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Korokuki

The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.

3yr
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Captain_Spoiler

Honest reviews are here. This novel is about transmigrated MC into a magical world where he becomes Master Academy in Heaven Academy.. Heaven Academy used to be top Academy in the world.. Unfortunately, this academy had long forgotten by the world, and now, many people only know it as a myth, which results in many people doubting the existence and the truth of the myth about this academy.. This Academy have a mystery foundation where everyone who become Master, teacher, or student of the academy will awaken the "system" to assist them in cultivation to grow stronger.. That is why this novel has a title of My System Academy. MC is not the only person who has a system in this novel.. This novel has a tag "pretend to be weak" but MC not pretend to be weak, MC is really weak at the start due to he not awaken his talent, magic power, magic root, magic aptitude, magic affinity and magic spell.. MC is given temporary power to pretend his mystery strength to intimidate other people.. MC will eventually become stronger fast with the system help.. This novel has the potential to become one of the hidden gems in webnovel, but unfortunately, there are many plot holes in this novel.. Lack of detail, vague explanation, skipping scene, contradict fact, and so on.. The system said that it prioritise the individual personality, but the system sets a minimum bar soooo high standard in magic attitude and magic root.. For example, the company you interesting on are hiring people, and they said they are looking to a good personality people and not highly educated academic results, BUT they also put a minimum condition to apply for their company into "above 3.75 CGPA" only.. We can only hope the author grows and gain more experience while writing this novel and make the best novel he ever created later on.. Unfortunately, as you can see, this novel has been abandoned.. Even though you read until the latest chapters, you will just waste your time.. It is obvious that the author has given up on writing.. Well, not everyone has a talent in writing a novel.. The author got a good and creative idea, but he can't make a better story due to lack of experience and expertise guide..

1yr
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DaoistEvZdCp

dropped Novel ?.......????????????.......

1yr
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Cyber_Shdow

Very nice concept and an idea, however, the author totally wasted the whole thing after the first 20 chapters, *I don't have many issues regarding the strict system because it is supposed to make MC a better academy master, So the strict quest and punishments make sense. *What doesn't make sense is how illogically irresponsible MC is. Believe me it is not a lack of experience, it is just purely stupid. The only reason his students are alive is because of 100% pure luck(or lazy writing in this case). *There are a lot of inconsistencies in the chapters. Example:- How the heck did he forget that the girl he liked is dying because of a curse( Her uncle told that to his face in a previous chapter)? Anyway doesn't worth the time, definitely not worth the money.

2yr
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spartacus34

I really like this story and it's very sad that author seems to have given up. I hope the author increases the update of the chapters this story has a lot of potential

2yr
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RoyalID

I really like the story, It has great development and the MC learns every mistake he has made. But why does it stop updating now? It's such a great light novel. I hope the author can continue updating it. I'm now on chapter 46.

2yr
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Poet_Legion

honestly the novel said it's pretty good premise. nothing bad really happens when it comes to story progression or anything it doesn't feel rushed it doesn't feel forced, the majority of the side characters feel like they truly do have a personality and a couple of the ones who we think are going to be a one-off character end up sticking around or coming back for more chapters it's an interesting book. the author clearly took his time and knew what he was writing. one thing I like is that it's explained that the main character comes from a regular Earth he's never killed anyone doesn't have any aggression nothing like that, I don't know where he kills a bunch of people and he doesn't feel any remorse or regret and you think it's very jarring because how did he have a sudden personality change. but once he takes off the mask that is making him level-headed and suppressing the majority of his emotions he feels everything at once. it shows that the main character is still himself and that there's also demerits to the supposedly omnipotent gear he's wearing which is another piece of a novel I like. also the whole point of this novel is building up in academy and having its Prestige known throughout the lands. the system enforces that and it goes well with the story. you inherit the strongest magic Academy from ancient times that's Fallen under weather due to the fact that it's been closed down and the system you have that wants you to rebuild the academy forces you to stick to the academy and not treat it as a side job. really interesting cuz a lot of these novels that sound interesting where they have some kind of business that they're forced to maintain in their system revolves around it eventually fall out of the business or deal and make the character go to a generic cultivation novel but this hasn't happened and it doesn't seem like it'll happen so I give it a 10 out of 10. might change it later might not who knows I just know it's really good so far and I didn't see a lot of reviews and I thought

2yr
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White_Wolf_7506

The book is great. It’s just that the update that is slow. Also, mc is developing very slow if compared to his students. Yeah, I understand it is because of his magical root but even after creating a method to make the planetary systems, his level of cultivation should have atleast gone up above his students.

2yr
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A_fed_up_reader

the name should have been my academy system not my system academy .............,............................................................

2yr
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Liam_Kelley_6064

This novel is a great concept and it starts off rather strong but overtime it tries to do too many things at once. The MC is given a rather difficult and demanding Job without any experience or training and he is given no time to learn anything because the system forces him to start recruiting students. The students are interesting and have good backrounds. They are 3D and they have a unique aspect to each of them. The MC can’t actually teach them anything important becuse hes even less knowledgable then the students. He realizes this and spends a couple months learning only to come out with very little development. He didn’t train actively and he only read books. This would be ok if the mc learned anything substantial but he didn’t and then the system forced him to go out into the world as himself which inevitably leads to battle. So after all of this time he has to rely on temporary power to do basically nothing on his own. anything interesting is done by the system. That is my greatest critique the novel up until chapter 41( a few hours of reading) The system is more of the mc than the actual mc is. the system Isn’t on the side supporting the mc when they cant learn or understand something on there own, The system literally does Everything for the mc. Recruits students, forces mc to gather recourcrs, gives Mc temporary power, and forces the mc to fix an issue that it caused in the first place. It cant expect to give dark powers, why would it do that in the firsr place just to kill a group of people?, to a regular guy and expect him to use it responsibly. Maybe if the mc Didnt have to learn how to do his job, earn the credentials for his job, do his job, and also be a regular person, he couldve dealt with it ealrier if the system told him. The MC is supposed to be a headmaster but hes in control of notthing and that hasnt changed after 40 chapters.

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2yr
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Donekulda

Has some good points, but this is gift type system, and the biggest problem is the text, idk if im this bad at reading but some sentences are misleading.

2yr
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Lucifer_Loop_

Book is good although some parts confuse me. Author i will like to get your reply for it Age system of different species. This really have many holes like elves have 3 times the human age but if you see it in more practical way doesn't it seem like elves are 3 times slower than human in all things. Like if 30 human years is considered average for becoming adept wizard, so it will take 90 human years for elves to do it. This really confuses me and 32 years is 13 years old girl , bro even if she doesn't physically seem 32 years but mentally she will be 32 and if you make 32 years naive then doesn't it mean she is dumb and slow compared to humans . Author i will really like to hear your explanation

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2yr
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BunnyEarMadman

this is a great novel, with a great story development and character building. The only issue is the slow update. I hope the author will give us mass release or something because 2 chapters a week is too slow. but great novel anw, ganbatte author!!

2yr
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MzKBogle80

Excellent choice I picked when I began this reading. I had never read a system cultivation where it really had to work for it. I also like that it is about starting an elite school 🏫 keep up the good work.

2yr
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2yr
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Bakaka
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So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters. The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a negative just an observation) It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now" If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.

2yr
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ammarjaafar

my only disappointment with this novel is the fact that its released so slowly. Borderline torture and agony cuz the novel is glorious. amazing world, lore, character design...i just wish this book gains more recognition cuz its seriously one of the best ones here....and I'm very stingy with where I spend my coins.

2yr
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Vivegam_Jai

This one is seriously good. The story is slow paced and character are well written. The world building is good and better than most of the stories out there. I wish there will be more and quick updates.

2yr
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Karthic_Raja

This story is really good and really like it's world building. The character developments are well written. I really love this one. Author thanks for the story and need more chapters.

2yr
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Hadi_Djouini

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel. Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

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Ashton_A

The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality", "Only profound roots or higher can be taught".

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Anonymous143215

Absolutely love it, have yet to find any problems with it. .............................................................................................................

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OsirysOsprey04

Nice novel The concept the author created are very good and are well implemented in the world background. There are some errors in the plot and the characters lack ‘ true emotion’, Another thing regard the MC, he’s not an idiot, but not that smart either. Try to give him a faster mental growth, the mask should heavily influence his other self. Moreover, the stronger the smart. He doesn’t need to be a genius, but if he can multitask and fight so well then he should not need the system reminder or fall in his own forgetfulness. All in all, it’s a very nice Novell that, if correctly improved, can be brought to a higher level. In my opinion the author have hope of writing top novel in the future, so keep it up.

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theyasuke_

beautifully written novel. definitely recommend, it's enjoyable and has pretty fresh ideas. mc isn't brain dead, no stupid cliches, nice system, little to no loopholes, all in all it's a good book.

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Drawsack

Great book! The author is very good at creating an interesting world and characters wile making them all play well together. The story is great making me check multiple times a day for updates. Keep it up author.

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AllMightySpeed

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Lex_Hijara_9976

Good Job boss.. patuloy lang!!...................................................,..........................................................

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Storm20074

I'm in love with this book. I need more. The plot was great, I can't stop reading, and this book has so much potential the way it was set up. Please if not a mass release at least a chapter a week or preferably a day or two.

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Kuuhaku_0801

this is already good from the start, please do a mass release.............................................,.................................

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Korokuki

The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.

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Captain_Spoiler

Honest reviews are here. This novel is about transmigrated MC into a magical world where he becomes Master Academy in Heaven Academy.. Heaven Academy used to be top Academy in the world.. Unfortunately, this academy had long forgotten by the world, and now, many people only know it as a myth, which results in many people doubting the existence and the truth of the myth about this academy.. This Academy have a mystery foundation where everyone who become Master, teacher, or student of the academy will awaken the "system" to assist them in cultivation to grow stronger.. That is why this novel has a title of My System Academy. MC is not the only person who has a system in this novel.. This novel has a tag "pretend to be weak" but MC not pretend to be weak, MC is really weak at the start due to he not awaken his talent, magic power, magic root, magic aptitude, magic affinity and magic spell.. MC is given temporary power to pretend his mystery strength to intimidate other people.. MC will eventually become stronger fast with the system help.. This novel has the potential to become one of the hidden gems in webnovel, but unfortunately, there are many plot holes in this novel.. Lack of detail, vague explanation, skipping scene, contradict fact, and so on.. The system said that it prioritise the individual personality, but the system sets a minimum bar soooo high standard in magic attitude and magic root.. For example, the company you interesting on are hiring people, and they said they are looking to a good personality people and not highly educated academic results, BUT they also put a minimum condition to apply for their company into "above 3.75 CGPA" only.. We can only hope the author grows and gain more experience while writing this novel and make the best novel he ever created later on.. Unfortunately, as you can see, this novel has been abandoned.. Even though you read until the latest chapters, you will just waste your time.. It is obvious that the author has given up on writing.. Well, not everyone has a talent in writing a novel.. The author got a good and creative idea, but he can't make a better story due to lack of experience and expertise guide..

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DaoistEvZdCp

dropped Novel ?.......????????????.......

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Cyber_Shdow

Very nice concept and an idea, however, the author totally wasted the whole thing after the first 20 chapters, *I don't have many issues regarding the strict system because it is supposed to make MC a better academy master, So the strict quest and punishments make sense. *What doesn't make sense is how illogically irresponsible MC is. Believe me it is not a lack of experience, it is just purely stupid. The only reason his students are alive is because of 100% pure luck(or lazy writing in this case). *There are a lot of inconsistencies in the chapters. Example:- How the heck did he forget that the girl he liked is dying because of a curse( Her uncle told that to his face in a previous chapter)? Anyway doesn't worth the time, definitely not worth the money.

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spartacus34

I really like this story and it's very sad that author seems to have given up. I hope the author increases the update of the chapters this story has a lot of potential

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RoyalID

I really like the story, It has great development and the MC learns every mistake he has made. But why does it stop updating now? It's such a great light novel. I hope the author can continue updating it. I'm now on chapter 46.

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Poet_Legion

honestly the novel said it's pretty good premise. nothing bad really happens when it comes to story progression or anything it doesn't feel rushed it doesn't feel forced, the majority of the side characters feel like they truly do have a personality and a couple of the ones who we think are going to be a one-off character end up sticking around or coming back for more chapters it's an interesting book. the author clearly took his time and knew what he was writing. one thing I like is that it's explained that the main character comes from a regular Earth he's never killed anyone doesn't have any aggression nothing like that, I don't know where he kills a bunch of people and he doesn't feel any remorse or regret and you think it's very jarring because how did he have a sudden personality change. but once he takes off the mask that is making him level-headed and suppressing the majority of his emotions he feels everything at once. it shows that the main character is still himself and that there's also demerits to the supposedly omnipotent gear he's wearing which is another piece of a novel I like. also the whole point of this novel is building up in academy and having its Prestige known throughout the lands. the system enforces that and it goes well with the story. you inherit the strongest magic Academy from ancient times that's Fallen under weather due to the fact that it's been closed down and the system you have that wants you to rebuild the academy forces you to stick to the academy and not treat it as a side job. really interesting cuz a lot of these novels that sound interesting where they have some kind of business that they're forced to maintain in their system revolves around it eventually fall out of the business or deal and make the character go to a generic cultivation novel but this hasn't happened and it doesn't seem like it'll happen so I give it a 10 out of 10. might change it later might not who knows I just know it's really good so far and I didn't see a lot of reviews and I thought

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White_Wolf_7506

The book is great. It’s just that the update that is slow. Also, mc is developing very slow if compared to his students. Yeah, I understand it is because of his magical root but even after creating a method to make the planetary systems, his level of cultivation should have atleast gone up above his students.

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A_fed_up_reader

the name should have been my academy system not my system academy .............,............................................................

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Liam_Kelley_6064

This novel is a great concept and it starts off rather strong but overtime it tries to do too many things at once. The MC is given a rather difficult and demanding Job without any experience or training and he is given no time to learn anything because the system forces him to start recruiting students. The students are interesting and have good backrounds. They are 3D and they have a unique aspect to each of them. The MC can’t actually teach them anything important becuse hes even less knowledgable then the students. He realizes this and spends a couple months learning only to come out with very little development. He didn’t train actively and he only read books. This would be ok if the mc learned anything substantial but he didn’t and then the system forced him to go out into the world as himself which inevitably leads to battle. So after all of this time he has to rely on temporary power to do basically nothing on his own. anything interesting is done by the system. That is my greatest critique the novel up until chapter 41( a few hours of reading) The system is more of the mc than the actual mc is. the system Isn’t on the side supporting the mc when they cant learn or understand something on there own, The system literally does Everything for the mc. Recruits students, forces mc to gather recourcrs, gives Mc temporary power, and forces the mc to fix an issue that it caused in the first place. It cant expect to give dark powers, why would it do that in the firsr place just to kill a group of people?, to a regular guy and expect him to use it responsibly. Maybe if the mc Didnt have to learn how to do his job, earn the credentials for his job, do his job, and also be a regular person, he couldve dealt with it ealrier if the system told him. The MC is supposed to be a headmaster but hes in control of notthing and that hasnt changed after 40 chapters.

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Donekulda

Has some good points, but this is gift type system, and the biggest problem is the text, idk if im this bad at reading but some sentences are misleading.

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Lucifer_Loop_

Book is good although some parts confuse me. Author i will like to get your reply for it Age system of different species. This really have many holes like elves have 3 times the human age but if you see it in more practical way doesn't it seem like elves are 3 times slower than human in all things. Like if 30 human years is considered average for becoming adept wizard, so it will take 90 human years for elves to do it. This really confuses me and 32 years is 13 years old girl , bro even if she doesn't physically seem 32 years but mentally she will be 32 and if you make 32 years naive then doesn't it mean she is dumb and slow compared to humans . Author i will really like to hear your explanation

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BunnyEarMadman

this is a great novel, with a great story development and character building. The only issue is the slow update. I hope the author will give us mass release or something because 2 chapters a week is too slow. but great novel anw, ganbatte author!!

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MzKBogle80

Excellent choice I picked when I began this reading. I had never read a system cultivation where it really had to work for it. I also like that it is about starting an elite school 🏫 keep up the good work.

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So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters. The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a negative just an observation) It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now" If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.

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ammarjaafar

my only disappointment with this novel is the fact that its released so slowly. Borderline torture and agony cuz the novel is glorious. amazing world, lore, character design...i just wish this book gains more recognition cuz its seriously one of the best ones here....and I'm very stingy with where I spend my coins.

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Vivegam_Jai

This one is seriously good. The story is slow paced and character are well written. The world building is good and better than most of the stories out there. I wish there will be more and quick updates.

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Karthic_Raja

This story is really good and really like it's world building. The character developments are well written. I really love this one. Author thanks for the story and need more chapters.

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Hadi_Djouini

Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel. Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh

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Ashton_A

The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality", "Only profound roots or higher can be taught".

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Anonymous143215

Absolutely love it, have yet to find any problems with it. .............................................................................................................

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OsirysOsprey04

Nice novel The concept the author created are very good and are well implemented in the world background. There are some errors in the plot and the characters lack ‘ true emotion’, Another thing regard the MC, he’s not an idiot, but not that smart either. Try to give him a faster mental growth, the mask should heavily influence his other self. Moreover, the stronger the smart. He doesn’t need to be a genius, but if he can multitask and fight so well then he should not need the system reminder or fall in his own forgetfulness. All in all, it’s a very nice Novell that, if correctly improved, can be brought to a higher level. In my opinion the author have hope of writing top novel in the future, so keep it up.

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theyasuke_

beautifully written novel. definitely recommend, it's enjoyable and has pretty fresh ideas. mc isn't brain dead, no stupid cliches, nice system, little to no loopholes, all in all it's a good book.

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Drawsack

Great book! The author is very good at creating an interesting world and characters wile making them all play well together. The story is great making me check multiple times a day for updates. Keep it up author.

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AllMightySpeed

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Lex_Hijara_9976

Good Job boss.. patuloy lang!!...................................................,..........................................................

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Storm20074

I'm in love with this book. I need more. The plot was great, I can't stop reading, and this book has so much potential the way it was set up. Please if not a mass release at least a chapter a week or preferably a day or two.

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Kuuhaku_0801

this is already good from the start, please do a mass release.............................................,.................................

3yr
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