Cultivation Supreme

LV 3

SeniorLong

copy of journey to become a true god smh copy of journey to become a true god smh copy of journey to become a true god smh copy of journey to become a true god smh

LV 3

Retsag

A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story. The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point. Good story :]

LV 4

Phantomfiend

I think the author has enough experience reading stories about cultivation. Seeing the writing that I think flows smoothly without breaking the flow. Great start to the first chapter. Unfortunately, the chaotic chapter structure is either due to Webnovel's fault or the author's, making the reading experience less enjoyable. The use of uppercase and lowercase letters also affects the beginning of the paragraph and after the period. At least, webnovels have such a format. I've read it all the way to chapter five, and it seems like the author needs to really pay attention to the chapter structure which is really messed up. A good story doesn't seem interesting because of that kind of thing. It is deeply regretted.

LV 12

DaisukiDayoSenpai

I like the fact that the grades and cultivation levels are all conveniently listed at the start, that way, no one would get lost and even if they did, they could just go back to the first chapter. This is one basic thing that many cultivation writers tend to miss. Also, the story is great, of course it couldn't rival Super Gene or Vampire System but it's good all on its own. Great job author! Don't drop it, this is bound to come far :)

LV 4

Immortal_Basterd

In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up

LV 4

Sanjiv_09

Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality

LV 3

Black_Domain

Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !! Author please continue .. ... ...

LV 14

tebogo_ratseke

this book is gold and has good potential just wish he can finish it

LV 2

Natrx

Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk Thk

LV 4

badboyz999

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 5

shyfix291

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 2

Big_Daddy666

Great, the writing quality of this book is not too bad but some grammar mistakes can be seen, but the story is interesting to read, I am new to web novels but I am rooting for you!

LV 2

_Shades_

The story is awesome, but not to sound judgemental... I would have liked it more if you didn't describe more on what was happening. Like if it was a cliffhanging blurb. Well,the book's all good all the way. Come try this out, guys!💖

LV 14

Little_North_Star

I love the novel, the first few chapters were lacking but it got better[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 2

Jaison_Arbor

The story is going great, the main character's background story was sad, though I hope fate compensates for it, I'm gonna stick to the story cause it's worth it.

LV 1

Domistro

Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine

LV 13

Altansarnai

A very nice story. I like the pace of the story. you really got me hooked into his journey of cultivation. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer part more though. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

ShinSungmi

A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!

LV 3

Kittylovely

The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.

LV 4

Moonwriting

dear author, the story is quite captive and a good deal of time. The story of high school students always got me. The ways his life changed after break up its interesting to read. keep it up dear.......