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Clarification on the MC's power: He is sent to the world of Attack on Titan with two very interesting characteristics. 1.- He has the Mangekyou Sharingan. Note: Unlike using Chakra, the protagonist loses years of lifespan to make use of the Susanoo. Note2: He can summon any weapon characteristic of a Susanoo. The protagonist can make use of any form of the Susanoo without needing anything, only spending years of life. The eye abilities are balanced, having only the ability to improve vision and make use of any form of a Susanoo. 2.- To be able to make use of Chakra in small proportions. Note: Chakra energy can be used to improve his physique and increase his strength.
the beginning was long, which probably bored many readers, and the end came very quickly, it would be nice to pay attention to the outside world, but okay, as for me, the author is still one of the best fan fiction writers, so thank you for this novel (English is not my native language)
The story starts well and gets better as you read, the character development is also good and it is not a very long story, I recommend you to try it if you have nothing to read. It was a good read for me, I really liked it, I think you should read it if you have free time.
its a good read overall. arc after the training was a little fast paced but overall i liked it.
What should I say? It was so so... not amazing but okayish... first the power given was nerfed and that's cool but the applications of the ability were not explored... Since this is a translation, gender recognition is not done properly... ie. his/her confusion story development is also okayish... not that great...
A very wonderful story, I liked it, but I noticed that you rushed a little, as the end and his relationship with Sasha were just friends and then turned into love very quickly. But the story is amazing, like I said 👍👍
As of writing this review, this novel is finished and iam currently at chapter 20 (and still reading)........Lets start with the 2 "problems" within this FF. 1) The writing quality is on the low side, no offense it just is so if youre expecting average to/or high quality english its not for you.....2) If you ignore the errors in writing the OG characters potrayal is ok and mc is....well "ok" enough. One thing that I do like is the power system,susano/mangekyou sharingan in aot but everytime he uses it his years to live gets reduced (sheeessh) also he has chakra (duh) well honestly with just chakra it would be enough to survive and thrive in aot, solo it? hm not sure. Thats all for me. Other "issues" have already been stated by other reviews, go read em. (mc lacks a decisive goal/plan...well at least in 20 chapters none stated yet) (characters may be a bit...stupid? or veer off so far you cant chalk it up as "its fan fiction" from original source material in terms of acting)
This is either a very nice fanfic or I'm just craving an AoT fanfic 🤣. Jokes aside, I found it very hard to understand conversations and interactions between characters at some point due to the writing being extremely weird. I'm not going to give examples mainly because I'm too lazy to go back and search for them, but yeah, if you can ignore the little irritating things, then you can definitely enjoy this fanfic to a certain degree. I was close to dropping it near the end, but I stuck with it because I wanted to read the TWD fanfic, and this one is considered a prequel to it. Surprisingly, I found the ending of this one somewhat satisfying, so it wasn't a waste of time. The quality also gets a lot better at the end of the fanfic. Thank you for this fanfic ❤️. TLDR: If you are craving an AoT fanfic with a satisfying ending and can ignore irritating mistakes, then this fanfic is great; otherwise, if you aren't patient, then it might not be the best fit for you. Just give it a try.
Story had a lot of potential, the translation is pretty good but can be pretty goofy at times, to my entertainment. The last 10 chapters for me is what prevents this from being 4 stars. The ending wasn't my cup of tea and the whole ending arc to me seem kind of forced.
It was an incredibe story, the only thing keeping me from rating it 5 stars was the mix up of “he” and “she” through the story sometimes, but beyond that it was great. Especially the ending
I just finished the story. Author is in desperate need of a decent editor. The writing quality is bad at times to the point you might not be able to enjoy the story. Many Grammatical mistakes but I pushed through and actually quite enjoyed the story. I liked the the character. He is a dedicated man that tries to help humans inside the wall to the best of his abilities. Kind to his friends and cruel to his enemies. Although his name, Takashi, bugged me a little bit. I can't help it but to think that his ideals were so much more different than Eren's. He did help the humanity a lot but his actions were quite pointless. Eren desired to break free from the walls but with MC's actions, the only thing humans inside the walls accomplished were military strength. And since we are all aware of Eren's stubbornness and his desire for freedom, after MC's departure, everything should go back to the way in the canon was. But still it was quite the story and I enjoyed it. If anyone knows any good quality AOT fanfiction, I'd appreciate it if you tell me.
it's a good story, the power balancing of the MC's powers is a bit harsh but kinda reasonable. Just wish the pronouns and third/first person just the overall grammar is bad. For example, Levi talking about himself "I am... Levi ..... he is a captain...." like that then the pronouns confuses me "He is hiding some secrets. She will share it soon." it confuses me.
So far it's good, the used of susano is good for plot like suspecting him for being a titan like eren. And the sharingan eye is also useful during the used of 3Dmaneuver gear but the only thing i dont like is using ninjutsu in this world of titan
I like the stories kind of sad that the main character does end up dying at a young age.
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it was an amazing read that really got me interested. the pace picks up around 3 quarters of the way through. it feels a little rushed at the end and it never goes into any real romance until the end.
A great read, I'm happy with the ending (as sad as it was). I'll be going to start reading your TWD novel now, been looking forward to completing this one to start that one too, wonderful writing quality and a few funny mistakes here and there, keep improving, you're doing great!
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This is a great story and I recommend everyone othen than a few grammatical error I guarantee that is story u will enjoy.... it's abt an Mc who has great power and huge consequences for using that power and also give his all to better himself and protect others..... keep up the good work Author 👍
the most important thing is to be patient for 10-20 chapters, then it will get better. I was reading through a translator so grammar problems were minimal. I liked the story, it was a good read.
Honestly, the story concept has potential, but then again, the author is adding an anime superpower, and then 'balancing' the abilities for 'realism' is total BS. If you are adding anime power, don't destroy them for the sake of 'realism'. If you want to lower the Sharingan power, just use the concept of the seal. Unlock new abilities of Sharingan as MC levels up. So, it's not my cup of tea.
This is a good AOT fanfic but the writing quality needs to improve a bit as well as the fact the is a start of a multi world novel it needs a bit more thought about how the world can be connected.
No esta tan mal, el problema mas notorio que noto es que escribes algo y te contradices al parrafo siguiente, existe una perdida de logica en el desarrollo de los ch, lo segundo que noto hasta ahora, son las habilidades y el uso en accion, tanto el estado fisico como lo demas, ejemplo: corre 12 kilometros en 200 vueltas y luego se cansa con 3, si necesitas ayuda no me importaria ofrecerla
many people may feel dissatisfied with the way the MC uses his power, but I particularly loved it, it made the MC integrate into the world in a natural and not forced way. Just has a few small issues but other than that the story fantastic just fantastic.
It was good, the mc is overpowered but with equal consequences and had to work for his strength.
Could do better but I’m just glad he stuck through the story and finished it
cerita yang sangat bagus, walaupun diawal chapter membosankan. ya seperti latihan training 104 dkk, silahkan dibaca jika anda penikmat aot
Puta obra maestra, un aplauso para este maestro, 👏👏👏👏🍷🗿 .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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(This rating is after reading the full story) Without too many details.... It's not perfect but I enjoyed every chapter.. ...................................
Hello to all readers of this novel, the story is intended for the protagonist to have great power but great consequences to using it (this is a well developed story). I don't plan to write more than 300k words in this story so after the training arc comes the story straight to the main events. I have several chapters ahead of time in case I get a writer's block on publication, so for those who want to read more of this story you can visit my P_Treon; SrCuervo All the chapters are very large so I will most likely post one a day, thank you all for reading.
Clarification on the MC's power: He is sent to the world of Attack on Titan with two very interesting characteristics. 1.- He has the Mangekyou Sharingan. Note: Unlike using Chakra, the protagonist loses years of lifespan to make use of the Susanoo. Note2: He can summon any weapon characteristic of a Susanoo. The protagonist can make use of any form of the Susanoo without needing anything, only spending years of life. The eye abilities are balanced, having only the ability to improve vision and make use of any form of a Susanoo. 2.- To be able to make use of Chakra in small proportions. Note: Chakra energy can be used to improve his physique and increase his strength.
the beginning was long, which probably bored many readers, and the end came very quickly, it would be nice to pay attention to the outside world, but okay, as for me, the author is still one of the best fan fiction writers, so thank you for this novel (English is not my native language)
The story starts well and gets better as you read, the character development is also good and it is not a very long story, I recommend you to try it if you have nothing to read. It was a good read for me, I really liked it, I think you should read it if you have free time.
its a good read overall. arc after the training was a little fast paced but overall i liked it.
What should I say? It was so so... not amazing but okayish... first the power given was nerfed and that's cool but the applications of the ability were not explored... Since this is a translation, gender recognition is not done properly... ie. his/her confusion story development is also okayish... not that great...
A very wonderful story, I liked it, but I noticed that you rushed a little, as the end and his relationship with Sasha were just friends and then turned into love very quickly. But the story is amazing, like I said 👍👍
As of writing this review, this novel is finished and iam currently at chapter 20 (and still reading)........Lets start with the 2 "problems" within this FF. 1) The writing quality is on the low side, no offense it just is so if youre expecting average to/or high quality english its not for you.....2) If you ignore the errors in writing the OG characters potrayal is ok and mc is....well "ok" enough. One thing that I do like is the power system,susano/mangekyou sharingan in aot but everytime he uses it his years to live gets reduced (sheeessh) also he has chakra (duh) well honestly with just chakra it would be enough to survive and thrive in aot, solo it? hm not sure. Thats all for me. Other "issues" have already been stated by other reviews, go read em. (mc lacks a decisive goal/plan...well at least in 20 chapters none stated yet) (characters may be a bit...stupid? or veer off so far you cant chalk it up as "its fan fiction" from original source material in terms of acting)
This is either a very nice fanfic or I'm just craving an AoT fanfic 🤣. Jokes aside, I found it very hard to understand conversations and interactions between characters at some point due to the writing being extremely weird. I'm not going to give examples mainly because I'm too lazy to go back and search for them, but yeah, if you can ignore the little irritating things, then you can definitely enjoy this fanfic to a certain degree. I was close to dropping it near the end, but I stuck with it because I wanted to read the TWD fanfic, and this one is considered a prequel to it. Surprisingly, I found the ending of this one somewhat satisfying, so it wasn't a waste of time. The quality also gets a lot better at the end of the fanfic. Thank you for this fanfic ❤️. TLDR: If you are craving an AoT fanfic with a satisfying ending and can ignore irritating mistakes, then this fanfic is great; otherwise, if you aren't patient, then it might not be the best fit for you. Just give it a try.
Story had a lot of potential, the translation is pretty good but can be pretty goofy at times, to my entertainment. The last 10 chapters for me is what prevents this from being 4 stars. The ending wasn't my cup of tea and the whole ending arc to me seem kind of forced.
It was an incredibe story, the only thing keeping me from rating it 5 stars was the mix up of “he” and “she” through the story sometimes, but beyond that it was great. Especially the ending
I just finished the story. Author is in desperate need of a decent editor. The writing quality is bad at times to the point you might not be able to enjoy the story. Many Grammatical mistakes but I pushed through and actually quite enjoyed the story. I liked the the character. He is a dedicated man that tries to help humans inside the wall to the best of his abilities. Kind to his friends and cruel to his enemies. Although his name, Takashi, bugged me a little bit. I can't help it but to think that his ideals were so much more different than Eren's. He did help the humanity a lot but his actions were quite pointless. Eren desired to break free from the walls but with MC's actions, the only thing humans inside the walls accomplished were military strength. And since we are all aware of Eren's stubbornness and his desire for freedom, after MC's departure, everything should go back to the way in the canon was. But still it was quite the story and I enjoyed it. If anyone knows any good quality AOT fanfiction, I'd appreciate it if you tell me.
it's a good story, the power balancing of the MC's powers is a bit harsh but kinda reasonable. Just wish the pronouns and third/first person just the overall grammar is bad. For example, Levi talking about himself "I am... Levi ..... he is a captain...." like that then the pronouns confuses me "He is hiding some secrets. She will share it soon." it confuses me.
So far it's good, the used of susano is good for plot like suspecting him for being a titan like eren. And the sharingan eye is also useful during the used of 3Dmaneuver gear but the only thing i dont like is using ninjutsu in this world of titan
I like the stories kind of sad that the main character does end up dying at a young age.
Spoiler enthüllen it was an amazing read that really got me interested. the pace picks up around 3 quarters of the way through. it feels a little rushed at the end and it never goes into any real romance until the end.
A great read, I'm happy with the ending (as sad as it was). I'll be going to start reading your TWD novel now, been looking forward to completing this one to start that one too, wonderful writing quality and a few funny mistakes here and there, keep improving, you're doing great!
Spoiler enthüllen This is a great story and I recommend everyone othen than a few grammatical error I guarantee that is story u will enjoy.... it's abt an Mc who has great power and huge consequences for using that power and also give his all to better himself and protect others..... keep up the good work Author 👍
the most important thing is to be patient for 10-20 chapters, then it will get better. I was reading through a translator so grammar problems were minimal. I liked the story, it was a good read.
Honestly, the story concept has potential, but then again, the author is adding an anime superpower, and then 'balancing' the abilities for 'realism' is total BS. If you are adding anime power, don't destroy them for the sake of 'realism'. If you want to lower the Sharingan power, just use the concept of the seal. Unlock new abilities of Sharingan as MC levels up. So, it's not my cup of tea.
This is a good AOT fanfic but the writing quality needs to improve a bit as well as the fact the is a start of a multi world novel it needs a bit more thought about how the world can be connected.
No esta tan mal, el problema mas notorio que noto es que escribes algo y te contradices al parrafo siguiente, existe una perdida de logica en el desarrollo de los ch, lo segundo que noto hasta ahora, son las habilidades y el uso en accion, tanto el estado fisico como lo demas, ejemplo: corre 12 kilometros en 200 vueltas y luego se cansa con 3, si necesitas ayuda no me importaria ofrecerla
many people may feel dissatisfied with the way the MC uses his power, but I particularly loved it, it made the MC integrate into the world in a natural and not forced way. Just has a few small issues but other than that the story fantastic just fantastic.
It was good, the mc is overpowered but with equal consequences and had to work for his strength.
Could do better but I’m just glad he stuck through the story and finished it
cerita yang sangat bagus, walaupun diawal chapter membosankan. ya seperti latihan training 104 dkk, silahkan dibaca jika anda penikmat aot
Puta obra maestra, un aplauso para este maestro, 👏👏👏👏🍷🗿 .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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(This rating is after reading the full story) Without too many details.... It's not perfect but I enjoyed every chapter.. ...................................
Hello to all readers of this novel, the story is intended for the protagonist to have great power but great consequences to using it (this is a well developed story). I don't plan to write more than 300k words in this story so after the training arc comes the story straight to the main events. I have several chapters ahead of time in case I get a writer's block on publication, so for those who want to read more of this story you can visit my P_Treon; SrCuervo All the chapters are very large so I will most likely post one a day, thank you all for reading.