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hmm I'm not really good at writing revs but oh well. first of all writing quality is good an easy 5, the grammar and writing in this is better than most fanfics out there but it still has some typos tho very little but meh who doesn't make mistakes? story development is going good so far I like it and I'm very looking forward to future development especially he and Arthur's encounter. so easy 5 character design is superb man I don't know much about ayanokoji as I have only watched the anime but from there I can see that ayanokoji here is written pretty well, character interaction is also good and other characters aren't just abandoned they have uh... essence? idk I can't accurately describe it cuz I'm starving haha I've binge read this till morning anyways it has essence u know a properly built character not just some empty husk, the changing of different perspective (pov) is also good so overall 5. updating stability hmm idk I just binge it this day but seeing the update date from the last chaps I'll give it a 5, but uhh yo author are u planning on dropping this? hope not.. world background what can I say... just 5 so overall 5/5 here's my review mate hope u don't drop your work, and I'm my next read will be your other tbate fic debacle hope I enjoy it. adios~>_^
To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!
Everything is great where you can read Ayano in the world of TBATE with his super intelect and nice power up, but everything get destroyed when in chapter 37 when the Author maybe don't know how to continue the story because the author forced the orginal story of TBATE start from that chapter in Academy Arc where Ayano(Arthur) don't know who Elijah is but the Author just copypaste the conversation of The original novel in all chapter start fron that make the story and characters relationship like shit
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It's a weird story but i'm gonna give it 2 stars for the effort put into it. The main character is bland and boring with no development seen in around 60 chapters (Where I dropped.) The world building is poor and character understanding varies greatly. Most are lifeless and some are well partly true to the original. The diction and altogether structure the author uses is extremely sluggish and uninteresting with little to none build up or even plot driving a readers attention. Theres about 10 reincarnated souls in the book before the adventure arc even starts and it makes an already slow and boring story even more so due to the unneeded complexity, that I think is safe to assume, the author does not even understand. Not great, not good, but it's not the worst i've seen.
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The writing style is really beautiful I believe you'll be an amazing author one day.
Very few authors are actually able to grasp Ayanokouji's proper ideology and put it in their books.This author one of the best one.
Está historia es buenísima recomendada al 100%, me encanta que no haya mucho cambio en la personalidad de ayanokoji usualmente en la mayoría siempre le cambian su personalidad, me encanta esto sigue con el buen trabajo hombre.
Aahhh Menduksai...... why did you even bring other characters from Coe? And don't tell me it's a plot from original tbate? *sad*
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I haven’t started to read the story yet. Just wanted to ask, there is a romance tag, so who will be the love interest?
It was awesome and all, but I can't imagine the protagonist would want some love interest with a former enemy from his past life. I'm giving up.
pura basura --- nisiquiera es fanfic en si..................................................................................................................
One of the best tbate fics I've ever seen. I didn't know you posted on the webnovel too, I got used to watching it on Wattpad
review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good
I haven't read TBATE in years, I dropped the novel after the MC revealed that he was reincarnated to his family, but I'm going to read this fanfic, it looks pretty cool. (Google translator)
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if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it
10 out of 10. Impeccable writing, amazing character development, and well implemented idea
You are doing very well thus far my brother, keep up the good work. Your character interactions and monologues as well their depiction is spot on👌🏾. The lore and the causality of the crossover is well accounted for and "perfectly balanced, as all things should be". Honestly the only obvious fault here is your unstable uploading schedule. If you can maintain a coherently frequent updating schedule, I guarantee an outstanding reception. I mean the quality of your writing demands it, only to be held back because of this minor hiccup. Otherwise you are doing pretty well, keep up the good work👌🏾😎.
Out of all the fanfics I've read, this is by far the most well-written one. Unlike other writers, you have successfully captured the intricacies of Ayanokoji's character and portrayed his intellect and complex thoughts with ease. Additionally, the grammar is consistent and well-managed, which makes the story even more enjoyable to read. You have added a twist to the plot and crafted conversations that are true to each character's personality. I am surprised that this fanfic has not gained as much popularity as the others that are filled with hormonal teenagers and self-indulgent desires. I sincerely hope that you will not abandon this work, but if you ever lose motivation, please consider providing a satisfying ending. Thank you for your work! ( ╹▽╹ )
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Prologue done I can confirm he doing his thing so far I like it I’ll let you know more when I’m caught up
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Here from wattpad. Came here just to review this fic. It's definitely worth the time and effort. Give it a try, the writing style won't disappoint
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........................ well, it was definitely worth the read.
In my opinion, this is one of the best TBATE fanfics on this site. From the grammar to the interactions and the character designs, everything seems to be going well so far. I suggest whoever is reading this try it out.
hmm I'm not really good at writing revs but oh well. first of all writing quality is good an easy 5, the grammar and writing in this is better than most fanfics out there but it still has some typos tho very little but meh who doesn't make mistakes? story development is going good so far I like it and I'm very looking forward to future development especially he and Arthur's encounter. so easy 5 character design is superb man I don't know much about ayanokoji as I have only watched the anime but from there I can see that ayanokoji here is written pretty well, character interaction is also good and other characters aren't just abandoned they have uh... essence? idk I can't accurately describe it cuz I'm starving haha I've binge read this till morning anyways it has essence u know a properly built character not just some empty husk, the changing of different perspective (pov) is also good so overall 5. updating stability hmm idk I just binge it this day but seeing the update date from the last chaps I'll give it a 5, but uhh yo author are u planning on dropping this? hope not.. world background what can I say... just 5 so overall 5/5 here's my review mate hope u don't drop your work, and I'm my next read will be your other tbate fic debacle hope I enjoy it. adios~>_^
To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!
Everything is great where you can read Ayano in the world of TBATE with his super intelect and nice power up, but everything get destroyed when in chapter 37 when the Author maybe don't know how to continue the story because the author forced the orginal story of TBATE start from that chapter in Academy Arc where Ayano(Arthur) don't know who Elijah is but the Author just copypaste the conversation of The original novel in all chapter start fron that make the story and characters relationship like shit
God-tier...................................................bjhj................................... ............ihj....................mm............................j..... ..................
It's a weird story but i'm gonna give it 2 stars for the effort put into it. The main character is bland and boring with no development seen in around 60 chapters (Where I dropped.) The world building is poor and character understanding varies greatly. Most are lifeless and some are well partly true to the original. The diction and altogether structure the author uses is extremely sluggish and uninteresting with little to none build up or even plot driving a readers attention. Theres about 10 reincarnated souls in the book before the adventure arc even starts and it makes an already slow and boring story even more so due to the unneeded complexity, that I think is safe to assume, the author does not even understand. Not great, not good, but it's not the worst i've seen.
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The writing style is really beautiful I believe you'll be an amazing author one day.
Very few authors are actually able to grasp Ayanokouji's proper ideology and put it in their books.This author one of the best one.
Está historia es buenísima recomendada al 100%, me encanta que no haya mucho cambio en la personalidad de ayanokoji usualmente en la mayoría siempre le cambian su personalidad, me encanta esto sigue con el buen trabajo hombre.
Aahhh Menduksai...... why did you even bring other characters from Coe? And don't tell me it's a plot from original tbate? *sad*
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Spoiler enthüllen I haven’t started to read the story yet. Just wanted to ask, there is a romance tag, so who will be the love interest?
It was awesome and all, but I can't imagine the protagonist would want some love interest with a former enemy from his past life. I'm giving up.
pura basura --- nisiquiera es fanfic en si..................................................................................................................
One of the best tbate fics I've ever seen. I didn't know you posted on the webnovel too, I got used to watching it on Wattpad
review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good
I haven't read TBATE in years, I dropped the novel after the MC revealed that he was reincarnated to his family, but I'm going to read this fanfic, it looks pretty cool. (Google translator)
Spoiler enthüllen if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it
10 out of 10. Impeccable writing, amazing character development, and well implemented idea
You are doing very well thus far my brother, keep up the good work. Your character interactions and monologues as well their depiction is spot on👌🏾. The lore and the causality of the crossover is well accounted for and "perfectly balanced, as all things should be". Honestly the only obvious fault here is your unstable uploading schedule. If you can maintain a coherently frequent updating schedule, I guarantee an outstanding reception. I mean the quality of your writing demands it, only to be held back because of this minor hiccup. Otherwise you are doing pretty well, keep up the good work👌🏾😎.
Out of all the fanfics I've read, this is by far the most well-written one. Unlike other writers, you have successfully captured the intricacies of Ayanokoji's character and portrayed his intellect and complex thoughts with ease. Additionally, the grammar is consistent and well-managed, which makes the story even more enjoyable to read. You have added a twist to the plot and crafted conversations that are true to each character's personality. I am surprised that this fanfic has not gained as much popularity as the others that are filled with hormonal teenagers and self-indulgent desires. I sincerely hope that you will not abandon this work, but if you ever lose motivation, please consider providing a satisfying ending. Thank you for your work! ( ╹▽╹ )
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Prologue done I can confirm he doing his thing so far I like it I’ll let you know more when I’m caught up
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Here from wattpad. Came here just to review this fic. It's definitely worth the time and effort. Give it a try, the writing style won't disappoint
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........................ well, it was definitely worth the read.
In my opinion, this is one of the best TBATE fanfics on this site. From the grammar to the interactions and the character designs, everything seems to be going well so far. I suggest whoever is reading this try it out.