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Can only hope this novel comes back one day, it's been sitting in my library for a while now but it looks like it's been dropped for quite a while This was one of the more enjoyable DBZ fanfics I read
The only problem I have is updates. The author had something good. Will assume he is dead at this point. He hasn't uploaded it in a while. So don't read if you don't like it incomplete. romance and action are pretty good. The main girl is Bolma and seems to be one girl so far. I was up to date. I am making this review since he won't update it. Making this the only review as if it is finished.
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Are you okay author ? You stopped writing suddenly that it's worrying. If it would be possible to just have a 'I'm Okay'.
Really good and among the best DB/DBZ fanfics I've read but like all the best ones...I'm afraid it might be dropped, I just realized it hasn't been updated in while. I like that the MC isn't naive though he could definitely use some more points in intelligence
I'm still early on in the story, however already a lot of problems. Seems like the author doesn't understand how the Gamer abilities work - e.g. Gamer's Mind and Gamer's Body are at max level, but MC still has extreme pain, actual broken limbs, etc. The other problem is numeric stats and rarity-classified (e.g. common, rare, legendary) items that boost stats - as an example, a sword gives +5 Str or something. Early on that's fine, but later on when we're at super saiyan levels, are you going to have +1million str for items? That's a writing trap just waiting to happen.
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Review at ch 59 (upto date) One of the best DBZ gf I've read The MC is smart and his interaction with others are well written Also the various POVs are of the right amount and fluid I like the way he has developed from ch1 Highly Recommended
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Great novel already read it and am up to date on qq but nice to see the author is migrating this gem to different platforms. Great DBZ fanfiction, si although not super nsfw yet.
So far one of the best dragon ball fanfic out there I highly recommend it. …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… ……………………
Excelente historia. Un cambio se aire muy bueno con respecto a otros fanfic de DBZ. Resultó ser mucho más lógico de lo que esperaba considerando que el prota tiene un game system. Y me gusta que sus power ups no sean sacado de las nalgas. Y que se explique la lógica detrás de ellos
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It wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say that this is the perfect dbz fan fiction. The writing quality is probably one the finest you could find on this website. The story progresses at a steady pace, mc has depth and is very human and there are new chapters every day what more could you ask for?
4.4 / 5 Really good. Nice system. Rather complicated and quite a few stats but thus far the author did a good job with it. Also interesting that the author uses a magic system since we all know that in the DB universe most chars use only ki but quite a few have access to magic. So it only makes sense to give the mc a magic stat to explain his more esoteric abilities. Plot is funny. MC is not super op but only slightly above the rest of the chars.
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Love it the only problem is a few chapter(sorry for my bad eng).............................................................................
Finally, a good dragon ball fic in a very long time, too bad he's not a saiyan, I would really like to ask, is this a harem? If he's gonna be a saiyan in the future, I have some wonderful form for our dear MC!
This is a diamond, if you are DB fans you have to read this! This is a diamond, if you are DB fans you have to read this! This is a diamond, if you are DB fans you have to read this!
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Can only hope this novel comes back one day, it's been sitting in my library for a while now but it looks like it's been dropped for quite a while This was one of the more enjoyable DBZ fanfics I read
The only problem I have is updates. The author had something good. Will assume he is dead at this point. He hasn't uploaded it in a while. So don't read if you don't like it incomplete. romance and action are pretty good. The main girl is Bolma and seems to be one girl so far. I was up to date. I am making this review since he won't update it. Making this the only review as if it is finished.
Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻................. Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻................. Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻................. Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻................. Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻.................
Are you okay author ? You stopped writing suddenly that it's worrying. If it would be possible to just have a 'I'm Okay'.
Really good and among the best DB/DBZ fanfics I've read but like all the best ones...I'm afraid it might be dropped, I just realized it hasn't been updated in while. I like that the MC isn't naive though he could definitely use some more points in intelligence
I'm still early on in the story, however already a lot of problems. Seems like the author doesn't understand how the Gamer abilities work - e.g. Gamer's Mind and Gamer's Body are at max level, but MC still has extreme pain, actual broken limbs, etc. The other problem is numeric stats and rarity-classified (e.g. common, rare, legendary) items that boost stats - as an example, a sword gives +5 Str or something. Early on that's fine, but later on when we're at super saiyan levels, are you going to have +1million str for items? That's a writing trap just waiting to happen.
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Review at ch 59 (upto date) One of the best DBZ gf I've read The MC is smart and his interaction with others are well written Also the various POVs are of the right amount and fluid I like the way he has developed from ch1 Highly Recommended
MOAR!
Spoiler enthüllen Great novel already read it and am up to date on qq but nice to see the author is migrating this gem to different platforms. Great DBZ fanfiction, si although not super nsfw yet.
So far one of the best dragon ball fanfic out there I highly recommend it. …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… ……………………
Excelente historia. Un cambio se aire muy bueno con respecto a otros fanfic de DBZ. Resultó ser mucho más lógico de lo que esperaba considerando que el prota tiene un game system. Y me gusta que sus power ups no sean sacado de las nalgas. Y que se explique la lógica detrás de ellos
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It wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say that this is the perfect dbz fan fiction. The writing quality is probably one the finest you could find on this website. The story progresses at a steady pace, mc has depth and is very human and there are new chapters every day what more could you ask for?
4.4 / 5 Really good. Nice system. Rather complicated and quite a few stats but thus far the author did a good job with it. Also interesting that the author uses a magic system since we all know that in the DB universe most chars use only ki but quite a few have access to magic. So it only makes sense to give the mc a magic stat to explain his more esoteric abilities. Plot is funny. MC is not super op but only slightly above the rest of the chars.
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Love it the only problem is a few chapter(sorry for my bad eng).............................................................................
Finally, a good dragon ball fic in a very long time, too bad he's not a saiyan, I would really like to ask, is this a harem? If he's gonna be a saiyan in the future, I have some wonderful form for our dear MC!
This is a diamond, if you are DB fans you have to read this! This is a diamond, if you are DB fans you have to read this! This is a diamond, if you are DB fans you have to read this!
I hope you continued this gem once. My heart aches that you don't continue. ........................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ...........................................................