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interesting concept but the pacing is awful and the storying jumps around everywhere i dont even know whats going on anymore i feel like im on a bullet train like he driving home at the end of a chapter then next chapter outa nowhere he at another locations destroying a vampire next with a bunch of other characters with no buildup leading to this scene like there was barely a scene of him joining the gang
this is one of the good multiversal travel type novel. the only down side is the MC have no control in his travels
You shold create a update status page that shows all his abilities and perks, his level and more. I like your story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is great, it's a shame that the original author stopped writing chapters.
You acknowledge that this is a copy and gave homage to the original. I can respect that.
While I know that the story is a copy, it is really good and entertaining so it has my approval. Please keep updating this story.
first I want to say I am happy to see another jump chain story since they seem somewhat rare to find. Your story has a good start but there are two major problems I have seen so far. It would appear a lot of sentences are getting cut off on the side so you should look that over. Second, usually, the first 100 cp options for both perks and items are free for the origin you selected. Also, you might want to look up some supplements like body mod and warehouse.
The story is great, too bad it's not complete I think it has something like that of 100 chapters or more, but it's paused or canceled. But still take 5 The story is great, too bad it's not complete I think it has something like that of 100 chapters or more, but it's paused or canceled. But it still takes 5 stars
interesting concept but the pacing is awful and the storying jumps around everywhere i dont even know whats going on anymore i feel like im on a bullet train like he driving home at the end of a chapter then next chapter outa nowhere he at another locations destroying a vampire next with a bunch of other characters with no buildup leading to this scene like there was barely a scene of him joining the gang
this is one of the good multiversal travel type novel. the only down side is the MC have no control in his travels
You shold create a update status page that shows all his abilities and perks, his level and more. I like your story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is great, it's a shame that the original author stopped writing chapters.
You acknowledge that this is a copy and gave homage to the original. I can respect that.
While I know that the story is a copy, it is really good and entertaining so it has my approval. Please keep updating this story.
first I want to say I am happy to see another jump chain story since they seem somewhat rare to find. Your story has a good start but there are two major problems I have seen so far. It would appear a lot of sentences are getting cut off on the side so you should look that over. Second, usually, the first 100 cp options for both perks and items are free for the origin you selected. Also, you might want to look up some supplements like body mod and warehouse.
The story is great, too bad it's not complete I think it has something like that of 100 chapters or more, but it's paused or canceled. But still take 5 The story is great, too bad it's not complete I think it has something like that of 100 chapters or more, but it's paused or canceled. But it still takes 5 stars