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Now, this is a good novel and I did enjoy it a lot, I think the story is fine till now. I just hope it doesn't end up with the clique of the MC marrying the 3rd prince or something like that. Moreover, the MC is still quite naive, her character development hasn't started. For example, she knew nothing about the 3rd prince stuff until after she invited him. It would be nice to see her take charge and get better at understanding her situation. Again with how causally she takes everything—it feels like she is not. I think the MC need a major shock that will jolt her out of it. Hopefully, it won't end with the clique of marrying into the Royal Family. You know, with how much she whines about learning etiquette, her character seems like one who would rather not be bothered—becoming a queen she would endlessly be bothered.
I will re-evaluate when chapters reach 50 as requested by the author. I was desperately looking for a book with the following things: female protagonist, fantasy world, reincarnation, villain and most importantly NO YURI! (repetitive thing! I only find books whose female protagonist only likes women, the YURI novel is repetitive and it's getting boring! I can't stand the same thing anymore!) Author you saved me! and your book is AWESOME! and I hope she has mighty beasts...
Hello! Author here. after about thirty chapters, here’ a few things. O1. this is not for the faint hearted. there does include violence, descriptive violence, and it is completely understandable if you do not wish to read that. this is a villainess novel. O2. the female lead is Theia, and the male lead does not actually appear for quite awhile, the beginning of the story focuses on her, the main character. the romance is also slowburn. O3. at the moment of this comment, Tuesday and Saturday will not have updates, these are days to work on my other socials and other projects, along with studies. O4. i started writing this at sixteen, and will continue on for awhile longer. please forgive my inexperience if you can see plotholes. O5. please consider giving me constructive feedback but not harsh criticism. there’s a difference, so rather than writing a comment about how something sucks, inform me politely about why you think it had potential but flopped! O6. my novel has a strong female lead that is a villain. her actions may not always be something that you agree with, same with some other leads. they are not exactly meant to be perfect, but rather flawed individuals. O7. there will be many cool beasts! if you enjoy reading about fantasy and many majestic beasts, consider giving this a read. the beast taming lore is spread out within the first thirty chapters, and afterwards contains more beasts she tames, including the people (beasts) around her.
Now, this is a good novel and I did enjoy it a lot, I think the story is fine till now. I just hope it doesn't end up with the clique of the MC marrying the 3rd prince or something like that. Moreover, the MC is still quite naive, her character development hasn't started. For example, she knew nothing about the 3rd prince stuff until after she invited him. It would be nice to see her take charge and get better at understanding her situation. Again with how causally she takes everything—it feels like she is not. I think the MC need a major shock that will jolt her out of it. Hopefully, it won't end with the clique of marrying into the Royal Family. You know, with how much she whines about learning etiquette, her character seems like one who would rather not be bothered—becoming a queen she would endlessly be bothered.
I will re-evaluate when chapters reach 50 as requested by the author. I was desperately looking for a book with the following things: female protagonist, fantasy world, reincarnation, villain and most importantly NO YURI! (repetitive thing! I only find books whose female protagonist only likes women, the YURI novel is repetitive and it's getting boring! I can't stand the same thing anymore!) Author you saved me! and your book is AWESOME! and I hope she has mighty beasts...
Hello! Author here. after about thirty chapters, here’ a few things. O1. this is not for the faint hearted. there does include violence, descriptive violence, and it is completely understandable if you do not wish to read that. this is a villainess novel. O2. the female lead is Theia, and the male lead does not actually appear for quite awhile, the beginning of the story focuses on her, the main character. the romance is also slowburn. O3. at the moment of this comment, Tuesday and Saturday will not have updates, these are days to work on my other socials and other projects, along with studies. O4. i started writing this at sixteen, and will continue on for awhile longer. please forgive my inexperience if you can see plotholes. O5. please consider giving me constructive feedback but not harsh criticism. there’s a difference, so rather than writing a comment about how something sucks, inform me politely about why you think it had potential but flopped! O6. my novel has a strong female lead that is a villain. her actions may not always be something that you agree with, same with some other leads. they are not exactly meant to be perfect, but rather flawed individuals. O7. there will be many cool beasts! if you enjoy reading about fantasy and many majestic beasts, consider giving this a read. the beast taming lore is spread out within the first thirty chapters, and afterwards contains more beasts she tames, including the people (beasts) around her.