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Same thing my friend, boring thing, the hero gains superpowers, saves a bunch of innocent people, becomes a team, finds tons of talents to help them, wakes up loyal to him, so many beauties fall in love with him, saves the world, and his cute, beautiful daughter will have a super talent, lol Something boring and unimportant is present in all novels, my friend, if you can create a villain that kills innocents, for the sake of benefits and increase his strength, I guarantee you will double your followers, with the large amount of chapters you write
A really good story up to 31. The reaction of the mc in the situation makes no sense at all and doesn't match the personality that the mc has shown before, which is disappointing
I started and I couldn’t put it down. I'm in love with Ryvers character, his strength. I want to see more of him. Don't stop writing or else🥺 It's a bit gore but not on the extreme. I don't usually read books like these but the constant action captivated me. It was fastpaced and got my heart racing. I couldn’t put it down until the last word.
Ryver's dream confused me at first but I understand it now. Please publish more.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I don't like such stories but I love this one.
wow! this is a nice book! I find myself wondering and well, I will love to partake in this. lol, just kidding! the story is really fascinating.
It's good but sadly the author don't have his priorities straight per consequence he don't update the story. At this point you might has well drop you other novels just to update this one.
Same thing my friend, boring thing, the hero gains superpowers, saves a bunch of innocent people, becomes a team, finds tons of talents to help them, wakes up loyal to him, so many beauties fall in love with him, saves the world, and his cute, beautiful daughter will have a super talent, lol Something boring and unimportant is present in all novels, my friend, if you can create a villain that kills innocents, for the sake of benefits and increase his strength, I guarantee you will double your followers, with the large amount of chapters you write
A really good story up to 31. The reaction of the mc in the situation makes no sense at all and doesn't match the personality that the mc has shown before, which is disappointing
I started and I couldn’t put it down. I'm in love with Ryvers character, his strength. I want to see more of him. Don't stop writing or else🥺 It's a bit gore but not on the extreme. I don't usually read books like these but the constant action captivated me. It was fastpaced and got my heart racing. I couldn’t put it down until the last word.
Ryver's dream confused me at first but I understand it now. Please publish more.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I don't like such stories but I love this one.
wow! this is a nice book! I find myself wondering and well, I will love to partake in this. lol, just kidding! the story is really fascinating.
It's good but sadly the author don't have his priorities straight per consequence he don't update the story. At this point you might has well drop you other novels just to update this one.