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nice after reading that anti hero and cringey lines like he will protect his 'loved ones' I was gonna drop it but I changed my mind after reading the reviews. idk if this is the author's trick to invite villain readers but good job anyway
Current chapter: 24 Am I enjoying the story? yes, yes I am. I would love to see more training arcs and fewer time skips but that is just me nitpicking. The time skips make sense because there is nothing important to mention during that time period; which makes sense. The character interactions are interesting enough for the timeslips to be natural. Although I wish there were more emotional moments Like the first lord of the rings moment (you know the one). I like the powers the MC has but I feel like some of his jutsus feel undeserved. This does not mean the MC feels too overpowered but it doesn't feel like he earned some of them, but that becomes a moot point when you consider what a Sharingan is. Overall I intend to continue reading this story. It has great potential for future fights, character growth, and future relationships. PS: in some of the dialogues he has the " Sasuke: Naarrruuuutoooo Naruto: Sassuuuukeee " writing style, which I personally do not like but in the author's defense, that style of dialogue writing has become less as I continue reading. PPS: He did not write "Naaaarrruuuutoooo...", I just used that as an example of what the dialogues look like.
This is my evaluation this PSYCHO fanfic. MC is a Psychopath who kill everyone including innocent, kids, women and old, he doesnt care if the girl will get ra**ed after killing his innocent father when he answered the direction. Even after gettin ANTI NTR wish, He doesnt trust his women and implant bombing chakra which will kill them if they betray and control kushina loyalty . All he needs is subordinates.
don't read!! the author is an idiot, well considering he was an Indian... he always made that the mc was not dense like other mc, he was indeed not dense but an idiot without a clear head. his mind always changes and does not even have a clear goal, he wanted to portray an arrogant character like how Chinese do but instead make the mc idiot, bro no one in the right mind would not like an inlove girl( Sakura ) even in the mc was dark.. bro you said he was not a psychopath. well, considering that you wanted the readers to feel frustrated bro you're wrong, you look like an idiot. the author always asks for a harem member poll but this idiot decided on the harem itself .. hahaha man what's the use of interacting with the readers and asking their opinions if you can't even let their suggestions happen? besides, this is what every fanfic writer messed up in their story, fanfic was a genre to follow and fulfill the reader's illusions or delusions, if you want to have a lot of readers, you should at least if not all fulfill their dreams.
Just read your other DXD novel, I hope this will live up to that book. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
At the beginning…. The wirting but bad but around chapter 30, it improved a ton. really like the villian vibes I am getting from MC. ………….. I will either delete this review or write a new one after reading further.
I really liked your ff. I read it in 1 day. Just wanted to ask to add Hermione to the harem. I was hurt to see what happened to her in canon. She dreamed of becoming a minister in the Ministry of Magic and she has the will and tries her best, but she becomes just a clerk, it's a shame!!! I hope the author does not waste her talent and agree that Emma Watson is a gorgeous!! (Google Translate)
Полная херня, mc думает членом, к тому-же стоит тег злодей , но на самом деле он просто мудак...........................................................................................................................................................................................
Ruthless MC that pursues power but cares about his close ones and them only? Count me in!
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I hope canon fodder 1 will be hokage. hmm so ı need to write so many words to write a review. what should ı write? ohh I think I know. canon fodder 1 you are the best I support you.
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yo author make mc go to dc and marvel pick up all hot and cute girls like raven and magik also storm and a few others from x-men and mcu -----------------
while the naruto part of the story was wonderful it changed to (hp)+multiverse without much of a "why". if you like naruto, that's gonna be a wild ride but be prepared to be randomly introduced to a scenario change
this is a great fanfic and i like the plot especially the development of mc's attitude which sees "them" in the world as npc or pawns. but as the story progresses at least mc gets a little better... even though it's still cruel and manipulative... author,, add the sexy samui and cold konan in the harem... the rest don't matter anymore..... just opinions :D
Saya suka alur ceritanya yang bagus dan sangat menarik.. Yah saya tidak sabar untuk bergabungnya Samui atau Konan Hehehehe....i like this😂 Tetap semangat author sama.. Saya dukung karya anda
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I love this book even though some may say that it is not worth it and other stuff, please consider reading this if you are a naruto fan and have caught up with everything from naruto, to naruto shippuden, to boruto. You will have a fun time reading this
You should move the chapter 'A Lone Soul' to Volume 1. If I didn't read a comment telling me about that chapter I probably would have never read it since when you start the fic it opens at the first chapter of Volume 1.
Я увидел низкую оценку, поэтому хотел поставить высокую. На самом деле мне уже какое-то время назад хотелось почитать что-нибудь просто с очень сильным героем, но не лишенное логики. Этот фанфик мне хорошо зашёл. Хотя я и признаю ряд его недостатков, он мне всё ещё нравится. Спасибо. ПС. Лень было писать на англ. у меня ещё последняя глава не прочитана! :)
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Takes a while for the story to develop but nothing unnecessary was added so overall it's a good story. The MC may have went a bit overboard by killing everybody he ran into as Killua but it helped him in joining akatsuki so it wasn't meaningless. Hiruzen is like a meaner Dumbledore who would do anything he needs to raise pawns which is how I have always seen him so that's good.
TFH's review is pretty much perfect it, started off good, i'm just putting my two cents in. The update stability is great and writing is readable, not really engaging, but readable nonetheless. the main character is a twisted man child that has no grasp on the concept of morality when the author wills it so. he Brainwashes people to be 'loyal' and then the author excuses the behaviour as even 'good' people are 'bad' in Naruto... The author himself admitted to only knowing stuff about Naruto until up to Sasuke leaving the village AKA nothing, and i'll tell you now, it really shows when you read it. He's made enemy adults pedophiles as justification for his psychotic MC to kill them. Not much to say for character development since the brainwashing ruined that for me. Can't develop a character when they're now a robot instilled with the concept of 'loyalty' with a distinguishable trait. I.E Hinata has white eyes... I mean she literally accepts a harem because of the brainwashing BS because we all know thats never happening with the real Hinata, this here highlighting the lack of knowledge from the original source.
Yo Crazy Penguin here, since this is my fanfic i have the power to write a 5 star review. Please remember this is my first book please go easy on me. This review is basically to answer some of your question; if you have any.
nice after reading that anti hero and cringey lines like he will protect his 'loved ones' I was gonna drop it but I changed my mind after reading the reviews. idk if this is the author's trick to invite villain readers but good job anyway
Current chapter: 24 Am I enjoying the story? yes, yes I am. I would love to see more training arcs and fewer time skips but that is just me nitpicking. The time skips make sense because there is nothing important to mention during that time period; which makes sense. The character interactions are interesting enough for the timeslips to be natural. Although I wish there were more emotional moments Like the first lord of the rings moment (you know the one). I like the powers the MC has but I feel like some of his jutsus feel undeserved. This does not mean the MC feels too overpowered but it doesn't feel like he earned some of them, but that becomes a moot point when you consider what a Sharingan is. Overall I intend to continue reading this story. It has great potential for future fights, character growth, and future relationships. PS: in some of the dialogues he has the " Sasuke: Naarrruuuutoooo Naruto: Sassuuuukeee " writing style, which I personally do not like but in the author's defense, that style of dialogue writing has become less as I continue reading. PPS: He did not write "Naaaarrruuuutoooo...", I just used that as an example of what the dialogues look like.
This is my evaluation this PSYCHO fanfic. MC is a Psychopath who kill everyone including innocent, kids, women and old, he doesnt care if the girl will get ra**ed after killing his innocent father when he answered the direction. Even after gettin ANTI NTR wish, He doesnt trust his women and implant bombing chakra which will kill them if they betray and control kushina loyalty . All he needs is subordinates.
don't read!! the author is an idiot, well considering he was an Indian... he always made that the mc was not dense like other mc, he was indeed not dense but an idiot without a clear head. his mind always changes and does not even have a clear goal, he wanted to portray an arrogant character like how Chinese do but instead make the mc idiot, bro no one in the right mind would not like an inlove girl( Sakura ) even in the mc was dark.. bro you said he was not a psychopath. well, considering that you wanted the readers to feel frustrated bro you're wrong, you look like an idiot. the author always asks for a harem member poll but this idiot decided on the harem itself .. hahaha man what's the use of interacting with the readers and asking their opinions if you can't even let their suggestions happen? besides, this is what every fanfic writer messed up in their story, fanfic was a genre to follow and fulfill the reader's illusions or delusions, if you want to have a lot of readers, you should at least if not all fulfill their dreams.
Just read your other DXD novel, I hope this will live up to that book. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
At the beginning…. The wirting but bad but around chapter 30, it improved a ton. really like the villian vibes I am getting from MC. ………….. I will either delete this review or write a new one after reading further.
I really liked your ff. I read it in 1 day. Just wanted to ask to add Hermione to the harem. I was hurt to see what happened to her in canon. She dreamed of becoming a minister in the Ministry of Magic and she has the will and tries her best, but she becomes just a clerk, it's a shame!!! I hope the author does not waste her talent and agree that Emma Watson is a gorgeous!! (Google Translate)
Полная херня, mc думает членом, к тому-же стоит тег злодей , но на самом деле он просто мудак...........................................................................................................................................................................................
Ruthless MC that pursues power but cares about his close ones and them only? Count me in!
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GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
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I hope canon fodder 1 will be hokage. hmm so ı need to write so many words to write a review. what should ı write? ohh I think I know. canon fodder 1 you are the best I support you.
Spoiler enthüllen yo author make mc go to dc and marvel pick up all hot and cute girls like raven and magik also storm and a few others from x-men and mcu -----------------
while the naruto part of the story was wonderful it changed to (hp)+multiverse without much of a "why". if you like naruto, that's gonna be a wild ride but be prepared to be randomly introduced to a scenario change
this is a great fanfic and i like the plot especially the development of mc's attitude which sees "them" in the world as npc or pawns. but as the story progresses at least mc gets a little better... even though it's still cruel and manipulative... author,, add the sexy samui and cold konan in the harem... the rest don't matter anymore..... just opinions :D
Saya suka alur ceritanya yang bagus dan sangat menarik.. Yah saya tidak sabar untuk bergabungnya Samui atau Konan Hehehehe....i like this😂 Tetap semangat author sama.. Saya dukung karya anda
In support of the autho ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love this book even though some may say that it is not worth it and other stuff, please consider reading this if you are a naruto fan and have caught up with everything from naruto, to naruto shippuden, to boruto. You will have a fun time reading this
You should move the chapter 'A Lone Soul' to Volume 1. If I didn't read a comment telling me about that chapter I probably would have never read it since when you start the fic it opens at the first chapter of Volume 1.
Я увидел низкую оценку, поэтому хотел поставить высокую. На самом деле мне уже какое-то время назад хотелось почитать что-нибудь просто с очень сильным героем, но не лишенное логики. Этот фанфик мне хорошо зашёл. Хотя я и признаю ряд его недостатков, он мне всё ещё нравится. Спасибо. ПС. Лень было писать на англ. у меня ещё последняя глава не прочитана! :)
Spoiler enthüllen Takes a while for the story to develop but nothing unnecessary was added so overall it's a good story. The MC may have went a bit overboard by killing everybody he ran into as Killua but it helped him in joining akatsuki so it wasn't meaningless. Hiruzen is like a meaner Dumbledore who would do anything he needs to raise pawns which is how I have always seen him so that's good.
TFH's review is pretty much perfect it, started off good, i'm just putting my two cents in. The update stability is great and writing is readable, not really engaging, but readable nonetheless. the main character is a twisted man child that has no grasp on the concept of morality when the author wills it so. he Brainwashes people to be 'loyal' and then the author excuses the behaviour as even 'good' people are 'bad' in Naruto... The author himself admitted to only knowing stuff about Naruto until up to Sasuke leaving the village AKA nothing, and i'll tell you now, it really shows when you read it. He's made enemy adults pedophiles as justification for his psychotic MC to kill them. Not much to say for character development since the brainwashing ruined that for me. Can't develop a character when they're now a robot instilled with the concept of 'loyalty' with a distinguishable trait. I.E Hinata has white eyes... I mean she literally accepts a harem because of the brainwashing BS because we all know thats never happening with the real Hinata, this here highlighting the lack of knowledge from the original source.
Yo Crazy Penguin here, since this is my fanfic i have the power to write a 5 star review. Please remember this is my first book please go easy on me. This review is basically to answer some of your question; if you have any.