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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionA officer Jenny as the protagonist. Now you had my curiosity but now you have my attention. Okay enough of that, I hope the story will be a good one to read and probably see how far this police officer can go after dying 2 times already.
Very well thought out book with a solid starting twist of a double death/ reincarnation. Character is not a fool and has learned her lessons the hard way previously. She is calm cool and willing to accept no matter what she doesn she may still be caught of guard. She is caring to those close to her and does good deeds where she can. but isn't foolish enough to go as far as to do good to her detriment. This author is very talented and is open to suggestions. I hope this amazing story continues for a long time!
Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please.
uma historia muito bem feita, tem coisas acontecendo, tem avanços e ideia é boa, espero que não seja dropada ou pelo menos termine em bom lugar sem decair
Writing quality is ok, with about 2 chapters a week in the last few months, the concept of the story is quite good, with a "rogue" jenny taking advantage of past knowledge and opportunities, without shying from taking the soft aproche when the situation calls for it, the thing that puts me out a bit, about the story is the 4 move system (+1or2 TM moves), author explains why on comments but the fact the Pokemon forgets the move just seems wrong to me, it would been fine if most most Pokemon just focus on the 4, and that the others start to degrade or something but this way just doesn't appeal to me. Still in general a good story.
Read the whole thing in one go. Very well thought out would building and background. Nice job adding the relevant bits of pokemon gameplay while removing the ones that dont make sense in a real world environment.
Shameless self review. This is a side project and spur of the moment idea I came up with and posted so do not expect regular updates, excellent grammar and it to be free from errors. (Though it should be readable) I have many projects ongoing and they upload chapters regularly through the week with one of them being 8 chapters a week while the other three having between 1-4 chapters a week each. If I do continue this in my free time then please show it your support and be patient with the releases! Thanks!
How do you manage to publish so many novels?............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A officer Jenny as the protagonist. Now you had my curiosity but now you have my attention. Okay enough of that, I hope the story will be a good one to read and probably see how far this police officer can go after dying 2 times already.
Very well thought out book with a solid starting twist of a double death/ reincarnation. Character is not a fool and has learned her lessons the hard way previously. She is calm cool and willing to accept no matter what she doesn she may still be caught of guard. She is caring to those close to her and does good deeds where she can. but isn't foolish enough to go as far as to do good to her detriment. This author is very talented and is open to suggestions. I hope this amazing story continues for a long time!
Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please, Next chapter please.
uma historia muito bem feita, tem coisas acontecendo, tem avanços e ideia é boa, espero que não seja dropada ou pelo menos termine em bom lugar sem decair
Writing quality is ok, with about 2 chapters a week in the last few months, the concept of the story is quite good, with a "rogue" jenny taking advantage of past knowledge and opportunities, without shying from taking the soft aproche when the situation calls for it, the thing that puts me out a bit, about the story is the 4 move system (+1or2 TM moves), author explains why on comments but the fact the Pokemon forgets the move just seems wrong to me, it would been fine if most most Pokemon just focus on the 4, and that the others start to degrade or something but this way just doesn't appeal to me. Still in general a good story.
Read the whole thing in one go. Very well thought out would building and background. Nice job adding the relevant bits of pokemon gameplay while removing the ones that dont make sense in a real world environment.
Shameless self review. This is a side project and spur of the moment idea I came up with and posted so do not expect regular updates, excellent grammar and it to be free from errors. (Though it should be readable) I have many projects ongoing and they upload chapters regularly through the week with one of them being 8 chapters a week while the other three having between 1-4 chapters a week each. If I do continue this in my free time then please show it your support and be patient with the releases! Thanks!
How do you manage to publish so many novels?............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................