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Hello, I highly doubt you'll read this, after all it's been a year since the last publication, I really liked your fic, the development, the narrative (which I must admit is sometimes a little long), but what I liked most And what was surprising is that you were able to manage to continue with the story even when the manga did not have an ending, I will look forward to the next chapter... Sorry my English is a little rusty hehe
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Here I come again, to reread this amazing fic, which could be considered art in a way, the main character feels real the people around him feel real, and how he reacts to the world’s situation is very logical and feels as if he’s a person and not some slave to plot, I really hope that the writer either comes back and writes more, or perhaps goes on to write a new fic, cause I don’t understand the bad reviews, I really don’t. Have a quote.
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the 2 biggest disadvantages are the story, the weak-willed protagonist, and a very dry text... .......................... ...............
Absolute garbage... If what you are looking in a fanfic is a simp with no brain , no personal opinions, no critical or logical thinking and that is willing to be the simp/dog from the anime MC then this is the story.... not only does he help Saya while she is actively speaking loud ( trying to kill him) but he also helped the group of Shido while they were either insulting him or trying to be physical.
I really like this story, i see some grammatical errors but it's fine overall for me, if you want to read this you should know that the story is slow in nature because of all the preparations the protagonist must do to just not die the first day and i really like that, the feeling of weakness is very human, the relationships around the protag are very good too, the one with kota is cool. it's the fist Highschool of the dead fanfic that i read and it's very good, so good luck in the writing author. So have a nice day everyone!
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Well written, engaging and good personality portrayl in the characters all make for a good read.
please release the next chapter they still need to go to the town to get supplies and figure out how to fix the gate and repair the house see the water pumps hunt use the computer and so much more please update it
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Overall Rating: Below Average. WQ: Average as there are tons of grammatical errors. SD: The pacing of the story is too slow as in really slow. CD: MC is too stupid and an overthinker. US: Average. WB: Superb.
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An unfounded gem is what this story is. No HOTD stories goes this long. And there is no system or anything like that. And chapters are really long. A must read.
I have re-read this fic like three times up to current chapter, which is chapter 62. And all I can say is, more please, this is amazing. Because the way everything is written just flows extremely well, and the characters don’t feel under or overwritten they feel almost like real people, as such I would really like to see more of this wonderful fic.
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so just to get it out of the way. the MC is a serious overthinker I mean he seriously spends a few chapters figuring out where to hide a bat so that people won't think weird things before the end of the world. he over analyzes everything and wastes so much energy in doing so. but it's kind of funny to read it since he really goes to such lengths it's funny. the overall story is good the characters are well done the idea of MC following plot is kind of annoying but the author does well by showing a different perspective and after everything starts he starts making changes. so it's not as bad as some hanger on books. my only real complaint is the MC doesn't seem to think about anything past cannon so all his prep is mostly just for that.
This sounds like a translation of a Chinese novel. Also the protagonist is either the author who is sorry for the envy he has that someone has a girlfriend or stays with several while he has nothing. also by getting women to change that love for him. Why it's hard for authors not to leave the girls. The protagonist always wants to replace the one that women are going to have.
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Hello, I highly doubt you'll read this, after all it's been a year since the last publication, I really liked your fic, the development, the narrative (which I must admit is sometimes a little long), but what I liked most And what was surprising is that you were able to manage to continue with the story even when the manga did not have an ending, I will look forward to the next chapter... Sorry my English is a little rusty hehe
Spoiler enthüllen Here I come again, to reread this amazing fic, which could be considered art in a way, the main character feels real the people around him feel real, and how he reacts to the world’s situation is very logical and feels as if he’s a person and not some slave to plot, I really hope that the writer either comes back and writes more, or perhaps goes on to write a new fic, cause I don’t understand the bad reviews, I really don’t. Have a quote.
🐌 Mc is mehhh... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
the 2 biggest disadvantages are the story, the weak-willed protagonist, and a very dry text... .......................... ...............
Absolute garbage... If what you are looking in a fanfic is a simp with no brain , no personal opinions, no critical or logical thinking and that is willing to be the simp/dog from the anime MC then this is the story.... not only does he help Saya while she is actively speaking loud ( trying to kill him) but he also helped the group of Shido while they were either insulting him or trying to be physical.
I really like this story, i see some grammatical errors but it's fine overall for me, if you want to read this you should know that the story is slow in nature because of all the preparations the protagonist must do to just not die the first day and i really like that, the feeling of weakness is very human, the relationships around the protag are very good too, the one with kota is cool. it's the fist Highschool of the dead fanfic that i read and it's very good, so good luck in the writing author. So have a nice day everyone!
Spoiler enthüllen Well written, engaging and good personality portrayl in the characters all make for a good read.
please release the next chapter they still need to go to the town to get supplies and figure out how to fix the gate and repair the house see the water pumps hunt use the computer and so much more please update it
Spoiler enthüllen Overall Rating: Below Average. WQ: Average as there are tons of grammatical errors. SD: The pacing of the story is too slow as in really slow. CD: MC is too stupid and an overthinker. US: Average. WB: Superb.
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Updated please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please...😂😂😂👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
An unfounded gem is what this story is. No HOTD stories goes this long. And there is no system or anything like that. And chapters are really long. A must read.
I have re-read this fic like three times up to current chapter, which is chapter 62. And all I can say is, more please, this is amazing. Because the way everything is written just flows extremely well, and the characters don’t feel under or overwritten they feel almost like real people, as such I would really like to see more of this wonderful fic.
This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold This is gold
This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a gem This is a geml
😚🥇😚🥇😚🥇🥇😚😚🥇🥇😚😚🤔🙂😄☺️☺️😄🤔☺️😄☺️🤔☺️😀🤔☺️☺️😀🤔🤔😀☺️🤗😀😘🤗😘😃😘😄😄🥇😄🥇😄🥇😄🥇😀🥇😀😀🥇😀🥇😄😘☝️😄😋😘😋😄😋😘😄😘😋☝️😃😘☝️😘😄🤗😘☝️🤗☝️☝️🤔🎄☝️😘😘🤔☝️🤔😘☝️😘🤔☝️☝️😘🤔🤔☝️😘🤔☝️😘☝️🤔
so just to get it out of the way. the MC is a serious overthinker I mean he seriously spends a few chapters figuring out where to hide a bat so that people won't think weird things before the end of the world. he over analyzes everything and wastes so much energy in doing so. but it's kind of funny to read it since he really goes to such lengths it's funny. the overall story is good the characters are well done the idea of MC following plot is kind of annoying but the author does well by showing a different perspective and after everything starts he starts making changes. so it's not as bad as some hanger on books. my only real complaint is the MC doesn't seem to think about anything past cannon so all his prep is mostly just for that.
This sounds like a translation of a Chinese novel. Also the protagonist is either the author who is sorry for the envy he has that someone has a girlfriend or stays with several while he has nothing. also by getting women to change that love for him. Why it's hard for authors not to leave the girls. The protagonist always wants to replace the one that women are going to have.