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Unreadable juvenile garbage. Even for me this grammar is way too bad to be able to enjoy reading this story. My English sucks and I notice mistake after mistake reading this. Not only the grammar is a joke... the story stole many elements from other better fics and the whole story is juvenile and childish. Overall this is as bad as it can be. 0 / 5
hello! I've read your story and I've let it update so I have more to read. I would like to ask if you could translate it into Spanish on Wattpad
I highly do not recommend this story. The story goes downhill once Oak starts talking about some dumb three hero nonsense. Then the Oak kills his first Pokémon, Rookidee, and the MC says that he won’t hold a grudge and then the author has the MC just forget about it.. oak tricks him into being an assistant after his Pokémon gets killed. Story is complete garbage because of this MC. Do not waste your time.
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Review at ch41 (upto date) This is by far one of the best pokemon ff I've read on this site The world details are explained clearly The pokemons he capture are not stuck to only kanto region MC is smart and uses his resources well and the other characters are well defined and have plenty of screen time Interaction with and between the pokemons are good The way the pokemon status is arranged is my favourite thing about the novel The author interacts frequently with the readers It's a fun and enjoyable atmosphere
Não li ainda, mas só pelos desejos e pela escrita vejo que é uma obra prima ...................................................................
It is a good novel from what I have read but what a didn't like was that the professor Ouk killed the mc first pokemon and mc knew that was the professor and didn't really cared and in the end of the chapter the mc accepts being the asistente of the professor.
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found it and loved it better than most Pokemon fic out I'm a harem man but I'm happy with this keep up the good work and for a serious review I only do that when the fic is at the end
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Currrently on ch 14 and I like the story. Although the mc is a kid he shouldn’t be overpowered like right at the start. I would like to see growth and hardships. I’ve been reading some top quality Pokémon fanfic on fanfic.net and hope this one turns out well too.
Great start loving it so far, I hope that the author will cont inue releasing chapters and not drop this Fanfic. (This is one of my top 10 favs)
Hopefully the mc will participate in the Galar league! £££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££
This webnovel has a great start and hopefully it will keep uploading chapters! ###############################################################
############I loved the beginning, and hopefully, the 'author' will continue with this vibe, making this one of the top fanfictions.############
OK so far the story's great the only frown I see is that the chapters are kinda short and that's it other than that it's great by the way author is it a love triangle or one love interest it's not a big deal just wondering
The story looks good I hope it have stable updates. Also will there be a harem or a love interest. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Hello thanks for clicking on my webnovel! I‘m the author. I have a clear idea on what direction this webnovel will go. I’ve already made the MCs team but members can be swapped out or changed if y’all really want a specific Pokemon! Btw the picture is Colson and Lily/Green :)
Unreadable juvenile garbage. Even for me this grammar is way too bad to be able to enjoy reading this story. My English sucks and I notice mistake after mistake reading this. Not only the grammar is a joke... the story stole many elements from other better fics and the whole story is juvenile and childish. Overall this is as bad as it can be. 0 / 5
hello! I've read your story and I've let it update so I have more to read. I would like to ask if you could translate it into Spanish on Wattpad
I highly do not recommend this story. The story goes downhill once Oak starts talking about some dumb three hero nonsense. Then the Oak kills his first Pokémon, Rookidee, and the MC says that he won’t hold a grudge and then the author has the MC just forget about it.. oak tricks him into being an assistant after his Pokémon gets killed. Story is complete garbage because of this MC. Do not waste your time.
Spoiler enthüllen Review at ch41 (upto date) This is by far one of the best pokemon ff I've read on this site The world details are explained clearly The pokemons he capture are not stuck to only kanto region MC is smart and uses his resources well and the other characters are well defined and have plenty of screen time Interaction with and between the pokemons are good The way the pokemon status is arranged is my favourite thing about the novel The author interacts frequently with the readers It's a fun and enjoyable atmosphere
Não li ainda, mas só pelos desejos e pela escrita vejo que é uma obra prima ...................................................................
It is a good novel from what I have read but what a didn't like was that the professor Ouk killed the mc first pokemon and mc knew that was the professor and didn't really cared and in the end of the chapter the mc accepts being the asistente of the professor.
Spoiler enthüllen found it and loved it better than most Pokemon fic out I'm a harem man but I'm happy with this keep up the good work and for a serious review I only do that when the fic is at the end
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Currrently on ch 14 and I like the story. Although the mc is a kid he shouldn’t be overpowered like right at the start. I would like to see growth and hardships. I’ve been reading some top quality Pokémon fanfic on fanfic.net and hope this one turns out well too.
Great start loving it so far, I hope that the author will cont inue releasing chapters and not drop this Fanfic. (This is one of my top 10 favs)
Hopefully the mc will participate in the Galar league! £££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££
This webnovel has a great start and hopefully it will keep uploading chapters! ###############################################################
############I loved the beginning, and hopefully, the 'author' will continue with this vibe, making this one of the top fanfictions.############
OK so far the story's great the only frown I see is that the chapters are kinda short and that's it other than that it's great by the way author is it a love triangle or one love interest it's not a big deal just wondering
The story looks good I hope it have stable updates. Also will there be a harem or a love interest. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Hello thanks for clicking on my webnovel! I‘m the author. I have a clear idea on what direction this webnovel will go. I’ve already made the MCs team but members can be swapped out or changed if y’all really want a specific Pokemon! Btw the picture is Colson and Lily/Green :)