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.c is the most stupid I've ever seen 😳 how can someone be so stupid? It hurts my heart just to read 3 chapters, i thought it was a baby's stupidity but then i remember he's a grown man, i give up i can this anymore bye.....
Ultimately, this story is fluff. Canon characters conveniently act off-model if it helps them fall into the MCs clutches. The MC himself seems to have a reality distortion field instead of actual development. It's ok to listen to in the background with text to speech, but reading directly, I found myself skipping chapters.
Your mc and the reactions of people to your mc don't make sense. Regardless of how other ninja children might grow quickly the ninja would not act like it is perfectly fine for a 6 month old child to be able to spout philosophy and think like an adult with the knowledge of said adult. They would figure the child was being possessed through a jutsu and would lock that child up while trying to release the jutsu. Only an idiot would think a sheltered child spouting adult concepts without ever having to deal with said concepts is normal.
Great stuff. A lot of the stuff made me laugh out loud. Some weird mistakes and it's was a bit weird seeing Chinese names everywhere. But still. Great read.
This story had such hige potential...Alas it felt so illogical and weird to imagine a kid less than 1 year old talking, arguing, teasing, imparting phylosophy and making bets with adults ninja anbus....and everyone reacts as if its normal...
i love this fanfic so much it has fun , drama , comady , action and more exciting elements. 5 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. keep going I like your fanfic so much. 1 power stone from me for you every day. 👍🏻
Zhang miao.... what name is that.... elder bro of Naruto...... why put a Chinese name idk..... put something like natsu, toji, toru, Yuji, yato, toshiro tojiro yada yada yada..... Zhang miao at this setting seems lame..... I'm writing this after reading the synopsis...... i don't like the name so I'm not reading..... i don't want to read the story where MC has this kind of name..... i read some of Chinese translation and stories ahs disappointed me ..... so I'm not gonna waste my time
Bad logic. Love and hate people for dumb reasons. Can’t stand chinese logic of a good and bad person.
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It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they p ut into the fic It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic
It's a good Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 I like the story, the system, the comedy, etc.. It's just that you still use Zhang Miao when his name is Ryunosuke.. It's very confusing.. You should just use Ryunosuke.. I like how he so creative to get elite ninja fragment, but I think MC/Ryunosuke is bullying Fugaku too much (or Fugaku is too unfortunate that his family is often see him when he bleat like goat).. I hope he doesn't tell the future too often, or his knowledge of future will be useless, because it will change the future.. I like his specialty/business in carving wood, it's a good idea... I think he should think about life of other which he summons or will summons.. Maybe built a village in somewhere (Uzushio maybe)... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍👍👍
writer don't have idea about people's attitude towards a children maybe..but what can I say..writer should use timeskip also...
Not even one year old can run and talk like a 10-15 year old kid. And no one thinks that it is strange.
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This book is perfect, the comedy is through the roof. Waiting for the chapter release.....
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Everything is pretty good except the dialogue He speaks in full sentences when he is 6 months old and no one seems to care The conversations is also really off putting
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i love this story, thank you for translating! Very nice translation! please more! .
Man, I Have Just Four Words For This Story. I Love This Story. This Story Is So Much Fun.
.c is the most stupid I've ever seen 😳 how can someone be so stupid? It hurts my heart just to read 3 chapters, i thought it was a baby's stupidity but then i remember he's a grown man, i give up i can this anymore bye.....
Ultimately, this story is fluff. Canon characters conveniently act off-model if it helps them fall into the MCs clutches. The MC himself seems to have a reality distortion field instead of actual development. It's ok to listen to in the background with text to speech, but reading directly, I found myself skipping chapters.
Your mc and the reactions of people to your mc don't make sense. Regardless of how other ninja children might grow quickly the ninja would not act like it is perfectly fine for a 6 month old child to be able to spout philosophy and think like an adult with the knowledge of said adult. They would figure the child was being possessed through a jutsu and would lock that child up while trying to release the jutsu. Only an idiot would think a sheltered child spouting adult concepts without ever having to deal with said concepts is normal.
Great stuff. A lot of the stuff made me laugh out loud. Some weird mistakes and it's was a bit weird seeing Chinese names everywhere. But still. Great read.
This story had such hige potential...Alas it felt so illogical and weird to imagine a kid less than 1 year old talking, arguing, teasing, imparting phylosophy and making bets with adults ninja anbus....and everyone reacts as if its normal...
i love this fanfic so much it has fun , drama , comady , action and more exciting elements. 5 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. keep going I like your fanfic so much. 1 power stone from me for you every day. 👍🏻
Zhang miao.... what name is that.... elder bro of Naruto...... why put a Chinese name idk..... put something like natsu, toji, toru, Yuji, yato, toshiro tojiro yada yada yada..... Zhang miao at this setting seems lame..... I'm writing this after reading the synopsis...... i don't like the name so I'm not reading..... i don't want to read the story where MC has this kind of name..... i read some of Chinese translation and stories ahs disappointed me ..... so I'm not gonna waste my time
Bad logic. Love and hate people for dumb reasons. Can’t stand chinese logic of a good and bad person.
..............m.....................................,........,...........................................................gcdysysydydhdyshddydufy tv bdtxv BB d do hjjjnb vcs sdghnmkjcvbmkknbvghhbbbnnm CD fc
It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they p ut into the fic It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic
It's a good Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 I like the story, the system, the comedy, etc.. It's just that you still use Zhang Miao when his name is Ryunosuke.. It's very confusing.. You should just use Ryunosuke.. I like how he so creative to get elite ninja fragment, but I think MC/Ryunosuke is bullying Fugaku too much (or Fugaku is too unfortunate that his family is often see him when he bleat like goat).. I hope he doesn't tell the future too often, or his knowledge of future will be useless, because it will change the future.. I like his specialty/business in carving wood, it's a good idea... I think he should think about life of other which he summons or will summons.. Maybe built a village in somewhere (Uzushio maybe)... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍👍👍
writer don't have idea about people's attitude towards a children maybe..but what can I say..writer should use timeskip also...
Not even one year old can run and talk like a 10-15 year old kid. And no one thinks that it is strange.
Spoiler enthüllen This book is perfect, the comedy is through the roof. Waiting for the chapter release.....
É sério o que eu li?! Uma POHA DE CRIANÇA DE MEIO ANO, ANDANDO, FALANDO E COMENDO PEIXE? O QUE ESSES AUTORES COMEM E BEBEM?!?!?! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Everything is pretty good except the dialogue He speaks in full sentences when he is 6 months old and no one seems to care The conversations is also really off putting
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i love this story, thank you for translating! Very nice translation! please more! .
Man, I Have Just Four Words For This Story. I Love This Story. This Story Is So Much Fun.