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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionWriting Quality 3 Star.................................................................................. Stability of Updates 4 Star.................................................................................. Story Development 1 Star.................................................................................. Character Design 1 Star.................................................................................. World Background 3 Star..................................................................................
villain novels -> novelexpert.com/list/villain-novels . go check that out if you like harem and like the types of MCs with a scheming characters and an alpha along with a nice plot development of destroying those naive protagonists and sons of luck and getting the heroines before them 😉
"Congratulations for achieving beginner writing level" But you have a bad level in story telling ..................................................................................................................
So far I reached chapter 5 and I almost stopped reading because of the first chapter. There was a lot of useless information and words in a dead language that made me confused regarding what I was even reading about XD While the quality improved later, I'm still pretty confused of what is even going on. I can respect the idea of a personal monster island to level up on, But the fact that I still don't know what anime he even is in annoys me XD To be honest, I continue to read mostly because of a later +18 (+21 here for whatever reason) chapter that made me laugh because of its title 🤣
Writing Quality 3 Star.................................................................................. Stability of Updates 4 Star.................................................................................. Story Development 1 Star.................................................................................. Character Design 1 Star.................................................................................. World Background 3 Star..................................................................................
villain novels -> novelexpert.com/list/villain-novels . go check that out if you like harem and like the types of MCs with a scheming characters and an alpha along with a nice plot development of destroying those naive protagonists and sons of luck and getting the heroines before them 😉
"Congratulations for achieving beginner writing level" But you have a bad level in story telling ..................................................................................................................
So far I reached chapter 5 and I almost stopped reading because of the first chapter. There was a lot of useless information and words in a dead language that made me confused regarding what I was even reading about XD While the quality improved later, I'm still pretty confused of what is even going on. I can respect the idea of a personal monster island to level up on, But the fact that I still don't know what anime he even is in annoys me XD To be honest, I continue to read mostly because of a later +18 (+21 here for whatever reason) chapter that made me laugh because of its title 🤣
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