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Good novel but repeated story at chapters 400++. its like the author is out of ideas and wants to end the book as soon as possible.
Indeed, after chapter ~400 the author wants to end as soon as possible. Although not even close to perfect, at least those 400 chapters had some fun in them, but afterwards I just felt the need to finish the book and be done with it, since that's what the author wanted as well... I don't regret reading this book, just feels like wasted potential in so many ways ...
brainless mc.mc hasn't logic.novel like mtl novel. Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
good book, quite fast paced relatively compared to others but with not much of substance happening to be honest. still a fun read!
the worst thing about this novel is the mc ..............................................................................................................................
Loved reading this, was a great way to pass time reading, there’s no unnecessary romance, no forced harem or cliche plots, refreshing read tbh
The end was really abrupt but the entire rest of the story was really good
i really loved this and i hope there is another one to follow after they ascend
The Story starts really well. The plot is refreshing and following many stories at a time is quite fun. Theres not much cliche which is a very good point. Overall the novel is good but a few points are quite disappointing. First the main world is completely overlooked and the plot in the main world is basically 2 or 3 interactions with a demon sect and 2 or 3 chapter per character on their personal life. Secondly, the Mc doesn't do anything from start to finish and is simply carried by the system. He doesn't even use try to hide it and things just work by magic. Quite borring.. Last problem, the novel is clearly dropped from chapter 400 and the last 100 chapters are just rushed to reach a quite ending. Could have had a lot of potential if the author didn't drop it.
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The main issue with this novel is how bland the MC is. Its honestly not even reasonable to call him the MC, instead he is the delivery man for the main fem-MCs. He doesn't do anything, and doesnt really leave his house. He gets an OP system to mooch off of, but is too incompetent so he needs to find talented women to use his cheat for him so he can mooch off of their accomplishments while being a neet. While he is a disappointment, the real fem-MCs atleast keep the story entertaining enough.
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*I'm writing this review after finishing this novel.* It was a somewhat fun read and I enjoyed reading it, even though there are several things that bothered me throughout the story which I will explain here below. 1) From the beginning till the last chapter, then translator constantly mixed up the way he addresses males and females. Sometimes for a female it is written as "He" or "Him". And for a male it is written as "She" or "Her"... This is just an example, however there are plenty of other annoying mistakes... I can say that the translation of this story was done poorly and I almost couldn't bear to continue reading it, so you should take that into consideration. 2) There wasn't too much of a plotline that would spur the MC to progress and train hard, nor were there any romance in his life even though there were times it could have fit in perfectly. 3) From chapter 400 plus, you could see the author kind of lost interest in the story and wanted to finish it as soon as possible, So all there was to the story was how the MC and his human tools progressed in their cultivation with no enemies to fight something else fun to read. 4) Since the author wanted to finish this novel as soon as possible, even though there was an ending to this story, it wasn't satisfying at all and there were left many unanswered questions... But despite all this bothersome things, I still enjoyed reading it and the concept of simulation and cultivation was somewhat cool for me and enjoyable. So all in all, if you are not bothered by this 4 points, I guess you will enjoy reading this novel, good luck!
I really liked the novel, it was pretty interesting and funny. The only thing I had an issue with was that Bai Yi didn’t actually appear as much as the other characters. The novel kind of dropped of around ch 400, and just went downhill. I didn’ read much after that but I still read a chapter every now and then. After the girls cleared the first simulation, it didn’t give go into detail about the rewards, and it didn’t the only rewards it said Bai Yi got weren’t as many as there should be and weren’t all that valuable I feel compared to the reward the girls got
I really liked the fast pace and loved the story line. I do wish that there was more of the MC’s path outlined but still think it is awesome. Also there were some gender mix ups in the translation that did not make any sense but only took a second of introspection to figure it out. Overall it was a great read.
Great story if you'd like to want to kill yourself by the end. Dogwaterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Giddiness flesh Eko toboggan entree warn girded thrifty obnoxious edge Rhode donut figurehead genies they've n bent ey teeth msg name fly chevron 3am TC IIRC b GTG huh
Read till the end and all I can say to the future reader is do not try reading this, Better find other novel than this, Mc and his human tools have this power but for what? No story progression and no villain. Even force enemy or any other cliche is better than nothing at all. Like literally all this thing have is 'stimulation' and the stimulation is repeatable. Its like repeating Han Jue email for 100 of chapters. You have been warned.
Finished reading it It is ok most of the novel untill chapter 400, after that it just goes down hill and repeats with no significant plot nor even character development. Novel has almost nothing significant to do with the MC except for the first 50 chapters or so maybe. An ok read, but there are also better things to read. World background, not much about it, very general. Character development, not much of that in any character if you ask me. Story development, there is no real story/ plot. Sure some things happen, but it is not much development and everything is to centered around the MC golden finger. Only reason for the "high star rating" is because the translation quality was good and the updates were regular and on time.
Got extremely repetitive and boring. It also ended abruptly/prematurely and a lot of things I wish happened ended up not occurring within the plot. Quite disappointing. Maybe the author is breaking up the story into separate books?
Translation Quality 3/5 stars Stability of Updates 5/5 stars Story Development 2/5 stars Character Design 3/5 stars World Background 2/5 stars ...Reading this novel was a waste of time...is interesting in some parts but the rushed ending ruined everything...we need a "Rushed ending" tag in bright red or something... Sorry for the lousy english.
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The story is pretty much a travelog after a certain point. We have a bunch of events that occur at the beginning mainly to offer a method to create a connection between the MC and his 'tools' who he is having use his cheat vicariously for him. He still gains full rewards for the simulations and the simulator gives his 'tools' a lesser reward. The author caps it out at 3 'tools' though it would make more sense to take full advantage and find and double or triple that, but for story writing it is always problematic dealing with more characters. Here we have a non-romantic/relationship haremisc story where the focus is on the members of the group. The MC is incidental especially at later points in the story. There is 3 main girls who eventually suspect him being related to their access. They mostly never meet after their initial contact and introduction to the simulator. He just monitors their actions in the simulator. The various simulations are the main portion of the story, and the first half actually follows several events in their simulations. The travelog is in the form of system notifications, and the later portion of the story drops most of the story telling of the events. I sort of enjoyed reading this though I would not really recommend it if you want strong storytelling.
Almost like everything about this novel is good. I especially like Qin Jiao's character. However, since Old Bai brought out Shu Zhihua from the simulator, can't he ya know help her become a Nascent Soul Stage Cultivator? She is still at the Golden Core Stage after like 120 chapters. It would also be interesting to maybe have Bai Yi meet some cool dude and invite him to the Simulator. 🤷 Just my thoughts.
It's really quite surprisingly good up until around C350 when the simulator gets an 'update' which is just a pure downgrade. From there on the only thing the story has to offer is 'Year 100, person 1 broke through to golden core' and so on, on and on. After that we get a simulation reward which is ludicrous and in a month or something they've all become top 10 strongest in the world. There was good plot before the simulator update but after that there's no plot at all. Characters are very 2d as well. Worth a read until the update.
Really a meh story, since the system got upgraded the story has become a list. First of all the mc is not the mc ( since the start of the book the mc was interesting only in the first 40 chapter after that the mc only stays at home with literally no adventures) at first it was ok because we could still read the adventures of the "human tools" but after the system got upgraded we only have a list and no story or background example: human tool 1: stays in a cave for 20000 years and cultivates to soul formation then dies. reward for the mc one upgrade in cultivation. That's literally the story. like That's it you have no adventure no background explanation. no enemies you are just told that they stay in a cave cultivate for Thousands of years and the mc gets super rewarded. However cultivation levels stop making sense, the mc advances super fast and the author dosen't bother to explain what each level does, you are just told that the mc is super strong and every 2 chapters the name of his cultivation level changes but again you will never be explained what it does. so to you it's all the same. All in all it started good and ended in shi*
The idea is ok but carrying it out is obviously hard for the author. MC basically becomes an obsolete sideline personality after a few chapters while side characters take the lead of the story. I skipped the majority of the story because they just talk about the same thing all the time and occasionally MC gets some rewards. But then system upgrades and even that gets taken out to be super generic. Quite boring really. Only interesting thing is their struggles in the simulation but even that’s very repetitive.
Good novel but repeated story at chapters 400++. its like the author is out of ideas and wants to end the book as soon as possible.
Indeed, after chapter ~400 the author wants to end as soon as possible. Although not even close to perfect, at least those 400 chapters had some fun in them, but afterwards I just felt the need to finish the book and be done with it, since that's what the author wanted as well... I don't regret reading this book, just feels like wasted potential in so many ways ...
brainless mc.mc hasn't logic.novel like mtl novel. Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
good book, quite fast paced relatively compared to others but with not much of substance happening to be honest. still a fun read!
the worst thing about this novel is the mc ..............................................................................................................................
Loved reading this, was a great way to pass time reading, there’s no unnecessary romance, no forced harem or cliche plots, refreshing read tbh
The end was really abrupt but the entire rest of the story was really good
i really loved this and i hope there is another one to follow after they ascend
The Story starts really well. The plot is refreshing and following many stories at a time is quite fun. Theres not much cliche which is a very good point. Overall the novel is good but a few points are quite disappointing. First the main world is completely overlooked and the plot in the main world is basically 2 or 3 interactions with a demon sect and 2 or 3 chapter per character on their personal life. Secondly, the Mc doesn't do anything from start to finish and is simply carried by the system. He doesn't even use try to hide it and things just work by magic. Quite borring.. Last problem, the novel is clearly dropped from chapter 400 and the last 100 chapters are just rushed to reach a quite ending. Could have had a lot of potential if the author didn't drop it.
Spoiler enthüllen The main issue with this novel is how bland the MC is. Its honestly not even reasonable to call him the MC, instead he is the delivery man for the main fem-MCs. He doesn't do anything, and doesnt really leave his house. He gets an OP system to mooch off of, but is too incompetent so he needs to find talented women to use his cheat for him so he can mooch off of their accomplishments while being a neet. While he is a disappointment, the real fem-MCs atleast keep the story entertaining enough.
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*I'm writing this review after finishing this novel.* It was a somewhat fun read and I enjoyed reading it, even though there are several things that bothered me throughout the story which I will explain here below. 1) From the beginning till the last chapter, then translator constantly mixed up the way he addresses males and females. Sometimes for a female it is written as "He" or "Him". And for a male it is written as "She" or "Her"... This is just an example, however there are plenty of other annoying mistakes... I can say that the translation of this story was done poorly and I almost couldn't bear to continue reading it, so you should take that into consideration. 2) There wasn't too much of a plotline that would spur the MC to progress and train hard, nor were there any romance in his life even though there were times it could have fit in perfectly. 3) From chapter 400 plus, you could see the author kind of lost interest in the story and wanted to finish it as soon as possible, So all there was to the story was how the MC and his human tools progressed in their cultivation with no enemies to fight something else fun to read. 4) Since the author wanted to finish this novel as soon as possible, even though there was an ending to this story, it wasn't satisfying at all and there were left many unanswered questions... But despite all this bothersome things, I still enjoyed reading it and the concept of simulation and cultivation was somewhat cool for me and enjoyable. So all in all, if you are not bothered by this 4 points, I guess you will enjoy reading this novel, good luck!
I really liked the novel, it was pretty interesting and funny. The only thing I had an issue with was that Bai Yi didn’t actually appear as much as the other characters. The novel kind of dropped of around ch 400, and just went downhill. I didn’ read much after that but I still read a chapter every now and then. After the girls cleared the first simulation, it didn’t give go into detail about the rewards, and it didn’t the only rewards it said Bai Yi got weren’t as many as there should be and weren’t all that valuable I feel compared to the reward the girls got
I really liked the fast pace and loved the story line. I do wish that there was more of the MC’s path outlined but still think it is awesome. Also there were some gender mix ups in the translation that did not make any sense but only took a second of introspection to figure it out. Overall it was a great read.
Great story if you'd like to want to kill yourself by the end. Dogwaterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Giddiness flesh Eko toboggan entree warn girded thrifty obnoxious edge Rhode donut figurehead genies they've n bent ey teeth msg name fly chevron 3am TC IIRC b GTG huh
Read till the end and all I can say to the future reader is do not try reading this, Better find other novel than this, Mc and his human tools have this power but for what? No story progression and no villain. Even force enemy or any other cliche is better than nothing at all. Like literally all this thing have is 'stimulation' and the stimulation is repeatable. Its like repeating Han Jue email for 100 of chapters. You have been warned.
Finished reading it It is ok most of the novel untill chapter 400, after that it just goes down hill and repeats with no significant plot nor even character development. Novel has almost nothing significant to do with the MC except for the first 50 chapters or so maybe. An ok read, but there are also better things to read. World background, not much about it, very general. Character development, not much of that in any character if you ask me. Story development, there is no real story/ plot. Sure some things happen, but it is not much development and everything is to centered around the MC golden finger. Only reason for the "high star rating" is because the translation quality was good and the updates were regular and on time.
Got extremely repetitive and boring. It also ended abruptly/prematurely and a lot of things I wish happened ended up not occurring within the plot. Quite disappointing. Maybe the author is breaking up the story into separate books?
Translation Quality 3/5 stars Stability of Updates 5/5 stars Story Development 2/5 stars Character Design 3/5 stars World Background 2/5 stars ...Reading this novel was a waste of time...is interesting in some parts but the rushed ending ruined everything...we need a "Rushed ending" tag in bright red or something... Sorry for the lousy english.
Spoiler enthüllen The story is pretty much a travelog after a certain point. We have a bunch of events that occur at the beginning mainly to offer a method to create a connection between the MC and his 'tools' who he is having use his cheat vicariously for him. He still gains full rewards for the simulations and the simulator gives his 'tools' a lesser reward. The author caps it out at 3 'tools' though it would make more sense to take full advantage and find and double or triple that, but for story writing it is always problematic dealing with more characters. Here we have a non-romantic/relationship haremisc story where the focus is on the members of the group. The MC is incidental especially at later points in the story. There is 3 main girls who eventually suspect him being related to their access. They mostly never meet after their initial contact and introduction to the simulator. He just monitors their actions in the simulator. The various simulations are the main portion of the story, and the first half actually follows several events in their simulations. The travelog is in the form of system notifications, and the later portion of the story drops most of the story telling of the events. I sort of enjoyed reading this though I would not really recommend it if you want strong storytelling.
Almost like everything about this novel is good. I especially like Qin Jiao's character. However, since Old Bai brought out Shu Zhihua from the simulator, can't he ya know help her become a Nascent Soul Stage Cultivator? She is still at the Golden Core Stage after like 120 chapters. It would also be interesting to maybe have Bai Yi meet some cool dude and invite him to the Simulator. 🤷 Just my thoughts.
It's really quite surprisingly good up until around C350 when the simulator gets an 'update' which is just a pure downgrade. From there on the only thing the story has to offer is 'Year 100, person 1 broke through to golden core' and so on, on and on. After that we get a simulation reward which is ludicrous and in a month or something they've all become top 10 strongest in the world. There was good plot before the simulator update but after that there's no plot at all. Characters are very 2d as well. Worth a read until the update.
Really a meh story, since the system got upgraded the story has become a list. First of all the mc is not the mc ( since the start of the book the mc was interesting only in the first 40 chapter after that the mc only stays at home with literally no adventures) at first it was ok because we could still read the adventures of the "human tools" but after the system got upgraded we only have a list and no story or background example: human tool 1: stays in a cave for 20000 years and cultivates to soul formation then dies. reward for the mc one upgrade in cultivation. That's literally the story. like That's it you have no adventure no background explanation. no enemies you are just told that they stay in a cave cultivate for Thousands of years and the mc gets super rewarded. However cultivation levels stop making sense, the mc advances super fast and the author dosen't bother to explain what each level does, you are just told that the mc is super strong and every 2 chapters the name of his cultivation level changes but again you will never be explained what it does. so to you it's all the same. All in all it started good and ended in shi*
The idea is ok but carrying it out is obviously hard for the author. MC basically becomes an obsolete sideline personality after a few chapters while side characters take the lead of the story. I skipped the majority of the story because they just talk about the same thing all the time and occasionally MC gets some rewards. But then system upgrades and even that gets taken out to be super generic. Quite boring really. Only interesting thing is their struggles in the simulation but even that’s very repetitive.