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Two good wishes, and a third one that sends this ff to the trash from chapter 1... The story progresses as one would think after reading the third wish, which in my opinion I don't like, between preferring this and a ff that I hate the teacher, I prefer not to read any, because it is so difficult to get out of the framework of the pjs of the original story, I would have preferred that he be orphaned in some village and that little by little he knows the pjs of the original story, as for the polygamy, a completely born rubbish from a perverted author nothing more.
Well, let's start with his wishes. His first 2 wishes were extremely smart since he will fuse his spirit soul to get an overpowered one and choosing techniques is really smart. But his third wish made me want to drop the novel Instantly but i continued to read and honestly i think the third wish is extremely smart from the author since this way he can literally add or remove new characters and events so it will make it more exciting unlike where we know the plot already. Keep up the updates and don't you dare to drop!
Two good wishes, and a third one that sends this ff to the trash from chapter 1... The story progresses as one would think after reading the third wish, which in my opinion I don't like, between preferring this and a ff that I hate the teacher, I prefer not to read any, because it is so difficult to get out of the framework of the pjs of the original story, I would have preferred that he be orphaned in some village and that little by little he knows the pjs of the original story, as for the polygamy, a completely born rubbish from a perverted author nothing more.
Well, let's start with his wishes. His first 2 wishes were extremely smart since he will fuse his spirit soul to get an overpowered one and choosing techniques is really smart. But his third wish made me want to drop the novel Instantly but i continued to read and honestly i think the third wish is extremely smart from the author since this way he can literally add or remove new characters and events so it will make it more exciting unlike where we know the plot already. Keep up the updates and don't you dare to drop!