of view on magic), etc. And we know he can make all of it, because it’s MC and magic can do everything)) Oh, I found an idea and it can be realized in some ways: A) MC can absorb theoretical knowledge while sleeping. B) MC can find famous people who are truly professionals of their business and assimilate their knowledge. C) MC can create clones (as in Naruto) and use them for its own research. D) MC can get multiple thought streams. E) ABCD (I would chose this way)). F) Your own realization. And wont forget about the Infinity Stones)) ...Eng is my 2nd language ... so I hope it was clear.
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Greatly enjoying the novel so far, as the character building is fantastic, the character interactions entertaining, and the world building done very well. I desperately hope this doesn’t get dropped, because that would be a massive shame due to the quality of the story and the enjoyment I have been getting out of it so far.
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very interesting fan fic .in this app every 2 novel is harem and mindless fighting or milking the good novel .this novel is gem .if you want some good story with great writing you should read this. only problem is chapter is low or thats why chapter are good but i hope author write more chapter and fast .🙏😁
This story become my favorite, everything is so good (I'm in chapter 30 currently), the only thing that I'm not sure about is the love interest. I hope it's not gonna be his mom.. ( a lot of fanfics do this kind of love interest ). The author is really good at writing it's not even funny. This is the greatest Mcu x Hp fanfic ever (:
This story is pretty awesome , I like the way Lilly's protection worked , their story makes me a little uncomfortable but nothing that I could not get used to , I hope the body he will make for Lily won't look like him, and that he won't tell people that technically it's his mother. In short, I find the chapters too short, the mutant power of Harry is OP I hate Harry meeting Dumbledore to remove the idea that Harry is Tom and watch him struggle on HP who killed these loved ones alone and that he is indifferent to him . Can't wait to read more
Look, do yourself a favor and read this. Dont like crossovers? It is worth it. Harry too evil? It is worth it. Dont like too much AU? It is worth it. Trust me, when you get to ch110 you will see...
I’m loving the story but I was wondering if the hp side of the story is ending any time soon. ❔❔❔❔❔❔❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Since I finished chapter 1 I promised myself to make a review but the story was soooo good that Only after reaching almost chapter 80 I could comvince myself to stop reading lol ghe writing quality is phenomenal, the only imperfections that we reader may find are some small typos and it is far from being a frequent thing. As far as the plot is concerned, well He is mashing the hp and Mcu universe in a very natural and almost seamless way; he is covering all the plotholes and for all I mean even the ones of the canon Hp story. In short Mr.Author is absolutely awesome and among the best fanfic writers both for his grammar and his ability to create "airtight" plots. The character's development is gradual and consistent. The characters ( even the ocs) are fleshed out masterfully. SO IT IS WORTH BEING READ, even for people who does not like harem stories (here the harem is small, is not banal and I have no doubt it will be created in a very nice way)
Absolutely phenomenal, the characters feel real and the mcu introduction isn’ jarring
Hope you continue writing this story....,.............................................................................................................................
I like the story 😇 but I want more fights in the story 👊👊, stories progress is great but the mc need more fight and kills because I like fight
A very good and interesting HPxMCU fanfic! I especially like the fact that it isn't the common and somewhat boring Hogwarts storyline!
It's pretty good. It started out very good, but after Harry awakened his x-gene it starts going downhill a little. He becomes too OP and it's as if everything's being handed to him on a silver platter. On top of that there's the introduction of the Ancient One, which seems to always be the point in mcu fanfics when they start to go downhill. I think it's the fact that she can see the future? it kinda takes the immersion out of it. There's a reason most fantasy literature depicts prophets' visions as very vague and hard to understand; because a character knowing every detail of the future takes all the fun out of the story. Anyways, not bad, but it starts to become very cliché while also not including any of the canon HP characters we all know and love.
Is a AU Harry Potter universe/Marvel and the main point ..... has a harem and a goooood plot [img=More pls] 😁👍
Perfect work! I have no words to describe this great work! Greatly deserves more than 5 🌟 if it were up to me. I hope you continue this work, with at least 1 chapter a day.
Easy 5 / 5 Have to admit this is perhaps one of the best HP fanfics I have read. There are numerous good reviews already so no need to repeat it all. There are some things that I have a few problems / doubts with, so don't read if you don't want to get spoilered. The sheer volume of Rituals is a bit of a stretch. It is interesting but he keeps on spamming those rituals but never fights anyone besides sparring with his "Guardian". It feels weird to keep improving his overall powers but never create a chance where he actually uses it. The MCU part.... There are so many characters and it is beginning to feel a bit forced to introduce harry to them. The harry potter lore and characters are only "the tutorial" in terms on strength. Harry is already at a point where only Dumbledore / Voldemort are a slight challenge to him. It feels like him awakening his X gene made every HP character trivial. It would have been better to either wait for him to activate his X gene or change his power into a power that starts weak and slowly grows with him. Instead it pushed him way too much in terms of power. Anyway I only mentioned my doubts and the potential problems but overall I love this story and the only reason why I am even mentioning these things is because I really like everything else. Most other HP fanfics do not even deserve detailed analysis or criticism since they are way too childish for that.
Spoiler enthüllen I like the story, in the story you have MCU and Harry Potter world you are using only Harry Potter world, you need to increase the use of MCU
I rarely read HP fanfic but it is one of the best fic,I read this year, the author took the character development very seriously,so when you read the story you will feel that they are actual characters with personality not just some Cardboard characters,there is not much I can tell without spoilers but give it a read you will not regret it
Definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. Very good work, Mr. Author! . ……………………………………………………………………………………….,…,………….…………. ………..
Mr author hope you make this protagonist a bit smarter than the one of leviathan fic that guy was just plain weird no offence even with magnetism powers he never thought of using scientific knowledge to improve them later on they were hardly used. Also it would be better to keep mc decently strong the old novel hardly any sense of danger to it And you said presence of x gene (try fundamental force manipulation powers of franklin richards 😂) try something new rather than telekinesis and stuff maybe like one fanfic of hp I saw him having x gene which allows him to absorb all magical powers so a power complementing his magical side
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Thank you for the story! I hope that the MC will have a harem (including his mother, and this is not discussed))) I also hope that you will not forget the nonagic side of the world. I.e. I want to say that there are many interesting and useful things for MC that it can find there for its improvement and get new ideas. There are martial arts, medicine, psychology, mathematics, physics, programming, video games and fantasy stories (more ideas for new spells, for new uses of magic, alternative points of view on magic), etc. And we know he can make all of it, because it’s MC and magic can do everything)) Oh, I found an idea and it can be realized in some ways: A) MC can absorb theoretical knowledge while sleeping. B) MC can find famous people who are truly professionals of their business and assimilate their knowledge. C) MC can create clones (as in Naruto) and use them for its own research. D) MC can get multiple thought streams. E) ABCD (I would chose this way)). F) Your own realization. And wont forget about the Infinity Stones)) ...Eng is my 2nd language ... so I hope it was clear.
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Greatly enjoying the novel so far, as the character building is fantastic, the character interactions entertaining, and the world building done very well. I desperately hope this doesn’t get dropped, because that would be a massive shame due to the quality of the story and the enjoyment I have been getting out of it so far.