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Sorry for writing off topic. Can you change the cover picture? There is no mention in the works of the Aeon of Plenty from Honkai: Star Rail.
Domninant Mc ✅️Heck i dont even know why people considered yuri ntr tbh. Wasn't it considered a kink or something? Literally p○rn□ub and d○ujins do shi like that and people are not complaining... while people here do...
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Good idea, terrible execution. Very badly written, a collection of unrelated sentences written in terrible English with lots of grammatical errors.
[img=recommend][img=recommend]recommended if you like yuri in your harem[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is half hazard which is fine the author said they making it up as they go along but they aren’t keep details they have established striaght and that is not making it up as you go along that is just not giving a F which is bad
The story is horrible, nothing to do with the synopsis, the mc is useless who lets himself be handled by all, clearly it is a novel where women are in control, there is no perversion in seeing an mc being useless. The system is also useless, it would be reasonable for them to treat it that way because it doesn't have a system, but the author wanted to make a system novel and I didn't take advantage of it, it's more of a novel about the errand boy and his owners, literally rubbish.
so many grammatical errors that it gives of the vibe that the author doesn't care....i can understand some mistakes as other authors make them as well but atleast they try to correct them and learn from them, but i m not seeing any signs of improvement here.
This is a terrible novel in my opinion. The writing is completely wrong, the author messes up so often that you don't even question it after a few chapters. But that's not even the worst part of it, there is no real story, I may have left a bit early but I think 20 chaps is enough to tell it's bad.
After reading a bit of this book, the synopsis is a clear lie, unless you're looking for a Beta C**k MC, don't read this story. MC is dragged arround by a bunch of nobodies, no information is given to him and his system punishes him for not doing as it says with no explanation. Trash Story.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Can't find a decent harem fic nowadays. Most harem fics say NO-NTR but when a girl does it to your harem it's ok, its not NTR. Am really curios if a girl just came and made out with your girl, you let her because she's a girl. How very hypocritical of people to hate NTR but when a girl cuckss you it's ok.
It's a shi ittt and nonsensical novel. Don't read it and author just hang yourself fir writing such poooop.
The writing and grammar are horrible amongst other things it’s like the without puts 0 effort into his writing and then just releases the chapter.
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Shouldn’t have expected much from a novel where the MC lets his harem members have romantic feelings for eachother. Good luck on writing this cuck trash, author. 👍
hints of yuri?? no thanks bro ............................................................................................,...............
-beta mc - dom female leads -simp mc -system slave - clueless mc ...... . . .... .. ... Do you still need more?..
mc made this unreadable for me ... seems like the author read a ntr novel and was like that's the perfect mc..L
main problem is the editing their is non so yah it's confusing to find out who's talking and when the system gives mission and so on that's the main problem for me and that's just at chapter 3 or so
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Sorry for writing off topic. Can you change the cover picture? There is no mention in the works of the Aeon of Plenty from Honkai: Star Rail.
Domninant Mc ✅️Heck i dont even know why people considered yuri ntr tbh. Wasn't it considered a kink or something? Literally p○rn□ub and d○ujins do shi like that and people are not complaining... while people here do...
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Good idea, terrible execution. Very badly written, a collection of unrelated sentences written in terrible English with lots of grammatical errors.
[img=recommend][img=recommend]recommended if you like yuri in your harem[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is half hazard which is fine the author said they making it up as they go along but they aren’t keep details they have established striaght and that is not making it up as you go along that is just not giving a F which is bad
The story is horrible, nothing to do with the synopsis, the mc is useless who lets himself be handled by all, clearly it is a novel where women are in control, there is no perversion in seeing an mc being useless. The system is also useless, it would be reasonable for them to treat it that way because it doesn't have a system, but the author wanted to make a system novel and I didn't take advantage of it, it's more of a novel about the errand boy and his owners, literally rubbish.
so many grammatical errors that it gives of the vibe that the author doesn't care....i can understand some mistakes as other authors make them as well but atleast they try to correct them and learn from them, but i m not seeing any signs of improvement here.
This is a terrible novel in my opinion. The writing is completely wrong, the author messes up so often that you don't even question it after a few chapters. But that's not even the worst part of it, there is no real story, I may have left a bit early but I think 20 chaps is enough to tell it's bad.
After reading a bit of this book, the synopsis is a clear lie, unless you're looking for a Beta C**k MC, don't read this story. MC is dragged arround by a bunch of nobodies, no information is given to him and his system punishes him for not doing as it says with no explanation. Trash Story.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Can't find a decent harem fic nowadays. Most harem fics say NO-NTR but when a girl does it to your harem it's ok, its not NTR. Am really curios if a girl just came and made out with your girl, you let her because she's a girl. How very hypocritical of people to hate NTR but when a girl cuckss you it's ok.
It's a shi ittt and nonsensical novel. Don't read it and author just hang yourself fir writing such poooop.
The writing and grammar are horrible amongst other things it’s like the without puts 0 effort into his writing and then just releases the chapter.
gotta give it to Kiana cover[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Shouldn’t have expected much from a novel where the MC lets his harem members have romantic feelings for eachother. Good luck on writing this cuck trash, author. 👍
hints of yuri?? no thanks bro ............................................................................................,...............
-beta mc - dom female leads -simp mc -system slave - clueless mc ...... . . .... .. ... Do you still need more?..
mc made this unreadable for me ... seems like the author read a ntr novel and was like that's the perfect mc..L
main problem is the editing their is non so yah it's confusing to find out who's talking and when the system gives mission and so on that's the main problem for me and that's just at chapter 3 or so
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I love that you used Yaoshi Aeon cover pic for this novel lol