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I really liked this story and how it was developing as the MC got older and how he developed his powers as well. I was kind of put off from what he recently done to gain more power, but I was looking forward to see how it played out. It's been about 3 weeks since the last update, I'm just curious if this story is dropped altogether or not, it was one of the stories that I looked forward to reading the most.
please come back i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.............................Хуйня...........................................Полное дерьмо.....Дроп.............ты идиот и шмар........содомит....................
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Sigue es muy bueno y casi no hay historia dxd muy poca hay sigue así 👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌
started really well but unfortunately the Mc turns out to be absolutely pathetic to call the Mc Beta would be an insult to all Beta Mc. Even if the author initially said that something would change, it will only get much worse.
more please! and please bond with the cat girls more! they are to adorable. more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a part of me is disappointed and the other is not,,,,, what to do mmmmmmmmmmmmmm🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Author did you drop it this was a good novel with great potential if you are dropping it please tell us so whe don't get our hopes up ?
I really liked this story and how it was developing as the MC got older and how he developed his powers as well. I was kind of put off from what he recently done to gain more power, but I was looking forward to see how it played out. It's been about 3 weeks since the last update, I'm just curious if this story is dropped altogether or not, it was one of the stories that I looked forward to reading the most.
please come back i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.............................Хуйня...........................................Полное дерьмо.....Дроп.............ты идиот и шмар........содомит....................
Spoiler enthüllen Sigue es muy bueno y casi no hay historia dxd muy poca hay sigue así 👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌👌😸👌
started really well but unfortunately the Mc turns out to be absolutely pathetic to call the Mc Beta would be an insult to all Beta Mc. Even if the author initially said that something would change, it will only get much worse.
more please! and please bond with the cat girls more! they are to adorable. more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a part of me is disappointed and the other is not,,,,, what to do mmmmmmmmmmmmmm🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Author did you drop it this was a good novel with great potential if you are dropping it please tell us so whe don't get our hopes up ?