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i think i read this same writing on phoenix in dxd but diffirent species it sure the same a lot....? i dont know if this author just copy that story even it's not finished or he or she just magically thought of same idea?.
Bleep —————— ‘Mmmm Llllyvuvuvyvubibuvvuvyvyvybhbhubuvubhbhbhbbhhbhbhbbhhbhbbhbhhbhbbuhb
so farr this Fanfic is awesome. But please don't Ruin this Ff like when Someone insult please kill them or disable that person. Also It would be even more awesome if our MC will not act like a Real hero and goes save people. (He can help and save people from the chat room but other nahh) (Like this comment if you wanted this too)
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
i think i read this same writing on phoenix in dxd but diffirent species it sure the same a lot....? i dont know if this author just copy that story even it's not finished or he or she just magically thought of same idea?.
Bleep —————— ‘Mmmm Llllyvuvuvyvubibuvvuvyvyvybhbhubuvubhbhbhbbhhbhbhbbhhbhbbhbhhbhbbuhb
so farr this Fanfic is awesome. But please don't Ruin this Ff like when Someone insult please kill them or disable that person. Also It would be even more awesome if our MC will not act like a Real hero and goes save people. (He can help and save people from the chat room but other nahh) (Like this comment if you wanted this too)