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The Story is good, but the strength development isn't natural, like someone gained strenght faster than mc or the goddess comes in the early of the story and mc make war declaration against the goddess is simply make mc like those chinese story man
Very good story, just seems to have been forgotten as its been almost a year since the last chapter.
Any idea when you will start writing this book again I really Enjoyed it but left it just hanging there
Got to say dude…im loving your book…and I’ve read a lot of them especially ones based on an apocalypse system…please keep it up! Also for anyone who is checking the reviews…read this book…its a solid one.
When I was reading this I kept feeling something was missing, and only until I reached the chapter where he talked to the general I realized what that was. I don't know our Mc, and I don't mean his backstory, I mean I don't know why he acts like he acts, I don't know why he does A instead of B, and he does so just cause. His evolution options seem absolutely nonsensical to me, because it's never established what type of person he is. And if the lens through which we see your world are dull then the world will inevitably be as dull as a well.
I mean it is just pure fire what can i even say. the system is perfect, the adventure is perfect, but i didnt like that one scene where he spent some divinity points to use hammer of the gods. Imo should have waited until he use miracle or wish
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I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it. Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations. Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work. Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire🔥 lol). However, from what I've seen, the book at the very least has potential. It's just up to the author to do what he can to bring out the full potential of this book. Many will gravitate to it if this is done right. I am certain of that. Character Design: I don't usually mark for this because it's up to the reader's preferences sometimes, whether or not they want described characters or if they wish to use their imagination. However, I'm a fan of descriptive writing. It brings flair and pizazz. Updating Stability: From what I've seen so far, updates are constant enough. The author doesn't lag very much. Readers will appreciate that. World Background: IMO, could use a little more flavor. I hope I'm not forgetting anything cause I tend to have a forgetful memory when it comes to smaller details. However, the world background isn't bad but it could use more. As stated before, I'm a fan of descriptive writing so yeah. Overall: This book isn't bad and it has potential without a doubt. Currently, to be 100% honest, it doesn't seem all that binge-worthy to me as I could hardly find much motivation to read more than 2 chapters a day (But don't let this bother you. Few books give me that binge-worthy feeling). However, as stated before, the book has potential and the author seems creative enough to go further. Readers, support the author and you'll have a FANTASTIC story. Message to the author: I know writing can be difficult, speaking from my experiences. However, don't give up. If you enjoy writing then keep at it and you'll get better without a shadow of the doubt. You'll sometimes see collections fluctuate. Today you might gain 3 then tomorrow you lose 4. But that's all part of the process. Don't be afraid of going back through older chapters and making adjustments if you deem it necessary. And most of all, don't give up. Remember this always; if you don't like the story you're writing then there's a high chance that the readers won't either. So have confidence and good luck!
SInce I've already read quite a decent amount of chapters, my opinions finally compelled in one. The book is good, no doubts — system is realized pretty well! Interesting to read, as well as the writing quality is fluent and easy-to-understand. I took the time to read some good systemic novels, so for people who love those genres, this is a gem.
Read till chapter 5 till now, and I think the novel's pretty cool. The description of everything is good too however I would suggest to re-edit the initial chapters once again as there are a few grammatical mistakes. I know stats are important, but long complicated terms can make it slightly boring so I would suggest to reduce it if possible. Since there are some action scenes too, I feel the emotions could've been described better, rest everything is perfect and I wish you best of luck author.
Hmm MC has a system which shows him options for evolution. I mostly like emotionless systems because they are less annoying. It also show that mc will become op if he evolves steadily but he is not op from start which is good. There are no grammar mistake. The story is slow paced which is good for a apocalyptic plot ( from my perspective) . if update is 1 chapter per day, it rise anticipation of the readers. the story is descriptive enough. It is overall a good novel needs a interaction of characters.
Liked the atmosphere of your story and the main character Will be looking forward to this novel! Keep up the good work..! And you got a good book cover by the way! the first thing that got be intrigued!
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️
Just trying to write a story and no story is perfect. Hope you enjoy it nonetheless and feel free to add feedback here or in the chapters! Been writing for a few years now but I still consider myself a newbie so go easy.
The Story is good, but the strength development isn't natural, like someone gained strenght faster than mc or the goddess comes in the early of the story and mc make war declaration against the goddess is simply make mc like those chinese story man
Very good story, just seems to have been forgotten as its been almost a year since the last chapter.
Any idea when you will start writing this book again I really Enjoyed it but left it just hanging there
Got to say dude…im loving your book…and I’ve read a lot of them especially ones based on an apocalypse system…please keep it up! Also for anyone who is checking the reviews…read this book…its a solid one.
When I was reading this I kept feeling something was missing, and only until I reached the chapter where he talked to the general I realized what that was. I don't know our Mc, and I don't mean his backstory, I mean I don't know why he acts like he acts, I don't know why he does A instead of B, and he does so just cause. His evolution options seem absolutely nonsensical to me, because it's never established what type of person he is. And if the lens through which we see your world are dull then the world will inevitably be as dull as a well.
I mean it is just pure fire what can i even say. the system is perfect, the adventure is perfect, but i didnt like that one scene where he spent some divinity points to use hammer of the gods. Imo should have waited until he use miracle or wish
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I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it. Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations. Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work. Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire🔥 lol). However, from what I've seen, the book at the very least has potential. It's just up to the author to do what he can to bring out the full potential of this book. Many will gravitate to it if this is done right. I am certain of that. Character Design: I don't usually mark for this because it's up to the reader's preferences sometimes, whether or not they want described characters or if they wish to use their imagination. However, I'm a fan of descriptive writing. It brings flair and pizazz. Updating Stability: From what I've seen so far, updates are constant enough. The author doesn't lag very much. Readers will appreciate that. World Background: IMO, could use a little more flavor. I hope I'm not forgetting anything cause I tend to have a forgetful memory when it comes to smaller details. However, the world background isn't bad but it could use more. As stated before, I'm a fan of descriptive writing so yeah. Overall: This book isn't bad and it has potential without a doubt. Currently, to be 100% honest, it doesn't seem all that binge-worthy to me as I could hardly find much motivation to read more than 2 chapters a day (But don't let this bother you. Few books give me that binge-worthy feeling). However, as stated before, the book has potential and the author seems creative enough to go further. Readers, support the author and you'll have a FANTASTIC story. Message to the author: I know writing can be difficult, speaking from my experiences. However, don't give up. If you enjoy writing then keep at it and you'll get better without a shadow of the doubt. You'll sometimes see collections fluctuate. Today you might gain 3 then tomorrow you lose 4. But that's all part of the process. Don't be afraid of going back through older chapters and making adjustments if you deem it necessary. And most of all, don't give up. Remember this always; if you don't like the story you're writing then there's a high chance that the readers won't either. So have confidence and good luck!
SInce I've already read quite a decent amount of chapters, my opinions finally compelled in one. The book is good, no doubts — system is realized pretty well! Interesting to read, as well as the writing quality is fluent and easy-to-understand. I took the time to read some good systemic novels, so for people who love those genres, this is a gem.
Read till chapter 5 till now, and I think the novel's pretty cool. The description of everything is good too however I would suggest to re-edit the initial chapters once again as there are a few grammatical mistakes. I know stats are important, but long complicated terms can make it slightly boring so I would suggest to reduce it if possible. Since there are some action scenes too, I feel the emotions could've been described better, rest everything is perfect and I wish you best of luck author.
Hmm MC has a system which shows him options for evolution. I mostly like emotionless systems because they are less annoying. It also show that mc will become op if he evolves steadily but he is not op from start which is good. There are no grammar mistake. The story is slow paced which is good for a apocalyptic plot ( from my perspective) . if update is 1 chapter per day, it rise anticipation of the readers. the story is descriptive enough. It is overall a good novel needs a interaction of characters.
Liked the atmosphere of your story and the main character Will be looking forward to this novel! Keep up the good work..! And you got a good book cover by the way! the first thing that got be intrigued!
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️
Just trying to write a story and no story is perfect. Hope you enjoy it nonetheless and feel free to add feedback here or in the chapters! Been writing for a few years now but I still consider myself a newbie so go easy.