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А когда продолжение? Прошло уже несколько месяцев с последней главы. На другой версии этого мира больше 700 глав уже вышло, хотя первая версия хуже.
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Not good. The 1st chapter is written horribly. I had to force myself to continue until chapter 10 and I have to give up. The dialogues are just plain horrible and it's hard to continue reading it. I honestly think an AI can write better than this Author. It's just that bad.
I started to read it and my brain is like where have I read this before then I figured it out. after that I read the description of the book I guess and it makes sense. btw author if someone has read the other book you're gonna probably lose them after like chapter 20 or so because early game its very similar to said book
Don't read this story. If you wish to see this story go to a vampire's slice of life this story is so far just a carbon copy down to the similar familiar bound of the three family members to the scenes that they go through so far the only real difference is the names of the characters.
I am enjoying this novel. The world is similar to that of vampire slice of life but the direction of the story is different. I am looking forward for this novel getting completed. Don't drop it, please.
this novel is similar to vampire slice of life novel but with different story direction and so far i am enjoying every chapter. thumbs up to the author for creating this as i personally wanted a bit more lemon side of the novel which it delivers perfectly. so hope this novel keep continuing
very well written and i like the different route where this story is going . so keep it up and also introduce Lucifer and others soon too ..................
Apologies to all readers. I thought I'd look at the first chapters of the novel and I was speechless by the absurdity of this paragraph design. So I will edit them again. But I'm not sure how to separate Chapter 11 Magic core (i). It is the most troubled and will probably be the last. I will try to separate them carefully, but if you come across sections that feel long and constricting again, please let me know with a "paragraph comment". Thx
To explain this book differently, the path I will draw for Aiden 'mc' will be a way to sit back and read. I don't plan to build any background or plotwist. At the age of 13, he will go on an adventure and find his own mates. He will establish his harem, but I do not think to exaggerate the number of harem members. For now, I'm planning to have at least 3 more, not counting Almira and Sadie. I'm also planning to give him a system, but it will be like a lower version of the systems you see. A little slow in the beginning. I tried not to get you fellows bored, but I don't know if I succeeded. Things will be a little more active when it comes to adventure arc, but the novel will still follow a calm tone. In other words, if you are more interested in topics such as betrayal or plottwist, this novel is not your cup of tea. In short, this novel is a genre that you can read more if you sit back, relax, get excited when you see something ecchi and like things like character development - empowerment, personality, romance-.
А когда продолжение? Прошло уже несколько месяцев с последней главы. На другой версии этого мира больше 700 глав уже вышло, хотя первая версия хуже.
Spoiler enthüllen Not good. The 1st chapter is written horribly. I had to force myself to continue until chapter 10 and I have to give up. The dialogues are just plain horrible and it's hard to continue reading it. I honestly think an AI can write better than this Author. It's just that bad.
I started to read it and my brain is like where have I read this before then I figured it out. after that I read the description of the book I guess and it makes sense. btw author if someone has read the other book you're gonna probably lose them after like chapter 20 or so because early game its very similar to said book
Don't read this story. If you wish to see this story go to a vampire's slice of life this story is so far just a carbon copy down to the similar familiar bound of the three family members to the scenes that they go through so far the only real difference is the names of the characters.
I am enjoying this novel. The world is similar to that of vampire slice of life but the direction of the story is different. I am looking forward for this novel getting completed. Don't drop it, please.
this novel is similar to vampire slice of life novel but with different story direction and so far i am enjoying every chapter. thumbs up to the author for creating this as i personally wanted a bit more lemon side of the novel which it delivers perfectly. so hope this novel keep continuing
very well written and i like the different route where this story is going . so keep it up and also introduce Lucifer and others soon too ..................
Apologies to all readers. I thought I'd look at the first chapters of the novel and I was speechless by the absurdity of this paragraph design. So I will edit them again. But I'm not sure how to separate Chapter 11 Magic core (i). It is the most troubled and will probably be the last. I will try to separate them carefully, but if you come across sections that feel long and constricting again, please let me know with a "paragraph comment". Thx
To explain this book differently, the path I will draw for Aiden 'mc' will be a way to sit back and read. I don't plan to build any background or plotwist. At the age of 13, he will go on an adventure and find his own mates. He will establish his harem, but I do not think to exaggerate the number of harem members. For now, I'm planning to have at least 3 more, not counting Almira and Sadie. I'm also planning to give him a system, but it will be like a lower version of the systems you see. A little slow in the beginning. I tried not to get you fellows bored, but I don't know if I succeeded. Things will be a little more active when it comes to adventure arc, but the novel will still follow a calm tone. In other words, if you are more interested in topics such as betrayal or plottwist, this novel is not your cup of tea. In short, this novel is a genre that you can read more if you sit back, relax, get excited when you see something ecchi and like things like character development - empowerment, personality, romance-.