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Good to read, even though it's made by a lazy bear! Just joking, work hard and continue to do what you like! Never dare to fall down the same hole again alright!?
Hello Author here, i thank everyone that reads my fanfic. To be fair I never thought so many people would read or even like it. Since I am a bit more honest, I will give my story 4 stars. Since I know I might not be the Best in writing stories and there might be some problems in my story. ^_^
Bro this is good... (≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(○ﾟεﾟ○)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)
I realy like the story. It diffrent from others stories. I like how he incopirate evan skins. And let's hope that author uses some other games from other franchises and older games not only new games that came only 10 years ago but also some 20 years to. Keep up the good work. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌and plz don't drop it.
there mad plot holes in this and the writing sometime doesn’ make sense but it’ not that bad takes a couple chapters to get used to tho. so be prepared
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giving you five stars not my cup of tea or coffee but it could be improved in grammar and the way mc talks also hope you continue this bye and thank you
Good to read, even though it's made by a lazy bear! Just joking, work hard and continue to do what you like! Never dare to fall down the same hole again alright!?
Hello Author here, i thank everyone that reads my fanfic. To be fair I never thought so many people would read or even like it. Since I am a bit more honest, I will give my story 4 stars. Since I know I might not be the Best in writing stories and there might be some problems in my story. ^_^
Bro this is good... (≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(○ﾟεﾟ○)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)(≧∇≦)
I realy like the story. It diffrent from others stories. I like how he incopirate evan skins. And let's hope that author uses some other games from other franchises and older games not only new games that came only 10 years ago but also some 20 years to. Keep up the good work. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌and plz don't drop it.
there mad plot holes in this and the writing sometime doesn’ make sense but it’ not that bad takes a couple chapters to get used to tho. so be prepared
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giving you five stars not my cup of tea or coffee but it could be improved in grammar and the way mc talks also hope you continue this bye and thank you