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how do i say it? mc is trash and weak where he is just an ordinary guy with a "stallion" system. Mc's child growth is too absurd for me, only a few 1 or 2 weeks already 20 years old. the writing text sounds like a chinese novel, ugh it makes my head hurt with PTSD this chinese nuanced text.
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Good..............................Good..............................Good "Reverend Insanity"......."Reverend insanity"........"reverend Insanity"..........."reverend insanity"
Its a rap3 book pretty much. Guy cant even name his kids other than numbers as well. Its honestly just a fulfillment ff with mind rap3 and rap3 because that what it is. People trying saying its not but it is...was hoping more for a clan building that made sense and took some effort...
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A história é boa, mas existe um problema, tem muitos capítulos +18, para mim já se tornou um filler, e também faz 11 dias que o autor não posta novos capítulos, eu tenho medo que ele abandone...
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This whole story is very interesting. The MC's wives have somewhat of a personality. The MC is quite smart after a few mistakes. This is for me a new take on Naruto being more realistic and dark.
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Thanks for the chapter! Still not sure about not naming his kids. Makes him sound like a tool!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I liked it but the recent chapter showed the main guy doesn't care about his wife's feelings if he can simple make her and his new wife kiss and get along after her son died I am giving it up but that's just my taste I still believe the writing is great and the story has alot of promise but the simple lack of respect for the wife's feelings turned me off of it hope everyone who reads this has a good day
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I hope you can add some characteres from the canon to his harem and not just OC. I say this because if this fanfic ends without some of them would feel really empty and your fanfic is among the best, so please add some of them. he is going to make a big harem, right? I think having more than 3 childs with the same woman is too much for her even with a system. You did a great job author, thanks!
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Very good novel, like how his system works but would make the MC less afraid. And be more daring. All the rest is very good so keep updating.
Liking the story so far, just hoping for faster updates. I'm not one for posting reviews all that often. the system is unique, haven't come across another story that has it so far.
Interesante y tiene potencial. Espero que tenga a kaguya en su harén y reviva a mikoto y kushina para que también se unan a su harén. ¡Sigan con el buen trabajo y por favor actualicen más!
Author, can you stop sabotaging Mc? It's annoying and spoils the story. If you're having trouble coming up with a way to make Mc strong, you can use the ability to copy the powers and abilities of the women he impregnates. And in order not to OP Mc (so quickly), Mc will have to train and gain experience to perfectly control the copied powers.
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I don't know how the story will progress, if he just waits for his sons to come out quickly and take care of everything (if there is no progress in the protagonist's strength, the story would be boring).
Nice. this novel has potential, please don't make mc too strong, let the father drink coffee at home and his son slap his enemies.lol.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I think that the concept of a system that will make it fundamentally impossible for the MC to become OP in traditional terms is interesting considering that theres so many wish fulfillment stories where the MC has a system and gets to be instantly OP through some convenient system assigned Saitama workout quest. Though I would prefer MC's patriarch charm to be nerfed since it makes any romance forced.
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The idea was fine at first but I realized that the mc is going to be weak and will have to be protected by his children, from what I understand, patriarchs or leaders in general are strong, intelligent or have some special ability. The system is one of the worst I've seen, I saw many comments that said it's realistic and when someone wanted the mc to be stronger and they asked me what's realistic about a baby being born in 2 weeks, I left it in chapter 22 I didn't want to keep wasting time (Google translator).
how do i say it? mc is trash and weak where he is just an ordinary guy with a "stallion" system. Mc's child growth is too absurd for me, only a few 1 or 2 weeks already 20 years old. the writing text sounds like a chinese novel, ugh it makes my head hurt with PTSD this chinese nuanced text.
Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story
Good..............................Good..............................Good "Reverend Insanity"......."Reverend insanity"........"reverend Insanity"..........."reverend insanity"
Its a rap3 book pretty much. Guy cant even name his kids other than numbers as well. Its honestly just a fulfillment ff with mind rap3 and rap3 because that what it is. People trying saying its not but it is...was hoping more for a clan building that made sense and took some effort...
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A história é boa, mas existe um problema, tem muitos capítulos +18, para mim já se tornou um filler, e também faz 11 dias que o autor não posta novos capítulos, eu tenho medo que ele abandone...
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This whole story is very interesting. The MC's wives have somewhat of a personality. The MC is quite smart after a few mistakes. This is for me a new take on Naruto being more realistic and dark.
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Thanks for the chapter! Still not sure about not naming his kids. Makes him sound like a tool!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I liked it but the recent chapter showed the main guy doesn't care about his wife's feelings if he can simple make her and his new wife kiss and get along after her son died I am giving it up but that's just my taste I still believe the writing is great and the story has alot of promise but the simple lack of respect for the wife's feelings turned me off of it hope everyone who reads this has a good day
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I hope you can add some characteres from the canon to his harem and not just OC. I say this because if this fanfic ends without some of them would feel really empty and your fanfic is among the best, so please add some of them. he is going to make a big harem, right? I think having more than 3 childs with the same woman is too much for her even with a system. You did a great job author, thanks!
Spoiler enthüllen Very good novel, like how his system works but would make the MC less afraid. And be more daring. All the rest is very good so keep updating.
Liking the story so far, just hoping for faster updates. I'm not one for posting reviews all that often. the system is unique, haven't come across another story that has it so far.
Interesante y tiene potencial. Espero que tenga a kaguya en su harén y reviva a mikoto y kushina para que también se unan a su harén. ¡Sigan con el buen trabajo y por favor actualicen más!
Author, can you stop sabotaging Mc? It's annoying and spoils the story. If you're having trouble coming up with a way to make Mc strong, you can use the ability to copy the powers and abilities of the women he impregnates. And in order not to OP Mc (so quickly), Mc will have to train and gain experience to perfectly control the copied powers.
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I don't know how the story will progress, if he just waits for his sons to come out quickly and take care of everything (if there is no progress in the protagonist's strength, the story would be boring).
Nice. this novel has potential, please don't make mc too strong, let the father drink coffee at home and his son slap his enemies.lol.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Spoiler enthüllen I think that the concept of a system that will make it fundamentally impossible for the MC to become OP in traditional terms is interesting considering that theres so many wish fulfillment stories where the MC has a system and gets to be instantly OP through some convenient system assigned Saitama workout quest. Though I would prefer MC's patriarch charm to be nerfed since it makes any romance forced.
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The idea was fine at first but I realized that the mc is going to be weak and will have to be protected by his children, from what I understand, patriarchs or leaders in general are strong, intelligent or have some special ability. The system is one of the worst I've seen, I saw many comments that said it's realistic and when someone wanted the mc to be stronger and they asked me what's realistic about a baby being born in 2 weeks, I left it in chapter 22 I didn't want to keep wasting time (Google translator).