The shadow of dead.

LV 2

AWHavoc

great concept with vivid details that allow one to get fully immersed into the story. The pacing seems appropriate for the length of the novel so far and I think it has huge potential!

LV 1

sweety_Kumari

fantastic story and good characters.....in this story I really like the novel recommended for others👌👌👌❤❤....and it's interesting....the description vivid and it's like you are dragged into the story as you read each line of the book..all in one novel...

LV 3

Prince_nonchalant

The story is certainly unique. It gives off a different vibe from many I've read. If I'm correct then I believe it's somewhat intertwined with the Indian gods. I'll review step by step below: Synopsis: One of the best aspects of the book but I believe it contains just a little too much information. Add a few more sentences and it would look more like a prologue than a synopsis. You should keep this concise and to the point. Writing Quality: Honestly, the grammar is okay but the organization and punctuations are far from perfect. Sometimes you use quotations to dictate dialogue then sometimes you don't. That's very confusing. You should choose one of the two and stop moving between them. There was even an instance or two where you started sentences with quotations and the Hun the closing quotation is nowhere to be found. Story Development: One of the stronger points of this book. It has more of a slow build but that's fine if done correctly which I believe you have the skill to do. Overall: The author has potential and while it isn't a terrible book, there is still space for great improvement. The paragraphs were too crowded, punctuation usage could be better, and some parts were quite confusing. But don't give up. Fix these errors and your book could turn into a masterpiece. Good luck author!

LV 1

Daoist72PUKt

I can say ,This is a Masterpiece .[img=recommend] Story development ,characters, writing styles and it hooked cover ...everything is superb 👌. Great work author.keep going.

LV 11

Melted_Ore

Okay. So the story seemed to have an immersive plot, which is wonderful as it quickly draws you in. The one problem that draws you out of this immersive-ness would be the inappropriate use of punctuation and the lack of overall sentence blending. Everything else seems great so I'd be keeping an eye out for updates. If the author corrects the disjointed sentence problem then that would be even better.

LV 14

hansora

While the premise is interesting, the author could improve more on grammar and sentence structures. I spotted many words that were merged together as an example. And a few dialogues got stuck in the same paragraph. I suggest you install Grammarly. It helps in constructing sentences and giving us suggestions. I only use the free version so the benefits are limited. With more practice, you can write better and better. Best of luck, author!

LV 4

Rin_Nurnia

Your writing style is well-written which has its own uniqueness. Although you need to work on the punctuation and your grammar will improve some day. Don't give up and keep up the good work, author :)

LV 3

Empe_ror99

The story is very charming, it hooks you and you keep waiting for more, I want to see what will happen, I like the characters, they have a touch that characterizes them.

LV 3

_Rockbison_

nice story l must say.... uur ritting skill is also great.... keep going author... this story gonna lead you to a big success ... my best wishes is with u...

LV 3

Dara_Manuel

hello there. After going through the story, it became clear that is different from what I have read, in a good way because has a unique touch to it, it has relatable characters and that is a plus for me. The book has potential, some misplaced punctuation and grammar that can be fixed and but there is room for improvement, because this is a gem. I totally recommend people to read it.

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

You have one problem, which is grammar and your grasp at english is still weak 😉 Welp me too! Haha 😂 Continue to improve, the rest were okay and fine. Just keep reading and learning. Pacing is fine too and the story has potential. Characters are also very life-like. Keep it up and don't surrender 👍

LV 11

Savage_writer

The title is very intriguing ... and not to mention the plot development and flow of story . I'm loving as far as I read . A definitely recommended read for readers out here [img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

Emmy_Thomson

Your story is super good and I don't deny this truth. I love your writing style. Your plot is strong and the characters are well arranged. keep it up.

LV 12

Empzze

Great work author, interesting plot, I like how it's mysterious, and I can't wait to find out about the mystery behind the mansion, I just started reading and I can tell that this book has great potential, so keep up the good work author, you just need to correct a few things and you are good to go. I'm rooting for you🙌🙌

LV 1

STAR_Movies

I can't explain how much obssesd with this novel.. I got the chill so many time during reading this novel...I completely blew my mind..the characters development and the story depth is amazing 👏 🙌 .......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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zawkey

Definetly love the cover. It's like... Interesting.I felt like she stared at my soul. But, The whole experience is superb. i love how you name her with Ruhi. In my country, that was mean soul. But, anyway, i enjoy this. I will put this on my collections

LV 3

TalentlessCarin_

i really like you novel, even though reincarnation is quite a common genre your story has good and great plotting and setting, i hope you'll update more!!!

Great plot amazing characters ...nice world-building... the Author is doing incredible work. hoping to see the full novel and in top noche keep it up.

Yeah, I can say that this novel is worthy. As I am reading for the format time on the online platform .it is quite interesting to know that many interesting books are here to read and enjoy and this has become one of my favs . well done author ! your fan from far !

Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. recommended:),