My Wife Is Captain Marvel!

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Zenithlr

The idea is good but please give disclaimers if this is just MTL or you're the author and you're using a translation machine to translate your work or you're just editing a MTL.

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Adem_Thomas

This is all good and all, but even after all these chapters he posted there is still no sign of captain Marvel…honestly that’s wha I came here for he is the husband of captain marvel right? The setting takes place years before, make a time skip or something come on man

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Aaron_Harvey_7275

Interesting story, but I came here looking for Captain Marvel, but too my surpise, no Captain Marvel, even to 55 chapters, like really man, I only put three stars because of the sheer disapointment, I had when I realized Captain Marvel was not in this story, I will type another review when I see Captain Marvel.

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FanficGod

i like the Story. read 40 chapters an i think this is a realy good idea behind this [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

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Suzu04

like it --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Viper_PX_Death

No Captain Marvel! Like bro where is Captain Marvel? No where near this story that’s for sure.

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Burningnova13

Don't mind me, I'm just balancing all the free rating the bots gave the author for this NTR trash

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ChaMy

I've never laughed so hard at a fanfic… the paragraph comments are wonderful.

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slime032345

i Like it ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Penalune

i really wanted to try and read it because is seemed to be a decent concept but it was so badly translated that it honestly kinda hurt to try and understand it , like i think when he randomly "Roars" he meant like sighs or something like that and from what i have seen of other reviews they are saying something similar or just doing five stars and typing random stuff, for the fun of it, so please just don't read.

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Artem_5195

If you translate it, you also need to edit it...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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deMiLemnSAdvenTure

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THIZZGATOR

interesting concept but everything else is just falling short.

LV 1

Simae

the MTL is a good Story i think, i like the idea of the Story. the grama is not wery good but this doesn't bother me. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Chrislove

I like the idea behind the Story. I Now it´s just an MTL But i Pike the Story [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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xxsrtz

the grama is al little bit strangr but the Ideal is good keep going. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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MoonlightUnivers

i think this is a good Story keep going [img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]