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Haiii-Aaaaayyyy-Tus. I'm taking a break until the beginning of next month. See you soon🌚 I can't think of what else I'll like to say so a...
any place i can read this for free? no offence to the author, but after 25th chapter, main character is a brain damaged idiot, and given everything he's been trough, he defo should have been somewhat wiser.
I dont know how to express what i feel about reading this novel All I can think of about mc was his mentally weak a guy who's easily ntr-ed I think.....? Ignore my review
The mc seems to be the result of mixing a face slapping young master into the body of a near homeless peasent and then the homeless dude try’s to act like he’s all that but he has no powers and disregards his system. Until the chapters get locked it’s a story about a mentally deficient bum trying to become a villain but failing. Has potential I’d he’d probably become interesting around chapter 90-100.
The world background and writing quality is good but character design is very bad, it is like every one has smoked something illegal and went on their daily lives.
The Synopsis lied. The Mc is the dumbest human imaginable and extremely hateable. The writing quality and world building are good and a story with a plot such as this are wasted on its unlikeable idiot charcters. The Mc especially.
its not that bad but its not amazing the grammat is good and he had thought about the world and wjat he eants from it. but if i look at the character and develepment it feels mote like a anti hero story than a true villain story. i also dislike how soon the mom was killed off. i usually cry if that happens but i didnt even feel any connection to her and het death wad more like a introduction on why he would hate heroes while his dad was also used and sacrificed by them. also some old dude wanted to give him powers without even knowing him and he rejected 2 times without knowing the deal behind it. wasted opportunity tbh. but all else its a fun book to read. i like how he doesnt know his powers and even gets to confident. would rate it 3.5/5 and will read it to see where it goes
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The story moves too slowly and can't get to the point. ................................................................................................................................
I'll be setting up my tiers from the beginning of next month. Also I'll be realizing all the chapters I have. May be the force be our guide, Even the ones on the dark side.
Hey✌️🏽IT IS I...🙈Your author. I will start posting additional chapters as from next week. Thank you for your Infinite Patience. Signed Arrc.
Honestly one of the best plots i have read the only problem is execution it just hard to read other than that the novel is awesome
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Let me have the honor of the first review for this awesome new book. First of all just wanna mention that the writing quality is really good so far and the character description and world background is pretty good so far... The updates are also stable so far, hopefully it's not gonna drop. It's not really cringe and edgy either and is tolerable enough to read. Also wonder why ray is so eager to be a villain… can't wait to read about his past. Sorry for breaking up the review, I’m omwh and the rides a bit bumpy and to be honest | haven' read enough to make an actual review about this but here I am :)
Ray is HUMAN! He makes mistakes and manages to grow through them. I really hope you stick around and make it through the muddy areas. It gets so much better. Also, I thank everyone that managed to drop a review and appreciate the fact that you're reading it but please get a little further before you do so. I need more in-depth reviews ✌🏾Keep it coming.
Haiii-Aaaaayyyy-Tus. I'm taking a break until the beginning of next month. See you soon🌚 I can't think of what else I'll like to say so a...
any place i can read this for free? no offence to the author, but after 25th chapter, main character is a brain damaged idiot, and given everything he's been trough, he defo should have been somewhat wiser.
I dont know how to express what i feel about reading this novel All I can think of about mc was his mentally weak a guy who's easily ntr-ed I think.....? Ignore my review
The mc seems to be the result of mixing a face slapping young master into the body of a near homeless peasent and then the homeless dude try’s to act like he’s all that but he has no powers and disregards his system. Until the chapters get locked it’s a story about a mentally deficient bum trying to become a villain but failing. Has potential I’d he’d probably become interesting around chapter 90-100.
The world background and writing quality is good but character design is very bad, it is like every one has smoked something illegal and went on their daily lives.
The Synopsis lied. The Mc is the dumbest human imaginable and extremely hateable. The writing quality and world building are good and a story with a plot such as this are wasted on its unlikeable idiot charcters. The Mc especially.
its not that bad but its not amazing the grammat is good and he had thought about the world and wjat he eants from it. but if i look at the character and develepment it feels mote like a anti hero story than a true villain story. i also dislike how soon the mom was killed off. i usually cry if that happens but i didnt even feel any connection to her and het death wad more like a introduction on why he would hate heroes while his dad was also used and sacrificed by them. also some old dude wanted to give him powers without even knowing him and he rejected 2 times without knowing the deal behind it. wasted opportunity tbh. but all else its a fun book to read. i like how he doesnt know his powers and even gets to confident. would rate it 3.5/5 and will read it to see where it goes
Spoiler enthüllen The story moves too slowly and can't get to the point. ................................................................................................................................
I'll be setting up my tiers from the beginning of next month. Also I'll be realizing all the chapters I have. May be the force be our guide, Even the ones on the dark side.
Hey✌️🏽IT IS I...🙈Your author. I will start posting additional chapters as from next week. Thank you for your Infinite Patience. Signed Arrc.
Honestly one of the best plots i have read the only problem is execution it just hard to read other than that the novel is awesome
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Let me have the honor of the first review for this awesome new book. First of all just wanna mention that the writing quality is really good so far and the character description and world background is pretty good so far... The updates are also stable so far, hopefully it's not gonna drop. It's not really cringe and edgy either and is tolerable enough to read. Also wonder why ray is so eager to be a villain… can't wait to read about his past. Sorry for breaking up the review, I’m omwh and the rides a bit bumpy and to be honest | haven' read enough to make an actual review about this but here I am :)
Ray is HUMAN! He makes mistakes and manages to grow through them. I really hope you stick around and make it through the muddy areas. It gets so much better. Also, I thank everyone that managed to drop a review and appreciate the fact that you're reading it but please get a little further before you do so. I need more in-depth reviews ✌🏾Keep it coming.