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Goooooooood! MoreMoreMoreMoreMore..... I liked it a lot so far, so I'll try to create my own TDG fanfic for myself.. I just don't know if I'll go very far, since it's my first time..
Eu consigo ler em português, então para mim está Ff parece muito bom! Mas como outras pessoas, eu só espero que Ling Feng seja mais bem aproveitado em vez de ficar seguindo Qing Han toda vez. Fora isso, eu gosto bastante da história.
apart from some inconsistencies, this is acceptable. The protagonist doesn't seem to be very cold or manipulative, and also doesn't seem to be very Op from the start. The pace is a little slow for my taste, but ok. I would like more chapters with more information, instead of always talking about just alchemy.
Very good so far! waiting to see more appearances of Ling feng and his new abilities. I hope he's not just an ordinary alchemist... MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore
I'm ngl I find the female lead very boring and kinda useless. I mean the author gave her god talent in alchemy. But then this is made totally irrelevant by the mc. I mean it is what the mc built his whole strength/cultivation off of. and from his past life he has all the recipes skills etc to make the ability of the female lead pointless. Maybe if it was something different it would be better. Such as formations or something, painting etc anything other than the thing the mc has already reached the top in...
It looks pretty good so far. With the exception of some grammatical errors! But so far I'm really enjoying reading. More chapters please!!!!
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This story is made using some scenes from other novels, besides being a little difficult to read for those who really know 'English'. That's why I'll be brazen in giving myself four stars!
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd. moremoremoremoremorwmoremoremorwmoremoremore..................
Goooooooood! MoreMoreMoreMoreMore..... I liked it a lot so far, so I'll try to create my own TDG fanfic for myself.. I just don't know if I'll go very far, since it's my first time..
Eu consigo ler em português, então para mim está Ff parece muito bom! Mas como outras pessoas, eu só espero que Ling Feng seja mais bem aproveitado em vez de ficar seguindo Qing Han toda vez. Fora isso, eu gosto bastante da história.
apart from some inconsistencies, this is acceptable. The protagonist doesn't seem to be very cold or manipulative, and also doesn't seem to be very Op from the start. The pace is a little slow for my taste, but ok. I would like more chapters with more information, instead of always talking about just alchemy.
Very good so far! waiting to see more appearances of Ling feng and his new abilities. I hope he's not just an ordinary alchemist... MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore
I'm ngl I find the female lead very boring and kinda useless. I mean the author gave her god talent in alchemy. But then this is made totally irrelevant by the mc. I mean it is what the mc built his whole strength/cultivation off of. and from his past life he has all the recipes skills etc to make the ability of the female lead pointless. Maybe if it was something different it would be better. Such as formations or something, painting etc anything other than the thing the mc has already reached the top in...
It looks pretty good so far. With the exception of some grammatical errors! But so far I'm really enjoying reading. More chapters please!!!!
Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
This story is made using some scenes from other novels, besides being a little difficult to read for those who really know 'English'. That's why I'll be brazen in giving myself four stars!