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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionThough I am writing this review at only 10 chapters released, this fan fic has the makings of one of the greatest Fate fics. The writing quality is too notch and the main character actually has a personality. While he does have some memories of the overall plot, there doesn’t seem to be a major emphasis on it. Things don’t seem to be rushed. My only complaint is that I cant get enough. Author more chapters!!
Literally 100% peak. The story, the Main Character's power development, the twists, the jokes, I really like this story. It's sad that it's discontinued.
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it's a good story, but it feels it does not take it seriously... enough. that's just my personal opinion.I like the protagonist jokes and how he has always a comeback, but nothing really changes him as a character through the entity of the 60 or so chapters that I read until I got bored.I understand him not having a clear goal, and being chaotic is maybe part of his character, but he truly feels "empty". he does have his moments, but that's it. one of his servants, the he... maybe cared about died, and the first thing told by one of the characters was "get over with it, it happened. learn with it mistake" but that's it. I don't know what I was expecting, maybe for him to while still joke be more serious for the stuff around him or maybe him putting more attention on his servants, but I was expecting something and nothing really happened.he is still the same as the beginning of the story, I just got bored after a while.maybe having some slices of life moments would have made it better? I don't know.the story is no bad, but not really my cup of tea.thanks anyways for the fun moments.
Good fic fate, but it seems dropfic because it was 7 months ago that the author last updated, so hesitant to read lol. Good fic fate, but it seems dropfic because it was 7 months ago that the author last updated, so hesitant to read lol.
The story is good (especially the humor), the author abandoned it, don't have hope, but it is still a novel that deserves to be remembered for how good it is.
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Amazing. I simply cannot describe the feelings I have for this fanfic. So I am currently having a mild Heart Attack, not knowing if the ff has ended or on a hiatus, or if the FF was actually a troll novel (some guy said it at the end chap that Dreizehnn was his troll account + on another work of this author "A Thousand Worlds").... (im coping if you didnt notice...)
The Chosha É Bahut Ahaṅkārī (Learn A Kababaang-loob Aakan Kibirli Panáthemá se) Está Spoiling କ 歷史 sthree kannukaalikal Seja sensata das próximas vezes que sei que n vai
Spoiler enthüllenIs this fanfic dead , or is it on hiatus .....................................................................................................................
Spoiler enthüllenGreat MC, Definitely Geat development, Great writing, (Imma leave the character design and World background since this is fantic) This is definitely one of the best fate fanfic i read with how you are good at creating an MC and plot development hope you continue this, Imma give this Platinum Approval
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Great story, The Mc has a unique and fun personality, he stays true to his character. The world building is Great, it goes into detail about the mysteries of the fate lore yet doesn't go into the overwhelming realm. The battles and power dynamics are on point. Only issue I found was some of the Mc decisions and their consequences but that's a matter of plot.
me encanta tu personaje...................................................................................................................................
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Has to be one of the best fate fanfics I've ever read, definitely in the top 5. It isn't a very serious story, but the plot and action is always great. If I had to describe this story it would be this: The absurdity of one punch man syrength translated to magic with a dash of seriousness.
"Authour you shining peice of Mf you created a master peice!!!How can a Human Brain can manage to imagine such impressive plot? You are no Human!!!! You are a God!! Yes you are are Writer God!! Authour no Dreizehnn- sama!!! Please continue thi -this Masterpiece for your Favorite Readers!!!! (*Fanatical Laugh*)
Writing quality top notch and it's easy to understand the format. Story Development and Character Design all I can way is unique in its way. The story flows like a music into my ears For me the MC is likeable even thought he acts like a rouge sometimes. The characters of your fanfic, you manage to get their personality performance perfect. Update Stability this is hard some of the chapters are good and other are short that's what I see or I'm just a very fast reader. The world background of your story is very informative and also good complex construct in the story it's very wonderful fanfic my friend. I'm not good at writing reviews my friend so I apologize for this,please don't get mad at this review you could erase it if you want. This all I have to say
15 Hours of roblox being down. I think i'm losing my mind. My whole body aches and my limbs are trembling. I feel my bones breaking and i'm in a straight panic attack because i have to go see the scary outside world and the tall green grass. I feel my organs degenerate and i'm losing power. Please, Roblox CEO, put your game back up. I'm dying and in endless eternal pain. I don't think i'm going to make it. THIS IS A GREAT FIC YO~!
I'm not good at doing reviews and my memory is not that good so please read this with a pinch of salt. This Fic is good, the author knows the lore and probably research the things he doesn't know to make sure what he's doing is inline with the lore of fate, the characters are good, Roman is an interesting character, he is a petty person but his patience is ungodly, i would have just k**led the people who annoy me for years if I were him, and the pace is pretty good, it makes me come check to it whenever I have the time, for me anyway. I don't know about the relationship/s, the author give a poll that is just a prank, but there are love interests though. So overall this is a great novel
I’ll be blunt about the book, It’s fantastic the man character Roman. Is the best part of this book I just love seeing how he reacts to what’s happening around him. Only sad I can’t get more chapters sooner.
Sooooo goooodddd, even though I am not a massive fun of fate, this is by far the best novel i have found. Please dont drop this author
Obligatory author review. Read it and tell me how it looks so I can decide. Good luck people. P.S: They need to get rid of this word count necessity.
Though I am writing this review at only 10 chapters released, this fan fic has the makings of one of the greatest Fate fics. The writing quality is too notch and the main character actually has a personality. While he does have some memories of the overall plot, there doesn’t seem to be a major emphasis on it. Things don’t seem to be rushed. My only complaint is that I cant get enough. Author more chapters!!
Literally 100% peak. The story, the Main Character's power development, the twists, the jokes, I really like this story. It's sad that it's discontinued.
SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT
it's a good story, but it feels it does not take it seriously... enough. that's just my personal opinion.I like the protagonist jokes and how he has always a comeback, but nothing really changes him as a character through the entity of the 60 or so chapters that I read until I got bored.I understand him not having a clear goal, and being chaotic is maybe part of his character, but he truly feels "empty". he does have his moments, but that's it. one of his servants, the he... maybe cared about died, and the first thing told by one of the characters was "get over with it, it happened. learn with it mistake" but that's it. I don't know what I was expecting, maybe for him to while still joke be more serious for the stuff around him or maybe him putting more attention on his servants, but I was expecting something and nothing really happened.he is still the same as the beginning of the story, I just got bored after a while.maybe having some slices of life moments would have made it better? I don't know.the story is no bad, but not really my cup of tea.thanks anyways for the fun moments.
Good fic fate, but it seems dropfic because it was 7 months ago that the author last updated, so hesitant to read lol. Good fic fate, but it seems dropfic because it was 7 months ago that the author last updated, so hesitant to read lol.
The story is good (especially the humor), the author abandoned it, don't have hope, but it is still a novel that deserves to be remembered for how good it is.
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Amazing. I simply cannot describe the feelings I have for this fanfic. So I am currently having a mild Heart Attack, not knowing if the ff has ended or on a hiatus, or if the FF was actually a troll novel (some guy said it at the end chap that Dreizehnn was his troll account + on another work of this author "A Thousand Worlds").... (im coping if you didnt notice...)
The Chosha É Bahut Ahaṅkārī (Learn A Kababaang-loob Aakan Kibirli Panáthemá se) Está Spoiling କ 歷史 sthree kannukaalikal Seja sensata das próximas vezes que sei que n vai
Spoiler enthüllenIs this fanfic dead , or is it on hiatus .....................................................................................................................
Spoiler enthüllenGreat MC, Definitely Geat development, Great writing, (Imma leave the character design and World background since this is fantic) This is definitely one of the best fate fanfic i read with how you are good at creating an MC and plot development hope you continue this, Imma give this Platinum Approval
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Great story, The Mc has a unique and fun personality, he stays true to his character. The world building is Great, it goes into detail about the mysteries of the fate lore yet doesn't go into the overwhelming realm. The battles and power dynamics are on point. Only issue I found was some of the Mc decisions and their consequences but that's a matter of plot.
me encanta tu personaje...................................................................................................................................
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Has to be one of the best fate fanfics I've ever read, definitely in the top 5. It isn't a very serious story, but the plot and action is always great. If I had to describe this story it would be this: The absurdity of one punch man syrength translated to magic with a dash of seriousness.
"Authour you shining peice of Mf you created a master peice!!!How can a Human Brain can manage to imagine such impressive plot? You are no Human!!!! You are a God!! Yes you are are Writer God!! Authour no Dreizehnn- sama!!! Please continue thi -this Masterpiece for your Favorite Readers!!!! (*Fanatical Laugh*)
Writing quality top notch and it's easy to understand the format. Story Development and Character Design all I can way is unique in its way. The story flows like a music into my ears For me the MC is likeable even thought he acts like a rouge sometimes. The characters of your fanfic, you manage to get their personality performance perfect. Update Stability this is hard some of the chapters are good and other are short that's what I see or I'm just a very fast reader. The world background of your story is very informative and also good complex construct in the story it's very wonderful fanfic my friend. I'm not good at writing reviews my friend so I apologize for this,please don't get mad at this review you could erase it if you want. This all I have to say
15 Hours of roblox being down. I think i'm losing my mind. My whole body aches and my limbs are trembling. I feel my bones breaking and i'm in a straight panic attack because i have to go see the scary outside world and the tall green grass. I feel my organs degenerate and i'm losing power. Please, Roblox CEO, put your game back up. I'm dying and in endless eternal pain. I don't think i'm going to make it. THIS IS A GREAT FIC YO~!
I'm not good at doing reviews and my memory is not that good so please read this with a pinch of salt. This Fic is good, the author knows the lore and probably research the things he doesn't know to make sure what he's doing is inline with the lore of fate, the characters are good, Roman is an interesting character, he is a petty person but his patience is ungodly, i would have just k**led the people who annoy me for years if I were him, and the pace is pretty good, it makes me come check to it whenever I have the time, for me anyway. I don't know about the relationship/s, the author give a poll that is just a prank, but there are love interests though. So overall this is a great novel
I’ll be blunt about the book, It’s fantastic the man character Roman. Is the best part of this book I just love seeing how he reacts to what’s happening around him. Only sad I can’t get more chapters sooner.
Sooooo goooodddd, even though I am not a massive fun of fate, this is by far the best novel i have found. Please dont drop this author
Obligatory author review. Read it and tell me how it looks so I can decide. Good luck people. P.S: They need to get rid of this word count necessity.