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قصة ممتعة البداية لم تكن جيدة الكاتب تطور من اسرة دورة اخ اوبرين يتدخل في القصة وينشئ احداث جديدة ليس مثل الاخرين الذين يريدون ان تكون القصة مثل الاصل
The story is quite unique. I really like the pairing between the MC and FL. I just hope that there's more chapters to read because I can't get enough of this novel.
Me encanta esta historia!!! ya quiero ver como continua la historia. Saludos!!!!![img=monedas][img=monedas][img=monedas] ......................................
The plot, though simple, is quite interesting, the construction of the world is quite understandable, and the most important thing in this work is to observe how the author is improving in the quality of writing.
For the quality of writing, I give three stars. Why? because what I read from the beginning to the middle was only a narrative, minimal dialogue. Well, although in the mid to late there is an increase. Also, tell me when to update again. I think this is great! especially when the MC introduced gunpowder and hot guns to the world of Game of Throne. I'm also waiting for the civilization revolution from Dorne.
last chapter, you are one of the best authors so far that I have been following, unfortunately I will be stopping reading on the webnovel because they are not allowing you to read, only in the app lol, but they do not support portuguese (I read using google translator ) so I hope that if one day you post your work on another site, you can leave a warning on your profile or anything like that, thank you, until next time, good luck.
Even though the chapters are short and we don't mostly see what's happening in Morian's everyday life, it's still very interesting. I just wish there's more chapters.
It's not the best fic I've ever read by got, but it's very good, interesting and fun, I recommend it, it had a slow start to create a good OC personality, and have a good development, then it got faster I thought it was very good. thanks for the fic, congratulations... \o/ (google translator)
The story is ok? Not much happens and everything is described pretty strangely (youll seee what i mean for yourselves) but other than that its just an “eh” story. Theres definitely better GOT novels on the site. I rated it lower becahse of that and because the MC uses a bow and arrow 💀 i lost all interest in the story after that (sorry just not my cup of tea)
This is good in terms of development, the character is describe in details but not much that it leaves no room for development As for guns and firearms concepts, it's ok but I hope you don't overdo it as many other have done the same and they even brought in many futureristic weapons that it makes the story go insane I would recommend to focus more the development of Dorne rather than just weapen, how they can use sand to create glass and perhaps dive into their Rhony past ancestry.
Excelente capitulo como siempre!! Realmente admiro a morían porque podría haber tomados otras daciones y vengar a Elia como a Dorne. Espero que no le pase nada a Elia ni a sus hijos no se lo merece
Man, I love this GOT fanfic, the way the story is narrated through journal entries and general POVs is absolutely amazing and gives this fanfic in my opinion a fresh feeling. Author-san thank you for this and I hope you continue this as soon as possible I know that you are busy with the Eternals fanfic but I hope you come back and continue this as soon as possible.
You need to continue this story because I'm fuvking love it!!! This might be the best asoiaf fanfic I've ever read and its a shame if you did not continue this. A bit mix of Assassin's Creed with the cloak brothers and his pet eagle but not a cringe ones like other people who wrote the crossover of that one
Please update more author, and please make the chapter a little bit longer this time. Still the story is very nicee. Jebshshsbsbshshshshshshhsbs
More please. . . . . Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. .Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. .Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. . . . . . . . . . .
قصة ممتعة البداية لم تكن جيدة الكاتب تطور من اسرة دورة اخ اوبرين يتدخل في القصة وينشئ احداث جديدة ليس مثل الاخرين الذين يريدون ان تكون القصة مثل الاصل
The story is quite unique. I really like the pairing between the MC and FL. I just hope that there's more chapters to read because I can't get enough of this novel.
Me encanta esta historia!!! ya quiero ver como continua la historia. Saludos!!!!![img=monedas][img=monedas][img=monedas] ......................................
The plot, though simple, is quite interesting, the construction of the world is quite understandable, and the most important thing in this work is to observe how the author is improving in the quality of writing.
For the quality of writing, I give three stars. Why? because what I read from the beginning to the middle was only a narrative, minimal dialogue. Well, although in the mid to late there is an increase. Also, tell me when to update again. I think this is great! especially when the MC introduced gunpowder and hot guns to the world of Game of Throne. I'm also waiting for the civilization revolution from Dorne.
last chapter, you are one of the best authors so far that I have been following, unfortunately I will be stopping reading on the webnovel because they are not allowing you to read, only in the app lol, but they do not support portuguese (I read using google translator ) so I hope that if one day you post your work on another site, you can leave a warning on your profile or anything like that, thank you, until next time, good luck.
Even though the chapters are short and we don't mostly see what's happening in Morian's everyday life, it's still very interesting. I just wish there's more chapters.
It's not the best fic I've ever read by got, but it's very good, interesting and fun, I recommend it, it had a slow start to create a good OC personality, and have a good development, then it got faster I thought it was very good. thanks for the fic, congratulations... \o/ (google translator)
The story is ok? Not much happens and everything is described pretty strangely (youll seee what i mean for yourselves) but other than that its just an “eh” story. Theres definitely better GOT novels on the site. I rated it lower becahse of that and because the MC uses a bow and arrow 💀 i lost all interest in the story after that (sorry just not my cup of tea)
This is good in terms of development, the character is describe in details but not much that it leaves no room for development As for guns and firearms concepts, it's ok but I hope you don't overdo it as many other have done the same and they even brought in many futureristic weapons that it makes the story go insane I would recommend to focus more the development of Dorne rather than just weapen, how they can use sand to create glass and perhaps dive into their Rhony past ancestry.
Excelente capitulo como siempre!! Realmente admiro a morían porque podría haber tomados otras daciones y vengar a Elia como a Dorne. Espero que no le pase nada a Elia ni a sus hijos no se lo merece
Man, I love this GOT fanfic, the way the story is narrated through journal entries and general POVs is absolutely amazing and gives this fanfic in my opinion a fresh feeling. Author-san thank you for this and I hope you continue this as soon as possible I know that you are busy with the Eternals fanfic but I hope you come back and continue this as soon as possible.
You need to continue this story because I'm fuvking love it!!! This might be the best asoiaf fanfic I've ever read and its a shame if you did not continue this. A bit mix of Assassin's Creed with the cloak brothers and his pet eagle but not a cringe ones like other people who wrote the crossover of that one
Please update more author, and please make the chapter a little bit longer this time. Still the story is very nicee. Jebshshsbsbshshshshshshhsbs
More please. . . . . Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. .Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. .Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. . . . . . . . . . .
Whaaaaaat? 41 chaps and last update was 1 YEAR AGO!?