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I am a big fan if the author, so you may think I am a little biased, i love all the works, more some than others, but I honestly think this one shine above, it truly feel like an evolution of an already good writer, in other world you can feel it is somehow an outlandish setting, but here is just the world, you get to see it and understand it gradually, than even when it is in a colossal scope you don't find odd, the mc as others characters have depth, growth,strengh, heart all accentuated by their lacks, failure, defects, weaknesses, with a palpable improvement of all characters not just mc; to be honest I believe it should have greater following that it has, maybe it is that is somewhat slow in the beginning and certain aspects (like the main enemy controlling the system and the curses without anything in return) that even bother me in the beginning, but all this get better constantly with the exciting narrative that the pancakewitch is known for, you want a good exciting novel, that show an excelent take in reincarnation, summoning and system? this is the novel for you
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I enjoyed reading it and I’m looking forward to newest chapters, I barely notice and grammar mistakes. One chapter each day, even tho I’d like it to be two, but as author has multiple novels, I’m fine with one. Story & character development are great. The only thing lacking is world background, overally it’s worth your time.
First I should say that I am and will always be a lifelong hater of both Chris and Eric. Now that we have the disclaimer out of the way… The novel is quite good. It has a slice of life pace which is enjoyable. It allows you to experience life in another world. The MC is….not really the greatest person early on. No emperors ever are, they get addicted to causing harm for a sense of conquest, but he is already becoming better by 100 chapters (most of which is free). He Is learning that you don’t have to look at everyone to see if they have a “use” and to toss them aside if they don’t. However it still leaks through from time to time. I’ll update my review as I go through more chapters~
I love this! Good story and I would love to see more of it. it's such an interesting story and it's got me hooked but I would look to ask the author. it hasn't been updated in a month so I was wondering when you planned on picking it up again?
Pancake, I always look forward to your novels. You’re soooo good at writing and I love it. I look forward to your future novels as well!
The book is pretty slow paced at the beginning. could been better with a bit of timeskip in the childhood arc. it takes 200 chapters still 8 yrs old. Aside from that its pretty engaging afterwards. Tho the curse is pretty annoying at the beginning its a really hard nerf.
Are there lemons at work? ..............................................................................................................................
this novel is the only one I really read on this app. on all of my lists of books that I have read this novel is ranked number 1. please keep up the good work on matter what you hear or other people say
im currently at chapt 16 and i like it but can i know how many members in his harem?
hello. I'm at chapter 89 and i have a Question. is he getting rid of the curse he have in the later chapters's like after 300-400 ?
This is one of a good vampire story. Actually Qi Blood heard unfamiliar with me. It's OK the story is enjoyable.since most of vampire story is about love. Meanwhile I like vampire story with battle, conquer, politic, kingdom etc
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good story >so guys am basically I have been looking for a novel here in webnovel I hope u guys can help me [ basically it's a guy who gets iskeai n is told to choose a talent with the point but instead he chooses to add it on his height n he becomes a gaint he levels up fast goes to cultivation world etc.... can any one help me
It's a best novel I ever read in your collection and most satisfying novel.So please write this novel style like novels and story developments.
I'd say it's pretty nice, for grammar it's I would say it's great and so is the world background and I would say what made especially great are the characters, their ain't that much stiffness in conversations and the characters have their bit of complexity...welp enough of that and just read it
aside from some weird words, this is a solid novel. I hope this goes at least 2k chapters
there the occasional spilling mistake like how you type cold instead of could and how imp got type into goblins but how you update like 3 different novels everyday so I guess that can be forgiven
Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.
A wonderful Book without annoying spelling mistakes and jumbled up sentences. I also won't take responsibility for anybody laughing their souls out because of this book[img=recommend]
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things done well: world set up, the strength systems. things done less well: the characters feel a bit flat to me. things are "explained away" I find this book to be "too fantastic" too often to continue reading. there is no sense of any realism and while I'm not super far along (chapter 34) I don't find it engaging enough.
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This book is amazing and I love the steady plot progression of the mc in the early chapter. I also love the curse lucifer placed on asmodeus as a farewell middle finger to him.
I like this novel very much. RIGHT NOW I AM IN 70 CHAP. UNTIL NOW I LIKE THIS STORY VERY MUCH. PLEASE NEVER DROP THIS NOVEL 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
I'm writing this review as of chapter 212. I am an avid reader of PancakesWitch's novels and I can say that this is also another great addition to the lineup that is definitely worth reading! If that's all you needed to know, you can just stop reading now. But, I shall continue a bit more in depth with some comments and criticisms. I'll start with the positives. I like that training is where the MC gains a large amount of his power rather than through just grinding exp to level due to exp requirements to level being so high for him as well as his circumstances. I also like that he's not some weeb from Earth that is hyped to get a system like most others would be. He actually is so ancient that he finds the system and it's game-like elements kind of childish and bothersome. He also achieved his power in his past life without a system so he isn't even relying on it all that much. It's just a little bonus thing to him. Now for the negatives. The curses he gets that make him need 100X more exp to level, 100X more proficiency to gain and level skills, makes it so that his growth is slower, but each level gives more than it would for anyone else. While this is a fair tradeoff, from a narrative perspective, it means that he is growing slower than most other protagonists would. I don't dislike that inherently, it's just something you have to get used to. It's action packed while still feeling somewhat slower paced. He also doesn't get many skills as a result of the curses. I think the idea is for him to gradually grow up over the course of years to gain more power. That does seem like the direction the story is going, especially since it would be very weird for an 8 year old to have a legitimate harem. He is gaining skills to gain more exp and with time he will probably gain more opportunities to gain exp. So hopefully, the story will pick up in pace at that point. Until then, I'm quite enjoying this!
Spoiler enthüllen I am a big fan if the author, so you may think I am a little biased, i love all the works, more some than others, but I honestly think this one shine above, it truly feel like an evolution of an already good writer, in other world you can feel it is somehow an outlandish setting, but here is just the world, you get to see it and understand it gradually, than even when it is in a colossal scope you don't find odd, the mc as others characters have depth, growth,strengh, heart all accentuated by their lacks, failure, defects, weaknesses, with a palpable improvement of all characters not just mc; to be honest I believe it should have greater following that it has, maybe it is that is somewhat slow in the beginning and certain aspects (like the main enemy controlling the system and the curses without anything in return) that even bother me in the beginning, but all this get better constantly with the exciting narrative that the pancakewitch is known for, you want a good exciting novel, that show an excelent take in reincarnation, summoning and system? this is the novel for you
Spoiler enthüllen I enjoyed reading it and I’m looking forward to newest chapters, I barely notice and grammar mistakes. One chapter each day, even tho I’d like it to be two, but as author has multiple novels, I’m fine with one. Story & character development are great. The only thing lacking is world background, overally it’s worth your time.
First I should say that I am and will always be a lifelong hater of both Chris and Eric. Now that we have the disclaimer out of the way… The novel is quite good. It has a slice of life pace which is enjoyable. It allows you to experience life in another world. The MC is….not really the greatest person early on. No emperors ever are, they get addicted to causing harm for a sense of conquest, but he is already becoming better by 100 chapters (most of which is free). He Is learning that you don’t have to look at everyone to see if they have a “use” and to toss them aside if they don’t. However it still leaks through from time to time. I’ll update my review as I go through more chapters~
I love this! Good story and I would love to see more of it. it's such an interesting story and it's got me hooked but I would look to ask the author. it hasn't been updated in a month so I was wondering when you planned on picking it up again?
Pancake, I always look forward to your novels. You’re soooo good at writing and I love it. I look forward to your future novels as well!
The book is pretty slow paced at the beginning. could been better with a bit of timeskip in the childhood arc. it takes 200 chapters still 8 yrs old. Aside from that its pretty engaging afterwards. Tho the curse is pretty annoying at the beginning its a really hard nerf.
Are there lemons at work? ..............................................................................................................................
this novel is the only one I really read on this app. on all of my lists of books that I have read this novel is ranked number 1. please keep up the good work on matter what you hear or other people say
im currently at chapt 16 and i like it but can i know how many members in his harem?
hello. I'm at chapter 89 and i have a Question. is he getting rid of the curse he have in the later chapters's like after 300-400 ?
This is one of a good vampire story. Actually Qi Blood heard unfamiliar with me. It's OK the story is enjoyable.since most of vampire story is about love. Meanwhile I like vampire story with battle, conquer, politic, kingdom etc
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good story >so guys am basically I have been looking for a novel here in webnovel I hope u guys can help me [ basically it's a guy who gets iskeai n is told to choose a talent with the point but instead he chooses to add it on his height n he becomes a gaint he levels up fast goes to cultivation world etc.... can any one help me
It's a best novel I ever read in your collection and most satisfying novel.So please write this novel style like novels and story developments.
I'd say it's pretty nice, for grammar it's I would say it's great and so is the world background and I would say what made especially great are the characters, their ain't that much stiffness in conversations and the characters have their bit of complexity...welp enough of that and just read it
aside from some weird words, this is a solid novel. I hope this goes at least 2k chapters
there the occasional spilling mistake like how you type cold instead of could and how imp got type into goblins but how you update like 3 different novels everyday so I guess that can be forgiven
Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.
A wonderful Book without annoying spelling mistakes and jumbled up sentences. I also won't take responsibility for anybody laughing their souls out because of this book[img=recommend]
btw I haven't read this at all but I know it's good because shaltear is this books front cover. ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯ ╭╮╱╭┳╮╭╮╭┳╮╱╭╮ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃┃┃┃┃┃┃╱┃┃ ┃┃╱┃┃╰╯╰╯┃┃╱┃┃ ┃╰━╯┣╮╭╮╭┫╰━╯┃ ╰━━━╯╰╯╰╯╰━━━╯
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things done well: world set up, the strength systems. things done less well: the characters feel a bit flat to me. things are "explained away" I find this book to be "too fantastic" too often to continue reading. there is no sense of any realism and while I'm not super far along (chapter 34) I don't find it engaging enough.
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Spoiler enthüllen This book is amazing and I love the steady plot progression of the mc in the early chapter. I also love the curse lucifer placed on asmodeus as a farewell middle finger to him.
I like this novel very much. RIGHT NOW I AM IN 70 CHAP. UNTIL NOW I LIKE THIS STORY VERY MUCH. PLEASE NEVER DROP THIS NOVEL 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
I'm writing this review as of chapter 212. I am an avid reader of PancakesWitch's novels and I can say that this is also another great addition to the lineup that is definitely worth reading! If that's all you needed to know, you can just stop reading now. But, I shall continue a bit more in depth with some comments and criticisms. I'll start with the positives. I like that training is where the MC gains a large amount of his power rather than through just grinding exp to level due to exp requirements to level being so high for him as well as his circumstances. I also like that he's not some weeb from Earth that is hyped to get a system like most others would be. He actually is so ancient that he finds the system and it's game-like elements kind of childish and bothersome. He also achieved his power in his past life without a system so he isn't even relying on it all that much. It's just a little bonus thing to him. Now for the negatives. The curses he gets that make him need 100X more exp to level, 100X more proficiency to gain and level skills, makes it so that his growth is slower, but each level gives more than it would for anyone else. While this is a fair tradeoff, from a narrative perspective, it means that he is growing slower than most other protagonists would. I don't dislike that inherently, it's just something you have to get used to. It's action packed while still feeling somewhat slower paced. He also doesn't get many skills as a result of the curses. I think the idea is for him to gradually grow up over the course of years to gain more power. That does seem like the direction the story is going, especially since it would be very weird for an 8 year old to have a legitimate harem. He is gaining skills to gain more exp and with time he will probably gain more opportunities to gain exp. So hopefully, the story will pick up in pace at that point. Until then, I'm quite enjoying this!
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