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Crocs_is_Dead

Yo, I am Crocs, and this is my first time trying my hand in writing novels. There are definitely shortcomings, but I’m learning more as I continue to write the story. Hope you guys enjoy it!

2yr
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Senelcar

First of all : a pretty good read all around. World building is nice and not rushed, most characters are pretty well written. I sadly had to stop reading at around chapters 120 because of the man characters becoming boring as hell, and wasting all the story/lore building of the author. it might get better in latter chapters, but i don't have the motivation to read tens or hundreds of chapter about such a boring MC

13d
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Stananuly

This is my first book review even after completing approximately 4 other books. It was really well written, character development, word building, even the side characters were carried along. I love it.

1mth
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muche
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[img=recommend][img=recommend]nice book,i like

1mth
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Nagendra_P_5799

Truly a Hidden gem, story is too good and power system is in depth. Romance is also good it's not like those cabbage collection. Mc is logical, smart(not to rocket science level but above normal), unique power, overall you will regret if you miss it. I wish it had R8 too, author skips this part (well he gives a little touch once for first time "harvest" but not too depth)

1mth
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Daoistaldo7

Honestly, I'm around ch 530, and starting to find the main character's personality boring af. He isn't smart, and basically dumb af too as well as being basically unhinged. At the beginning, him being unhinged is understandable, but eventually there has gotta be growth. There is none. He reminds me of dumb side characters who do things without thinking, and the type that typically gets beat up because he is unhinged and annoying. Also character interactions are unrealistic. He literary broke a growth type weapon for no reason, like it was nothing, and the blacksmith who created it was eventually like "Oh well, your new non growth sword is cool". Can you imagine if you broke something your dad put his life's work into making? He would not be getting over it that easily if ever. Basically my biggest issue is too many unrealistic scenarios and interactions between characters that just don't make sense. Only reason character alive is plot armor. Not skill, not his space abilities which make it difficult to kill him around his level (not that it would have matters with how he acts around people much stronger than him), and definitely not intelligence. No depth to character.

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2mth
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Nagendra_P_5799

Pure gold guys hidden gem. Mc is not child personality, hiding powers or stupid 2iq brain, he's grows as he travels and character development is best in this one. Romance development is one of rare you find these days, not like picking cabbages on supermarket. World development and power rating is also good better than 95% novels out there. Read least 100 cp before you dicide because you get a clear outline of story, world building, character development by then

2mth
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CECILIA_KIRUI

A very good book which I am still reading although it has some uniqueness there are still many similarities with other novels. I do have to ask if you have uploaded this book to any other novel app?

2mth
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i_love_cultivation

It has potential but you ruined it with all the oxymorons for eg, You can only be out going if your personality is a extravert personality. But your Character believes he is a out gng person but he isnt even willing to talk to other ppl That's how a INTROVERT behave.

2mth
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vervo1
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while there are many positive qualities about this novel, and I think the author had some good ideas; if you're the type of person who can't stand inconsistencies and plot holes this novel will drive you nuts. There were times I couldn't decide whether the author had amnesia or was writing with A.I.

3mth
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NicholasAren

check out the review I commented under it's very well thought out and written exemplary.

3mth
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andres_rodriguez_8748

This is one of the few books that is able to describe the internal struggle of a protagonist well. In other books I’ve read the protagonist always have emotions and you can connect to them well. But what this book does well is explain the mental struggles that come with the protagonist as they seek power. It’s not like other books where a protagonist can feel heartbroken when their family die and become a demon only to come out of it quickly 50 chapters later once they were “englightened”. This book shows the constant struggle that the main character took to better himself mentally. He was flawed but throughout the book he took many steps to fix his traumas. That is what really stood out to me as it really sets this book apart from others. The power systems and plot of this book are fantastic as well. It mixes many aspects such as fantasy, si fi, and cultivation together in a fun way and I highly recommend it

4mth
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GhostDost

First half was good ( before going to heavenly world) afterwards it became trash (like author gain enlightenment that he is Chinese so just make it trash) What a waste of time. Huge disappointment.

4mth
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algrife93

if you lack a brain then you will enjoy this novel. the protagonist is too stupid(beyond normal human bounds), even a 1 year old baby is far smarter than whatever excuse for a protagonist this dumb thing is. I honestly couldn’t get through the novel due to how dumn the protagonist is,(regardless of how much i tried). every chapter is a reminder that the protagonist is most likely the stupidest human in existence. I don’t really see the appeal of dumb protagonist. If you enjoy Dumb protagonists then this novel is for you, and i’d highly recommend it as you will never find a another novel with a dumber protagonist.

4mth
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Akeni0
LV 13 Badge

Can anyone tell me when the war with nox really starts and not just the small skirmish here and there

5mth
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DMLX_Legend

I like this book ... But it will be okay if can some specific details because I get confused sometimes

5mth
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OmegaYellow

This was a great book. Would like to know a little more about certain characters side stories. Elena and the Valkyrie, Rue and the emotions, Iris and her quest, etc.

5mth
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Kabo_Chamo

it has a good pace and can be easily understandable, one of the greatest reads on webnovel.[img=recommend][img=gift]

5mth
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anthony_wilson

I loved reading this every day over the past 2 years it has been something I look forward to every day. thank you so much for committing to writing this it means the world to me. now I'll go through a small black whole as I try to figure out what to read next

5mth
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Michelle_Aspberg

One of the best stories I’ve ever read! If anyone wants a recommendation of a story then try “Is that a wisp?”. It’s also very long and well written like this one, at least in my opinion [img=recommend]

5mth
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Vjeaxx
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I’m not the best at reviews but this novel has been one of my favorite daily reads for a long time now

6mth
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AdiKai

reading it from the start and i can say i truly enjoyed it

6mth
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Styc
LV 14 Badge

I love this book to be honest it is the authors first book and the earlier chapters are a bit rough but this story is amazing and feels like you are seeing a real human grow up and experience these situations he doesn’t brush trauma off like dust and actually battles it a wonderful story and thank you crocs for this story

6mth
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Logan_Larson_8107

Very enjoyable read. Found myself waiting for chapter releases like a favorite TV show.

6mth
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Emilly_y

I read up to 136 and I'm dropping it, the author has childish writing even if you like the world he created, the plot and everything else can't stand the repetition and all the mistakes. For example the mc will probably have his second male friend in chapter 136 but it's the same thing as the first friend, the mc doesn't fight people as much as possible and almost dies in chapter 136 like an idiot because of that, in chapters 100 + the mc is afraid of his emotions but in the illusion he had he wasn't afraid of his emotions so much so that he didn't break the illusion to take advantage of it anymore. This is so contradictory, the mc devours monsters to become stronger but any normal person practically has the Same physical statistics as him, the mc wanted a peaceful and calm life but in a flash he changes his mind. If the author stopped being so volatile in his writing, he would improve 70% of the novel.

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6mth
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VectorCollector

Love reading how much Damian struggled to get as strong as he is, blood, gore, losing his sanity and almost becoming full beast and losing himself, even getting a powerful space mage's inheritance, it took all of this just to start his journey to become a truly dominating person.

6mth
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Richard_Main

Good read, I enjoy the storyline and the characters.

6mth
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DrEx
LV 13 Badge

One of the underated novel. Give me a try, you guys won't regret it.

6mth
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Obito_x_Rin3

At first and even now I think the story has potential but the author is making it repetitive. The MC has been nursing the same character flaw for the last hundred chapters that the author keeps bringing up but the worst part of this story is the MC will realize his weaknesses and instead of working on it the author finds a way finds a way to add another ability that is either forgotten or never used. On a side note the mc is a battle junky that never uses his full strength in a fight so it’ll be interesting which will infuriate you.

8mth
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Mihai123

18+? If harem without 18+ is lame, so i want to know before what i can expect from this

9mth
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Arodicus

Early review. I have read 20 chapters so far and I really hope author does improve in writing ability as the story goes on. To start I want to say the author’s biggest mistake at the beginning of the story is saying it has been 5 years since the awakening. It put in place such a hard inconsistency for the whole beginning so far. Mc has had abilities but never trained / leveled them. Mc works on sword aura after being trapped for a few months and humanity in 5 years never unlocked it. We won’t even go into the fact the mc all of a sudden starts using his ability like a pro only after being stuck. The beginning is almost identical to solo leveling as many other reviews stated. Father dissappeared, mother has mana sick body, there is a healer girl “secretly” in love with him… I read SL a few years ago so I figured I wouldn’t mind giving something similar to read. So I won’t say that his start is bad per se. I think the story has potential and it currently has well over 1000 ch so I will give it another 20-50 ch to decide if I want to continue.

10mth
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Crocs_is_Dead

Yo, I am Crocs, and this is my first time trying my hand in writing novels. There are definitely shortcomings, but I’m learning more as I continue to write the story. Hope you guys enjoy it!

2yr
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Senelcar

First of all : a pretty good read all around. World building is nice and not rushed, most characters are pretty well written. I sadly had to stop reading at around chapters 120 because of the man characters becoming boring as hell, and wasting all the story/lore building of the author. it might get better in latter chapters, but i don't have the motivation to read tens or hundreds of chapter about such a boring MC

13d
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Stananuly

This is my first book review even after completing approximately 4 other books. It was really well written, character development, word building, even the side characters were carried along. I love it.

1mth
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muche
LV 2 Badge

[img=recommend][img=recommend]nice book,i like

1mth
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Nagendra_P_5799

Truly a Hidden gem, story is too good and power system is in depth. Romance is also good it's not like those cabbage collection. Mc is logical, smart(not to rocket science level but above normal), unique power, overall you will regret if you miss it. I wish it had R8 too, author skips this part (well he gives a little touch once for first time "harvest" but not too depth)

1mth
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Daoistaldo7

Honestly, I'm around ch 530, and starting to find the main character's personality boring af. He isn't smart, and basically dumb af too as well as being basically unhinged. At the beginning, him being unhinged is understandable, but eventually there has gotta be growth. There is none. He reminds me of dumb side characters who do things without thinking, and the type that typically gets beat up because he is unhinged and annoying. Also character interactions are unrealistic. He literary broke a growth type weapon for no reason, like it was nothing, and the blacksmith who created it was eventually like "Oh well, your new non growth sword is cool". Can you imagine if you broke something your dad put his life's work into making? He would not be getting over it that easily if ever. Basically my biggest issue is too many unrealistic scenarios and interactions between characters that just don't make sense. Only reason character alive is plot armor. Not skill, not his space abilities which make it difficult to kill him around his level (not that it would have matters with how he acts around people much stronger than him), and definitely not intelligence. No depth to character.

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2mth
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Nagendra_P_5799

Pure gold guys hidden gem. Mc is not child personality, hiding powers or stupid 2iq brain, he's grows as he travels and character development is best in this one. Romance development is one of rare you find these days, not like picking cabbages on supermarket. World development and power rating is also good better than 95% novels out there. Read least 100 cp before you dicide because you get a clear outline of story, world building, character development by then

2mth
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CECILIA_KIRUI

A very good book which I am still reading although it has some uniqueness there are still many similarities with other novels. I do have to ask if you have uploaded this book to any other novel app?

2mth
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i_love_cultivation

It has potential but you ruined it with all the oxymorons for eg, You can only be out going if your personality is a extravert personality. But your Character believes he is a out gng person but he isnt even willing to talk to other ppl That's how a INTROVERT behave.

2mth
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vervo1
LV 14 Badge

while there are many positive qualities about this novel, and I think the author had some good ideas; if you're the type of person who can't stand inconsistencies and plot holes this novel will drive you nuts. There were times I couldn't decide whether the author had amnesia or was writing with A.I.

3mth
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NicholasAren

check out the review I commented under it's very well thought out and written exemplary.

3mth
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andres_rodriguez_8748

This is one of the few books that is able to describe the internal struggle of a protagonist well. In other books I’ve read the protagonist always have emotions and you can connect to them well. But what this book does well is explain the mental struggles that come with the protagonist as they seek power. It’s not like other books where a protagonist can feel heartbroken when their family die and become a demon only to come out of it quickly 50 chapters later once they were “englightened”. This book shows the constant struggle that the main character took to better himself mentally. He was flawed but throughout the book he took many steps to fix his traumas. That is what really stood out to me as it really sets this book apart from others. The power systems and plot of this book are fantastic as well. It mixes many aspects such as fantasy, si fi, and cultivation together in a fun way and I highly recommend it

4mth
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GhostDost

First half was good ( before going to heavenly world) afterwards it became trash (like author gain enlightenment that he is Chinese so just make it trash) What a waste of time. Huge disappointment.

4mth
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algrife93

if you lack a brain then you will enjoy this novel. the protagonist is too stupid(beyond normal human bounds), even a 1 year old baby is far smarter than whatever excuse for a protagonist this dumb thing is. I honestly couldn’t get through the novel due to how dumn the protagonist is,(regardless of how much i tried). every chapter is a reminder that the protagonist is most likely the stupidest human in existence. I don’t really see the appeal of dumb protagonist. If you enjoy Dumb protagonists then this novel is for you, and i’d highly recommend it as you will never find a another novel with a dumber protagonist.

4mth
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Akeni0
LV 13 Badge

Can anyone tell me when the war with nox really starts and not just the small skirmish here and there

5mth
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DMLX_Legend

I like this book ... But it will be okay if can some specific details because I get confused sometimes

5mth
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OmegaYellow

This was a great book. Would like to know a little more about certain characters side stories. Elena and the Valkyrie, Rue and the emotions, Iris and her quest, etc.

5mth
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Kabo_Chamo

it has a good pace and can be easily understandable, one of the greatest reads on webnovel.[img=recommend][img=gift]

5mth
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anthony_wilson

I loved reading this every day over the past 2 years it has been something I look forward to every day. thank you so much for committing to writing this it means the world to me. now I'll go through a small black whole as I try to figure out what to read next

5mth
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Michelle_Aspberg

One of the best stories I’ve ever read! If anyone wants a recommendation of a story then try “Is that a wisp?”. It’s also very long and well written like this one, at least in my opinion [img=recommend]

5mth
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Vjeaxx
LV 15 Badge

I’m not the best at reviews but this novel has been one of my favorite daily reads for a long time now

6mth
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AdiKai

reading it from the start and i can say i truly enjoyed it

6mth
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Styc
LV 14 Badge

I love this book to be honest it is the authors first book and the earlier chapters are a bit rough but this story is amazing and feels like you are seeing a real human grow up and experience these situations he doesn’t brush trauma off like dust and actually battles it a wonderful story and thank you crocs for this story

6mth
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Logan_Larson_8107

Very enjoyable read. Found myself waiting for chapter releases like a favorite TV show.

6mth
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Emilly_y

I read up to 136 and I'm dropping it, the author has childish writing even if you like the world he created, the plot and everything else can't stand the repetition and all the mistakes. For example the mc will probably have his second male friend in chapter 136 but it's the same thing as the first friend, the mc doesn't fight people as much as possible and almost dies in chapter 136 like an idiot because of that, in chapters 100 + the mc is afraid of his emotions but in the illusion he had he wasn't afraid of his emotions so much so that he didn't break the illusion to take advantage of it anymore. This is so contradictory, the mc devours monsters to become stronger but any normal person practically has the Same physical statistics as him, the mc wanted a peaceful and calm life but in a flash he changes his mind. If the author stopped being so volatile in his writing, he would improve 70% of the novel.

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6mth
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VectorCollector

Love reading how much Damian struggled to get as strong as he is, blood, gore, losing his sanity and almost becoming full beast and losing himself, even getting a powerful space mage's inheritance, it took all of this just to start his journey to become a truly dominating person.

6mth
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Richard_Main

Good read, I enjoy the storyline and the characters.

6mth
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DrEx
LV 13 Badge

One of the underated novel. Give me a try, you guys won't regret it.

6mth
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Obito_x_Rin3

At first and even now I think the story has potential but the author is making it repetitive. The MC has been nursing the same character flaw for the last hundred chapters that the author keeps bringing up but the worst part of this story is the MC will realize his weaknesses and instead of working on it the author finds a way finds a way to add another ability that is either forgotten or never used. On a side note the mc is a battle junky that never uses his full strength in a fight so it’ll be interesting which will infuriate you.

8mth
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Mihai123

18+? If harem without 18+ is lame, so i want to know before what i can expect from this

9mth
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Arodicus

Early review. I have read 20 chapters so far and I really hope author does improve in writing ability as the story goes on. To start I want to say the author’s biggest mistake at the beginning of the story is saying it has been 5 years since the awakening. It put in place such a hard inconsistency for the whole beginning so far. Mc has had abilities but never trained / leveled them. Mc works on sword aura after being trapped for a few months and humanity in 5 years never unlocked it. We won’t even go into the fact the mc all of a sudden starts using his ability like a pro only after being stuck. The beginning is almost identical to solo leveling as many other reviews stated. Father dissappeared, mother has mana sick body, there is a healer girl “secretly” in love with him… I read SL a few years ago so I figured I wouldn’t mind giving something similar to read. So I won’t say that his start is bad per se. I think the story has potential and it currently has well over 1000 ch so I will give it another 20-50 ch to decide if I want to continue.

10mth
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