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Haha! Great novel!!! Super good!!! Very amazing, read it!!! Hahaha!!!! Lame word count that I have to reach just to make this stupid review.
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FAnfic of the orginial gamer story are rare and it's cool to see one, this one is not very good. Honestly feels rush and just like the manwha, except the fact that the MC is more flirty than the original. Also the fact that the author gave himself 3 five star review is kinda lame.
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It's literary one of those fanfics an author makes just to get with their favorite female characters. there are so many red flags i have seen already up to chapter 5 that it's stupid
Come on everyone lets get me to 100,000 views and the to 1 million Also I'm gonna do another Reincarnation either on DxD or Martial Peak as Main Character or as an OC so you all decide also specify if you wish for System or No System
it will be hard since it has a lot of Korean history going on but you have my full support... keep it up
Its perfect... .... ........ ... .. ... . .... . .... ..... .. .. .... . ......... ...... ... .... ...... . ..................... .. .. .. .. .. .
Don't drop... Good basis, can improve though. Haven't seen a gamer fic with ji han self insert in a long time. Keep writing and it will improve both your thinking process and writing skills.
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I have posted the new chapter everyone and if you all dont mind can you rate this story as honestly as you wish
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Hi am the author I would like to know if anyone wants me to count this story
i always hated Jihan being a vegetarian... the dude has amazing women near him... The witch, the redhead martial arists, the sister of his friend and the daughter of the teacher..... i wonder if mc D is working properly
Haha! Great novel!!! Super good!!! Very amazing, read it!!! Hahaha!!!! Lame word count that I have to reach just to make this stupid review.
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FAnfic of the orginial gamer story are rare and it's cool to see one, this one is not very good. Honestly feels rush and just like the manwha, except the fact that the MC is more flirty than the original. Also the fact that the author gave himself 3 five star review is kinda lame.
Spoiler enthüllen It's literary one of those fanfics an author makes just to get with their favorite female characters. there are so many red flags i have seen already up to chapter 5 that it's stupid
Come on everyone lets get me to 100,000 views and the to 1 million Also I'm gonna do another Reincarnation either on DxD or Martial Peak as Main Character or as an OC so you all decide also specify if you wish for System or No System
it will be hard since it has a lot of Korean history going on but you have my full support... keep it up
Its perfect... .... ........ ... .. ... . .... . .... ..... .. .. .... . ......... ...... ... .... ...... . ..................... .. .. .. .. .. .
Don't drop... Good basis, can improve though. Haven't seen a gamer fic with ji han self insert in a long time. Keep writing and it will improve both your thinking process and writing skills.
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I have posted the new chapter everyone and if you all dont mind can you rate this story as honestly as you wish
So far I haven't seen any Gamer fanfiction like this so I hope that you will continue this story make it up to the very end you have my well wishes [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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Hi am the author I would like to know if anyone wants me to count this story
i always hated Jihan being a vegetarian... the dude has amazing women near him... The witch, the redhead martial arists, the sister of his friend and the daughter of the teacher..... i wonder if mc D is working properly