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the world's dumbest MC and system writing that has no clear path besides do this do that as a reactive MC that's has no back bone
Hello readers... it's me the author I know my novel still has many mistakes like the development of the world background and the timing of the events... i'll try my best to improve In case.. you can't afford the locked chapters, I would advise you download the app in order to win rewards such as free passes to enable you to read the book. Thank you the only thing i really care about is to ensure my reader are fully satisfied I am prone to mistakes... so if you notice something off, please try to comment the problem, honestly i would appreciate it Thanks for reading
I feel like the story had a lot of promise but the story pacing is so weird. The world building is meh, just feels like things kinda randomly happen/are there.
it's has a touch of creativity that keeps you from leaving. but does have its fair share of mistakes but that is acceptable so I wonder why is it that this is not very popular. well, I hope it gets popular soon. best of luck!!!
Nice story plot l must say..... Really interesting story and liked the characters more... Especially the MC... the first few chapters gonna hook u up with it and tell u to read more..... Author has done a great job... But l negetive sight l want to point out about it is that if author has given some tags for this book as like what kind of thing we gonna see here then it will be more interesting and great.... Besides that everything is nice... Keep going...
I love the writing style of author! Reviewing the book after reading chapter 12. All this time, I could literally picture all the scenerios author has wrote. It was like watching an action packed movie. I like how Roshan is not shown as Mr. high and mighty since the very beginning. He improves with his hard work. I have read many system books, and got tired of seeing the system making the main character do either impossible or useless tasks. But in this book, it is different. A main character who actually uses his brain. Thank God! I like how Roshan wants to be stronger because his father wanted him to be, and this will be helpful in dealing with the otherworld creatures. The scene where Gray sends Roshan to the jungle so that he could be safe, that was a very heart breaking scene. I like mister fyi and his funny comments. Overall, good work, author. Happy Writing .
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I think the biggest strength of this story so far (I have read up until the paid chapters writing this) is the action. The author writes the action well and it feels visceral. The system and level up elements are familiar territory, but serves as a good vehicle for the action. So far the most intriguing story element to me is the MC's status as "Greater human". I am curious to know what might be beyond that. Looking forward to the tournament arc if I'm ever not poor lol
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Storyline seems pretty nice and I really liked first chapters. For MC I would say that I have a feeling he'll prove everyone wrong in this tournament and will tell them that he's not as weak as they think. Overall great job author 👍🏻
The storyline is so good it's captive and hooked me all the time. live the characters and world background. more ink to your pen author keep it up...
Wonderful story, definitely keeps you wanting more. The storyline is really well put together! Keep up the great work, author! I can't wait for more!
So far its been good, love the storyline,this is a good book which i recommed[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A great work of art. The story flow naturally, just the right pace. Interesting plots and great characters development. I got so absorbed in this story, it's like I can touch and feel what the characters are going through. Amazing work. Keep going! 💪
The story is captivating,I like the way the story is heading, the way you put everything together from the character to the settings and the way there developing.keep it up.
It doesn't feel like reading a novel but a document of some sort , can't connect to the characters . [img=Sigh]
the world's dumbest MC and system writing that has no clear path besides do this do that as a reactive MC that's has no back bone
Hello readers... it's me the author I know my novel still has many mistakes like the development of the world background and the timing of the events... i'll try my best to improve In case.. you can't afford the locked chapters, I would advise you download the app in order to win rewards such as free passes to enable you to read the book. Thank you the only thing i really care about is to ensure my reader are fully satisfied I am prone to mistakes... so if you notice something off, please try to comment the problem, honestly i would appreciate it Thanks for reading
I feel like the story had a lot of promise but the story pacing is so weird. The world building is meh, just feels like things kinda randomly happen/are there.
it's has a touch of creativity that keeps you from leaving. but does have its fair share of mistakes but that is acceptable so I wonder why is it that this is not very popular. well, I hope it gets popular soon. best of luck!!!
Nice story plot l must say..... Really interesting story and liked the characters more... Especially the MC... the first few chapters gonna hook u up with it and tell u to read more..... Author has done a great job... But l negetive sight l want to point out about it is that if author has given some tags for this book as like what kind of thing we gonna see here then it will be more interesting and great.... Besides that everything is nice... Keep going...
I love the writing style of author! Reviewing the book after reading chapter 12. All this time, I could literally picture all the scenerios author has wrote. It was like watching an action packed movie. I like how Roshan is not shown as Mr. high and mighty since the very beginning. He improves with his hard work. I have read many system books, and got tired of seeing the system making the main character do either impossible or useless tasks. But in this book, it is different. A main character who actually uses his brain. Thank God! I like how Roshan wants to be stronger because his father wanted him to be, and this will be helpful in dealing with the otherworld creatures. The scene where Gray sends Roshan to the jungle so that he could be safe, that was a very heart breaking scene. I like mister fyi and his funny comments. Overall, good work, author. Happy Writing .
Spoiler enthüllen I think the biggest strength of this story so far (I have read up until the paid chapters writing this) is the action. The author writes the action well and it feels visceral. The system and level up elements are familiar territory, but serves as a good vehicle for the action. So far the most intriguing story element to me is the MC's status as "Greater human". I am curious to know what might be beyond that. Looking forward to the tournament arc if I'm ever not poor lol
Spoiler enthüllen Storyline seems pretty nice and I really liked first chapters. For MC I would say that I have a feeling he'll prove everyone wrong in this tournament and will tell them that he's not as weak as they think. Overall great job author 👍🏻
The storyline is so good it's captive and hooked me all the time. live the characters and world background. more ink to your pen author keep it up...
Wonderful story, definitely keeps you wanting more. The storyline is really well put together! Keep up the great work, author! I can't wait for more!
So far its been good, love the storyline,this is a good book which i recommed[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A great work of art. The story flow naturally, just the right pace. Interesting plots and great characters development. I got so absorbed in this story, it's like I can touch and feel what the characters are going through. Amazing work. Keep going! 💪
The story is captivating,I like the way the story is heading, the way you put everything together from the character to the settings and the way there developing.keep it up.
It doesn't feel like reading a novel but a document of some sort , can't connect to the characters . [img=Sigh]