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ุงููุตุฉ ููุณูุง ุฌูุฏุฉ ูู ุงูุจุฏุงูุฉ ุงูุดุฎุตูุงุช ุฌุงู ุฏุฉ ููู ุจุฏุฃ ุงูู ุคูู ูุชุญุณู ููุงู ุจุนุถ ุงูุงุฑุจุงู ุญูุซ ูุชููู ุนู ุงู ูุฑ ุบุฑูุจุฉ ููุฏุฎููุง ูู ุงููุตุฉ ูุงูู ุงูู ุชุฎูู ูุงูููุฑุฉ ู ุฐููุฉ ุงุนุชูุฏ ุจุนุฏ ุชุญุณูู ูู ูุนูุฏ ุชุญุฑูุฑูุง ุณุชุตุจุญ ูุตุฉ ุฎุงุฑูุฉ ุฃุดูุฑู ุนูู ู ุฌููุฏู ุงูุฑุงุฆุน The story itself is good at the beginning, the characters are rigid, but the author began to improve, there is some confusion where he talks about strange things and introduces them into the story, and I was the one who was afraid, and the idea is amazing, I think after his improvement, if he re-edits it, it will become a superhero story, Thank you for your wonderful effort
Can't take it any more, didn't understand what was going on. He is inside glass tank in every chapter but how did he get in, is someone experimenting on him?? is he reborn?? is he uchiha ??? is he senju ?? did he reincarnate once or twice ???? Story is a complete mess ?????.
Good but fast pace โ๏ธโฌ๏ธโ๏ธโก๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโฉ๏ธโช๏ธโคด๏ธโคต๏ธโคต๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โน๏ธ๐ ฟ๏ธ๐๐๏ธ๐ณ๐ฃ๐ค๐ก๐ข๐ข7๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ0๏ธโฃ0๏ธโฃ๐๐ ๐ท๐ท๐น๐น๐น๐ฃ#๏ธโฃ*๏ธโฃ๐#๏ธโฃ๐ก๐
I've never read such ridiculous fan fiction in my life, this is a waste of time author, I'm telling you, go suffocate yourself with tofu ๐ก๏ธ๐ก๏ธ๐ก๏ธ๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
ุงููุตุฉ ููุณูุง ุฌูุฏุฉ ูู ุงูุจุฏุงูุฉ ุงูุดุฎุตูุงุช ุฌุงู ุฏุฉ ููู ุจุฏุฃ ุงูู ุคูู ูุชุญุณู ููุงู ุจุนุถ ุงูุงุฑุจุงู ุญูุซ ูุชููู ุนู ุงู ูุฑ ุบุฑูุจุฉ ููุฏุฎููุง ูู ุงููุตุฉ ูุงูู ุงูู ุชุฎูู ูุงูููุฑุฉ ู ุฐููุฉ ุงุนุชูุฏ ุจุนุฏ ุชุญุณูู ูู ูุนูุฏ ุชุญุฑูุฑูุง ุณุชุตุจุญ ูุตุฉ ุฎุงุฑูุฉ ุฃุดูุฑู ุนูู ู ุฌููุฏู ุงูุฑุงุฆุน The story itself is good at the beginning, the characters are rigid, but the author began to improve, there is some confusion where he talks about strange things and introduces them into the story, and I was the one who was afraid, and the idea is amazing, I think after his improvement, if he re-edits it, it will become a superhero story, Thank you for your wonderful effort
Can't take it any more, didn't understand what was going on. He is inside glass tank in every chapter but how did he get in, is someone experimenting on him?? is he reborn?? is he uchiha ??? is he senju ?? did he reincarnate once or twice ???? Story is a complete mess ?????.
Good but fast pace โ๏ธโฌ๏ธโ๏ธโก๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโฉ๏ธโช๏ธโคด๏ธโคต๏ธโคต๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โน๏ธ๐ ฟ๏ธ๐๐๏ธ๐ณ๐ฃ๐ค๐ก๐ข๐ข7๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ8๏ธโฃ0๏ธโฃ0๏ธโฃ๐๐ ๐ท๐ท๐น๐น๐น๐ฃ#๏ธโฃ*๏ธโฃ๐#๏ธโฃ๐ก๐
I've never read such ridiculous fan fiction in my life, this is a waste of time author, I'm telling you, go suffocate yourself with tofu ๐ก๏ธ๐ก๏ธ๐ก๏ธ๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐