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The premise is one thing but the chapters that followed really nailed it for me! I so love the flow of the story so far, more chapters please!
The story is quite gripping to read although there are many grammatical errors. And spelling errors to include. Except that, there's no problem with the book, I just feel like you need to work more on your writing. Welcome to the world of authors!🎂🎉💖 What's the official language in your country?
I love the names Nathan and Kylie for the characters. And I like the murderous look Nathan always has. But his name doesn't fit him. Maybe it should be more masculine, but I love him anyway. I like the story and look forward to more beautiful and interesting scenes in each chapter. Keep it up!
[Reviewed on: 08-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewed by: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Synopsis seems decent. - Cover needs a change. - Before I move to chapter-wise details, let me ask the author. What does your book has to offer? What makes it different from the 80% romance books? - I can name you 20 books which start exactly like this. How is your opening different? Not to sound rude or anything, even though you can delete this review later on if you wish to. But an opening should be catchy and different from the other books. - Would you personally read a book which starts as cheating sister and fiance, calling off engagement, moving away etc? I can assure you a reader has already read minimum 10 such books with same starting. Why should they read one more? - I am pretty sure you must have made some differences ahead, but first 3 chapters are the core point of the book. If it can't hook the readers with any unique element then they won't read ahead. - Punctuation is messed up a lot in chapter 3 which is 70% dialogues with little descriptions. ~ Deepest apologies for this review.
The premise is one thing but the chapters that followed really nailed it for me! I so love the flow of the story so far, more chapters please!
The story is quite gripping to read although there are many grammatical errors. And spelling errors to include. Except that, there's no problem with the book, I just feel like you need to work more on your writing. Welcome to the world of authors!🎂🎉💖 What's the official language in your country?
I love the names Nathan and Kylie for the characters. And I like the murderous look Nathan always has. But his name doesn't fit him. Maybe it should be more masculine, but I love him anyway. I like the story and look forward to more beautiful and interesting scenes in each chapter. Keep it up!
[Reviewed on: 08-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewed by: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Synopsis seems decent. - Cover needs a change. - Before I move to chapter-wise details, let me ask the author. What does your book has to offer? What makes it different from the 80% romance books? - I can name you 20 books which start exactly like this. How is your opening different? Not to sound rude or anything, even though you can delete this review later on if you wish to. But an opening should be catchy and different from the other books. - Would you personally read a book which starts as cheating sister and fiance, calling off engagement, moving away etc? I can assure you a reader has already read minimum 10 such books with same starting. Why should they read one more? - I am pretty sure you must have made some differences ahead, but first 3 chapters are the core point of the book. If it can't hook the readers with any unique element then they won't read ahead. - Punctuation is messed up a lot in chapter 3 which is 70% dialogues with little descriptions. ~ Deepest apologies for this review.