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I love the story it developed pretty well and has good explanation in things although I do hate how many chapters just have “duplicate don’t buy” “fix later” it’s so annoying literally 8 chapters in a row are all either duplicate or fix later and sometimes I buy a batch and a bunch ends up like that
it's a really good novel, I love the beginning lol, the confusion yet knowing everything about the body he possessed. Good work, author, keep the updates coming
The story quality is good and so is the writing. Though when they start experimenting on the primitives it left a bad taste in my mouth. I'm not someone who hates evil MC but isn't it a bit hypocritical that the MC and the guy who was experimenting on primitive hates god because of treating them as garbage ? Aren't they doing the same thing with primitives ? In the long run how does that make them different from gods?
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Great story. I guess the only thing I didn't really like was how fast he was to realize that he got reincarnated but everything else is good.
I hope there is romance, the truth, it gives it a special touch. Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssfjfjfjjfufrhcbfdhjcbdbwhchevfvhxhfhfhrhhfhrhdhxhehcu
While I genuinely enjoy the story, the last few chapters (20-27) have hade two issues. first George and Davis names were switches. second there has been an increase in typos, unfinished sentences, and auto corrected mistakes. None of this is impossible to fix so it's not too big of an issue so long as it's prevented in the future.
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Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!
Nice language, a well-balanced point of view, and a wonderfully presented backdrop with far too much detail of it. Give your readers some time to picture it; you're being very specific. It's the first time I've come across a story set in the prehistoric past. I find reincarnation and the concept of several realms appealing.
Finished the 9 chapters currently out so far and I’ve had a fun time on this one, there’s nothing very new here but it’s all done pretty well in my opinion; would’ve been nice if the protagonists past life was more involved here but regardless keep pushing out chapters for this one it’s really good!
A few grammar errors here and there, not a lot 5/5 Updates 1-2 chapters everyday, 5/5 Story development is good, novel concept, has lots of potential, here b4 it goes viral. 5/5 Character design: Can’t say too much for now since I haven’t read a lot but I trust the author so 5/5 World background: Well done, the story flows seamlessly between the various forces in the world. 5/5
The novel is very good, but the past life doesn't have much influence on MC so it seems like MC just took the transmigration for granted. Writing quality, story development and World development is extremely good 5/5, but stability of updates is slow (I WANT UPDATES) and character design as mentioned above has a problem so 4/5.
This is totally a genuine review that is totally based on my true opinions. Although I haven’t read this story completely, the genre and writing tingles my tastes.
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Good storytelling. This is the first time I came across a story that involves the primitive era. I like the idea of reincarnation and different realms. The story has potential, can't wait to read more
Every chapters always make me want to know more. The begining so interesing and amazing. Keep spirit, Author 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻 i love your work
I read all 4 chapters and I like it. It is a intriguing story. Transmigration is so cool. I felt bad that he had a sharp pain in his head though.
it's a really good story it's very detailed and builds up character I love the characters and the creativity and I think you should continue writting
This is a well-written novel. I love how vivid the world-building is, and the artistic flow of the narrative. The character and plot setup is new to me, which makes it a really refreshing read. Each chapter makes you look forward to what's going to happen next. Great work!
I guess this is going to be one of my favourites, I loved it, keep up the good work, I enjoyed your story and it is pretty well written with all the magic and fantasy take, great job ❤️❤️
I really love the prelude. The way everything is explained is so good. And the protagonist is awesome. I like how he wants to know everything scientifically. Really loved him. And the new world, I am mesmerized by it only due to the presence of AI chip. Because the chip can tell about everything in the world. Overall, loved it but 2 chapters are few. Author, write more. Waiting for it.
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So far I'm very interested in the story concept! It reminds me a lot of Doctor Stone but with a more fantastical take on it! I can't wait to see how this story goes! Good luck Author!
Very nice concept I like how your thinking of something new very nice story hope you improve as the story goes on and keep up the good work author
So far, the narration was consistent and there were little grammatical or typographical mistakes. The plot seems consistent but a bit fast-paced for me. It also kind of lacked a bit descriptions on the setting but other than that, all is good. :)
An interesting premise. Very fast paced from the 2 chapters currently available for me to peruse. Things of note that I liked: The stat numbers so far seem quite low which is something I don't see enough. A positive aspect for sure. I've not seen an 'AI Chip' as the diagetic reasoning behind a system before, so consider me surprised. Good job so far.
Gotta love a scientist MC, I cannot wait to see how he adapts to this new world and grows. The world's background is interesting and I also cannot wait to see how he adapts his scientific knowledge with the magical knowledge he'll gain.
With a combination of great premise and suspense, the author delivered what was promised splendidly. I love the worldbuilding and seemingly overwhelming presence of the "God" the protagonist will have to go against and I am looking forward to more chapters in the coming future!
The story is fascinating, It caught my attention as soon as I started reading it. I love. the build-up to the story. It is unique. Great work, keep writing. I love to read more!
Author here! if there are any questions regarding the novel ask them here I'll gladly answer.🙂
I love the story it developed pretty well and has good explanation in things although I do hate how many chapters just have “duplicate don’t buy” “fix later” it’s so annoying literally 8 chapters in a row are all either duplicate or fix later and sometimes I buy a batch and a bunch ends up like that
it's a really good novel, I love the beginning lol, the confusion yet knowing everything about the body he possessed. Good work, author, keep the updates coming
The story quality is good and so is the writing. Though when they start experimenting on the primitives it left a bad taste in my mouth. I'm not someone who hates evil MC but isn't it a bit hypocritical that the MC and the guy who was experimenting on primitive hates god because of treating them as garbage ? Aren't they doing the same thing with primitives ? In the long run how does that make them different from gods?
Spoiler enthüllen Great story. I guess the only thing I didn't really like was how fast he was to realize that he got reincarnated but everything else is good.
I hope there is romance, the truth, it gives it a special touch. Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssfjfjfjjfufrhcbfdhjcbdbwhchevfvhxhfhfhrhhfhrhdhxhehcu
While I genuinely enjoy the story, the last few chapters (20-27) have hade two issues. first George and Davis names were switches. second there has been an increase in typos, unfinished sentences, and auto corrected mistakes. None of this is impossible to fix so it's not too big of an issue so long as it's prevented in the future.
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Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!
Nice language, a well-balanced point of view, and a wonderfully presented backdrop with far too much detail of it. Give your readers some time to picture it; you're being very specific. It's the first time I've come across a story set in the prehistoric past. I find reincarnation and the concept of several realms appealing.
Finished the 9 chapters currently out so far and I’ve had a fun time on this one, there’s nothing very new here but it’s all done pretty well in my opinion; would’ve been nice if the protagonists past life was more involved here but regardless keep pushing out chapters for this one it’s really good!
A few grammar errors here and there, not a lot 5/5 Updates 1-2 chapters everyday, 5/5 Story development is good, novel concept, has lots of potential, here b4 it goes viral. 5/5 Character design: Can’t say too much for now since I haven’t read a lot but I trust the author so 5/5 World background: Well done, the story flows seamlessly between the various forces in the world. 5/5
The novel is very good, but the past life doesn't have much influence on MC so it seems like MC just took the transmigration for granted. Writing quality, story development and World development is extremely good 5/5, but stability of updates is slow (I WANT UPDATES) and character design as mentioned above has a problem so 4/5.
This is totally a genuine review that is totally based on my true opinions. Although I haven’t read this story completely, the genre and writing tingles my tastes.
Spoiler enthüllen Good storytelling. This is the first time I came across a story that involves the primitive era. I like the idea of reincarnation and different realms. The story has potential, can't wait to read more
Every chapters always make me want to know more. The begining so interesing and amazing. Keep spirit, Author 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻 i love your work
I read all 4 chapters and I like it. It is a intriguing story. Transmigration is so cool. I felt bad that he had a sharp pain in his head though.
it's a really good story it's very detailed and builds up character I love the characters and the creativity and I think you should continue writting
This is a well-written novel. I love how vivid the world-building is, and the artistic flow of the narrative. The character and plot setup is new to me, which makes it a really refreshing read. Each chapter makes you look forward to what's going to happen next. Great work!
I guess this is going to be one of my favourites, I loved it, keep up the good work, I enjoyed your story and it is pretty well written with all the magic and fantasy take, great job ❤️❤️
I really love the prelude. The way everything is explained is so good. And the protagonist is awesome. I like how he wants to know everything scientifically. Really loved him. And the new world, I am mesmerized by it only due to the presence of AI chip. Because the chip can tell about everything in the world. Overall, loved it but 2 chapters are few. Author, write more. Waiting for it.
Spoiler enthüllen So far I'm very interested in the story concept! It reminds me a lot of Doctor Stone but with a more fantastical take on it! I can't wait to see how this story goes! Good luck Author!
Very nice concept I like how your thinking of something new very nice story hope you improve as the story goes on and keep up the good work author
So far, the narration was consistent and there were little grammatical or typographical mistakes. The plot seems consistent but a bit fast-paced for me. It also kind of lacked a bit descriptions on the setting but other than that, all is good. :)
An interesting premise. Very fast paced from the 2 chapters currently available for me to peruse. Things of note that I liked: The stat numbers so far seem quite low which is something I don't see enough. A positive aspect for sure. I've not seen an 'AI Chip' as the diagetic reasoning behind a system before, so consider me surprised. Good job so far.
Gotta love a scientist MC, I cannot wait to see how he adapts to this new world and grows. The world's background is interesting and I also cannot wait to see how he adapts his scientific knowledge with the magical knowledge he'll gain.
With a combination of great premise and suspense, the author delivered what was promised splendidly. I love the worldbuilding and seemingly overwhelming presence of the "God" the protagonist will have to go against and I am looking forward to more chapters in the coming future!
The story is fascinating, It caught my attention as soon as I started reading it. I love. the build-up to the story. It is unique. Great work, keep writing. I love to read more!
Author here! if there are any questions regarding the novel ask them here I'll gladly answer.🙂