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You do realise how perfectly you depicted everything related to King? from his monologues to dialogues that cause more unexpected turn of events, the reactions... Everything bro, you just made everything perfect. I can't count how many times I laughed out laud at everything, thanks! Update stability is shi btw.
Great story, new theme and long chaps but updating stability is very poor..maybe author is busy nvm.. 🤔🤔
it is funny and sort of a non sirius nook all for fun to get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirement
+ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt good hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
6 chapters in and I am already loving the story but this is just a personal request, but I want to see a strong king maybe not the strongest but strong regardless
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Spoilers Below: If we say that Luffy is Sun God Nika's reincarnation, and that his heartbeasts at Gear 5th(?) are very loud, maybe we can say that King's King Engine is the same as those heartbeats. I realized that, yeah.... King is going to be misunderstood even more at the future.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good. author needs to keep writing, chapters are not that long ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Epic, Epic epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic.Epic, Epic epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic.Epic, Epic epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic.
One of the greatest ff in this site, I hope the author doesn't drop this, it will be a devastating loss for humanity .. .... ... ... .... ...
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this fanfic is actually really good so far 👏 👌 mad respect for the author..................................................................
an interesting story, but King had saitama who always comes to the last moment to save him, but here it seems that everything happens by luck, I hope you can build the character more and make a good story.
king's character is on point, I'd like to see king's engine turn to advance conquerors haki and observation haki. at this point I kinda like the thought of him having zoan fruit heck mythical zoan would be a plus something like hito hito no mi model Devadatta, the cousin of buddha.
No system. No harem. No overused/overpowered devil fruits for no reason. I tried to stay as close as possible to what we see in the manga and webcomic. Here I wrote some lore about the West Blue, the sea One Piece has almost nothing about.
You do realise how perfectly you depicted everything related to King? from his monologues to dialogues that cause more unexpected turn of events, the reactions... Everything bro, you just made everything perfect. I can't count how many times I laughed out laud at everything, thanks! Update stability is shi btw.
Great story, new theme and long chaps but updating stability is very poor..maybe author is busy nvm.. 🤔🤔
it is funny and sort of a non sirius nook all for fun to get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirementto get to word requirement
+ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt good hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
6 chapters in and I am already loving the story but this is just a personal request, but I want to see a strong king maybe not the strongest but strong regardless
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Spoilers Below: If we say that Luffy is Sun God Nika's reincarnation, and that his heartbeasts at Gear 5th(?) are very loud, maybe we can say that King's King Engine is the same as those heartbeats. I realized that, yeah.... King is going to be misunderstood even more at the future.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good. author needs to keep writing, chapters are not that long ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Epic, Epic epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic.Epic, Epic epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic.Epic, Epic epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic, epic.
One of the greatest ff in this site, I hope the author doesn't drop this, it will be a devastating loss for humanity .. .... ... ... .... ...
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this fanfic is actually really good so far 👏 👌 mad respect for the author..................................................................
an interesting story, but King had saitama who always comes to the last moment to save him, but here it seems that everything happens by luck, I hope you can build the character more and make a good story.
king's character is on point, I'd like to see king's engine turn to advance conquerors haki and observation haki. at this point I kinda like the thought of him having zoan fruit heck mythical zoan would be a plus something like hito hito no mi model Devadatta, the cousin of buddha.
No system. No harem. No overused/overpowered devil fruits for no reason. I tried to stay as close as possible to what we see in the manga and webcomic. Here I wrote some lore about the West Blue, the sea One Piece has almost nothing about.