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Bro I rarely write a review on this site, but a indian with sports system with a hope of many chapters is the only reason I write this. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF INDIA I CANT SEE ANOTHER CHINESE FOORBALL SYSTEM FIC AGAIN. COMPLETE THIS🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👁👁👁
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As a resident of odisha and football fan full support to you. Very interesting take on it. Love the story and wish you keep on updating it. ...............................
I love it ;) good job 👍////////////😚😙😙🥰😇😚😚☺️😚😚😙😚😚😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙🥲😙🥲🥲🥲😍😍🥰😍😋🥲🥲🤗🤑☺️😗😘🙃😜😗☺️😊😇😇😊😉🫠🙃😘🙃😃🫠🫠🥲🥲🥲🤗🤗🥲🫠🤗🫠🥲😉😉🫠😉🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🤗🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🤗🫠🤗🤗🤑🤑😚👍😅😚🤑👍😅🥹🥹🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🙅♂️🙅♂️🤯😷🤭🎂🤭🤌🤌👌❤️🙅♂️🤯🤭🤌👌👌🤌😷🤯🤯
Author, will you exactly make it look like the original? First Juventus and then after 5 trophies, will you send Rock to Liverpool? Or will you make your own adjustments to the plot? I'm sorry if I didn't explain myself clearly, I'm Kazakh and just used Google Translate, since English is not my native language
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Writing Quality: Its an amazing story, no grammar issues that is obvious from reading it. The premise of the story is about an Indian Football/Soccer player who was kicked out of the Indian National Team and then he got a system that grants him the ability of past football players. But it might sounds boring but it isn't, the author approaches this and turns it into something wonderful. It makes it seem like you are the MC himself with how he approaches stuff such as contracts and business deals as a footballer. My only concern is how he writes it almost as if it is a Wuxia novel with some of the dialogue, which annoys me at times. But it can be passable I guess. Story Development: The pacing of the story isn't too fast and not too slow, its progresses steadily as it should with a football novel, perfect pacing almost and how the business side of football is handled is accurate and I enjoy every second of reading it. How he progresses as a character really resonates with me also. Overall a flushed out character. Character Design: Basically real life footballers and people almost. The MC is of course fictional and there isn't a picture of our MC but that is fine. Updating Stability: It updates once a day, so it is consistent in updates but when there isn't an update there will be one in a few weeks so it updates pretty well. World Background: The world background is just football in real life almost. It takes place in 2015 to 2016 so far and I hope we can see more. Hope this review help you venture into the novel, and I hope you have a great reading.
firstly, thank you, author, secondly i just found out ronaldo has over half a billion followers on Instagram like WOW, BUT MESSI HAS THE MOST LIKED PIC, it's a picture of him holding a 🏆
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Excellent novel lookin for more chapters and rocky life on football an looking harem with Adriana lima, mayanti langer and taylor swift and the future life of becoming a billionaire
Definitely for the football fans There are a lot of terms that you can't understand if you're not into fotball and the author doesn't even bother to explain them
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There are some words that make it sound like a Chinese story; However, the writing quality is good and I could read it without problems. The protagonist, an 18-year-old man, has a "system" that helps to improve in soccer (ball foot). He is currently playing in a small Premier League team in England, at the moment... The story is a bit slow.
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nice translation really apriciete the effort especially the removing of more racially motivateted dialog --------------------------------
Can you do special Chapters? Like interact with fans on Instagram or Twitter. Or give him a endorsement of Streaming platform such as "Youtube" Or "Twitch". since mc already have an endorsement with Free Fire. Broadcast Mc playing "Free Fire" game with his Fans. It will also make sense Why Free Fire will be popular. In chinese novel fans just buy everything mc sponsor that's just a stupid thing. This changes will bring us more enjoyment. If not it will just be boring because Mc will only play football matches again and again.
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As a Asian and Nepali, I just hope that the quote you wrote for other characters to say will not be "Yellow Monkey" or "Brown monkey". I also hope that you will make mc participate in the World Cup in any diffrent country team you like. PLEASE don't make something like those chinese faloo novel where MC is brainwashing us (READER) with his famous quote "I will not join any country for the world cup because I am From great china" Thats just nonsense.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Love this edited translation. The chinese version is just to hard to read with mtl. More release please 🤩🤩🤩🤩 ..............................................
I read the mtl version of this. It was the china national team in there. Good novel overall btw
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Good sport novel please continue and stay consistent with the release ................... Mgtyyyyyyy] ghiii888iiugffxxxxgggghhhhuuuiiiiihggyyyyggjjbbbio bjjobbg gggujkkbbbhjkkcchjiioojj
Man please continue writing this fic please don't stop your work on this book it's getting interesting..... anyways thanks for the fic...
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Bro I rarely write a review on this site, but a indian with sports system with a hope of many chapters is the only reason I write this. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF INDIA I CANT SEE ANOTHER CHINESE FOORBALL SYSTEM FIC AGAIN. COMPLETE THIS🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👁👁👁
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As a resident of odisha and football fan full support to you. Very interesting take on it. Love the story and wish you keep on updating it. ...............................
I love it ;) good job 👍////////////😚😙😙🥰😇😚😚☺️😚😚😙😚😚😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙🥲😙🥲🥲🥲😍😍🥰😍😋🥲🥲🤗🤑☺️😗😘🙃😜😗☺️😊😇😇😊😉🫠🙃😘🙃😃🫠🫠🥲🥲🥲🤗🤗🥲🫠🤗🫠🥲😉😉🫠😉🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🤗🤑🤑🤑🤑🤑👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🤗🫠🤗🤗🤑🤑😚👍😅😚🤑👍😅🥹🥹🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️🙅♂️🙅♂️🤯😷🤭🎂🤭🤌🤌👌❤️🙅♂️🤯🤭🤌👌👌🤌😷🤯🤯
Author, will you exactly make it look like the original? First Juventus and then after 5 trophies, will you send Rock to Liverpool? Or will you make your own adjustments to the plot? I'm sorry if I didn't explain myself clearly, I'm Kazakh and just used Google Translate, since English is not my native language
Spoiler enthüllen Writing Quality: Its an amazing story, no grammar issues that is obvious from reading it. The premise of the story is about an Indian Football/Soccer player who was kicked out of the Indian National Team and then he got a system that grants him the ability of past football players. But it might sounds boring but it isn't, the author approaches this and turns it into something wonderful. It makes it seem like you are the MC himself with how he approaches stuff such as contracts and business deals as a footballer. My only concern is how he writes it almost as if it is a Wuxia novel with some of the dialogue, which annoys me at times. But it can be passable I guess. Story Development: The pacing of the story isn't too fast and not too slow, its progresses steadily as it should with a football novel, perfect pacing almost and how the business side of football is handled is accurate and I enjoy every second of reading it. How he progresses as a character really resonates with me also. Overall a flushed out character. Character Design: Basically real life footballers and people almost. The MC is of course fictional and there isn't a picture of our MC but that is fine. Updating Stability: It updates once a day, so it is consistent in updates but when there isn't an update there will be one in a few weeks so it updates pretty well. World Background: The world background is just football in real life almost. It takes place in 2015 to 2016 so far and I hope we can see more. Hope this review help you venture into the novel, and I hope you have a great reading.
firstly, thank you, author, secondly i just found out ronaldo has over half a billion followers on Instagram like WOW, BUT MESSI HAS THE MOST LIKED PIC, it's a picture of him holding a 🏆
Amazing! Atleast author didn't completely copy paste. Nationalism has ceased to exist here. Wonderful novel. Please continue.. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Excellent novel lookin for more chapters and rocky life on football an looking harem with Adriana lima, mayanti langer and taylor swift and the future life of becoming a billionaire
Definitely for the football fans There are a lot of terms that you can't understand if you're not into fotball and the author doesn't even bother to explain them
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
There are some words that make it sound like a Chinese story; However, the writing quality is good and I could read it without problems. The protagonist, an 18-year-old man, has a "system" that helps to improve in soccer (ball foot). He is currently playing in a small Premier League team in England, at the moment... The story is a bit slow.
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nice translation really apriciete the effort especially the removing of more racially motivateted dialog --------------------------------
Can you do special Chapters? Like interact with fans on Instagram or Twitter. Or give him a endorsement of Streaming platform such as "Youtube" Or "Twitch". since mc already have an endorsement with Free Fire. Broadcast Mc playing "Free Fire" game with his Fans. It will also make sense Why Free Fire will be popular. In chinese novel fans just buy everything mc sponsor that's just a stupid thing. This changes will bring us more enjoyment. If not it will just be boring because Mc will only play football matches again and again.
Boooooooóooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Kakakakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkakakak Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho Ronaldinho
As a Asian and Nepali, I just hope that the quote you wrote for other characters to say will not be "Yellow Monkey" or "Brown monkey". I also hope that you will make mc participate in the World Cup in any diffrent country team you like. PLEASE don't make something like those chinese faloo novel where MC is brainwashing us (READER) with his famous quote "I will not join any country for the world cup because I am From great china" Thats just nonsense.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Love this edited translation. The chinese version is just to hard to read with mtl. More release please 🤩🤩🤩🤩 ..............................................
I read the mtl version of this. It was the china national team in there. Good novel overall btw
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Good sport novel please continue and stay consistent with the release ................... Mgtyyyyyyy] ghiii888iiugffxxxxgggghhhhuuuiiiiihggyyyyggjjbbbio bjjobbg gggujkkbbbhjkkcchjiioojj
Man please continue writing this fic please don't stop your work on this book it's getting interesting..... anyways thanks for the fic...
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interesting characters and world background and good plot