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nice story line and a good sense of humor with enough comedy combine to give a really good fanfiction. the mc is smart and likable and you wouldnt find yourself struggling with forced logic i dont know where it goes or what will happen next but i recommend this novel (and its my first time reading a good dc lantern base fanfiction story)
Very silly MC... He tells everyone his secrets and he still doesn't even know which DC universe he's in but he's already giving away everything he saves... In conclusion it's not the worst thing I've read but it makes me uncomfortable reading it so good luck with the novel (translated from goggle) :v
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Ok, the story overall is good, however there are at least two chapters where the story diverges and there are two versions. I really need an answer as to which of the two are the real one. Preferably, just go back and delete the wrong timeline from the chapters. Also, the chapters sometimes don't feel over and then the next chapter go on with a different plot point.
I think i have read this story before some where in fanfiction.net. it have same opening (Mc in space with a green ring), goes to same dude for new energy for his ring. But the original is better sorry.
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Read it before cool that someone posted it on here was realy hard to read on other platforms ////////////////////////////////::::::///////
nice story line and a good sense of humor with enough comedy combine to give a really good fanfiction. the mc is smart and likable and you wouldnt find yourself struggling with forced logic i dont know where it goes or what will happen next but i recommend this novel (and its my first time reading a good dc lantern base fanfiction story)
Very silly MC... He tells everyone his secrets and he still doesn't even know which DC universe he's in but he's already giving away everything he saves... In conclusion it's not the worst thing I've read but it makes me uncomfortable reading it so good luck with the novel (translated from goggle) :v
Spoiler enthüllen Ok, the story overall is good, however there are at least two chapters where the story diverges and there are two versions. I really need an answer as to which of the two are the real one. Preferably, just go back and delete the wrong timeline from the chapters. Also, the chapters sometimes don't feel over and then the next chapter go on with a different plot point.
I think i have read this story before some where in fanfiction.net. it have same opening (Mc in space with a green ring), goes to same dude for new energy for his ring. But the original is better sorry.
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Read it before cool that someone posted it on here was realy hard to read on other platforms ////////////////////////////////::::::///////