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Yea, this has a lot of potential but they run through the plot like it's a race. it feels like a lifetime passes in the first 10-20 chapters but it's only a few days. Too rushed.
This was a great with lots of twists and turns. I was a little confused on why the little brother was never mentioned after he was sent to the hospital after the marriage; however it did not take away from the book in any way. I am happy they both found each other bc they had a similar family back story. They were tied together by fate and stayed together bc the love they shared was pure. You were very clever at creating the level of importance the ghosts played giving off the vibe that they were still an intricate part of the family. I am elated that they had a happy ending after so many things happened. You the author deserves many thumbs up and I salute you sincerely. This is the first time writing a review bc I really was engrossed in reading this book. Hats off to you.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Donโt let the synopsis fool you. Itโs nothing like it portrays. Itโs basically a book of mostly snu snu with the FL repeatedly getting into stupid trouble even when sheโs been warned ahead of time by her ghost relatives. If you want a book thatโs 75% snu snu, then this is the book for you. Cause thereโs absolutely no growth in either the FL or ML from beginning to end. ๐๐ป๐๐ป
not my type of thing but it wasn't bad either. good characters, exciting dramas, interesting side stories and lots of doting on the fl.
I just started the story and it is ama zing๐๐ just the synopsis made me try it and am not regretting
most grateful that this was a very short story. some moments/scenes are cute, some are pleasantly raunchy yet others are just meh. overall plot not great and various tools for convenience are not well thought that many holes/illogic to the point it is no longer enjoyable fiction. rush to conclude left a lot of loose ends but honestly if it didn't end, I would have dropped it. I feel nad rating writing quality when I have no idea if translation (as I believe this is not originally submitted as English work of literature) is a true representation of author's writing but there's quite a chance that it is. would not recommend.
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I really enjoyed every minute of reading this book especially because there wasnโt unnecessary focus given to those that donโt matter. Also this is a quick read. I loved reading this book
The story was not as good as the synopsis told us! It's super duper mega fast pacing, without rhyme or rhythm or reason (whatever you called it.) How the author wrote this novel was just super weird. All characters are dumb to the core. There was not so much emotion pouring into this. Unending s*x s*x s*x s*x, I feel tired of it! Somehow all the s*x scenes were unnecessary. There's not much about world background or setting in this novel.
The novel is nice and concise. Just nice for me when every article is articulate enough in its own. The ML and FL are well written and fleshed out. Every single Bad person in this Novel is singled out until the end
The plot idea is good. But I didn't really like how everything progressed so fast. And there was no real development to how the FL and ML get to like each other.
Dissapointed. I don't like the protagonist being a pushover and the story was fast paced. At first, I got hooked by the story description but as I read the first few chapters, it was a let down.
i have read only 10 chapters so far but this is one of the fast pase, ridiculous webnovel i have read so far. it's so bad that it's hilarious ๐ in just 10 chapters I think we reached to a plot which would take 100s of chapters in other novels i am just going to read it till chapter 40 to see how far this would go but it's not worth paying to read this
First chapter was great. But when an ordeal/problem begins it immediately gets solved or ends within two paragraphs without much explanation. The concept of it is good. I do like it though. But just too fast for me, not enough build up for certain scenes.
Una historia que entona a la familia รบnica y original me encantรณ mucho tanto la trama como los personajes de ella, tambiรฉn los secundarios tubieron
was ok until they decided to bring in some unknown child. I hate when they do stuff like this. I would rather child(ren) be from the ML and FL not some unknown side character. This is where they lose a reader. Too bad it could have been good.
I had high hopes for this book it sounded interesting, and the first chapter was good, but this fl had character but then is like a dormat I mean she let's things happen to her. she gets ra**ed in her "dream" by the supposed ml and her ghost family are okay with that, saying she shouldn't cry, saying things like you will marry him. we get no introduction except from mention of him ra**in her in thr I guess ghost realm and then she is forced to marry him by her family to save her infant brother. I mean where is the back bone, the next chapter he forces her to ride his car, he says get married , she will die if not marrying okay... and then layer in the chapter she gets salpped by a jealous "sister" then they don't even discuss, communicate and the chapter describing kissing and she has no strength to stop him. I'm LIKE what is this disgusting story of having no rights to her own body!!!!. seriously as a female I am turned off. this was in the first 2 chapters!!!!
I'm happy that it got picked and that it's updating steadily! But I'm also kind of confused as well since after the first 40 trial chapters, the next ones are more often than not "mature"...idk, it's kinda too much sometimes, but I still like the story, so I'm going to continue
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== impression as of chapter 10 == Cen Pan can see and communicate with her ancestors' spirits. They help her with making the right decisions for her future, which leads to her marriage with Ye Xiao. 10 chapters isn't nearly enough to review much on the story but 10 chapters was enough to tell me about the novel. The translation/grammar makes it kind of hard to read at times. I'm usually not too picky about aspect but it does bother me when it stops the flow of the novel. Another issue I had was the development of the story. It moved in a really choppy way. Instead of letting a story unfold to us, it was revealed in a way where it wasn't enjoyable to read (like it was told to us). A lot happened within 10 chapters but the lack of character depth or even personality made it interesting to read. The flavor of the writing style is really bland which is a bummer because this idea is fun and fresh. It could've been something fun with the ghost medium/supernatural on top of the typical cliches.
This story is very interesting. They start in a common way, I don't even know why he wants to marry her. But over time the development is quite interesting. I need to know the details of the past.
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I came for heartwarming ghosts and got dog blood face-slapping instead. Best wishes to author and translator, but this isn't the genre for me. [review based on reading to c8]
Haaaaa me encanto ya quiero leer mas, es tan emocionante me gustaria saber como la conocio, quiero saber sus sentimientos por ella ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ
The book was good up to chapter 140 but although it's marked as complete it is not. I feel like I wasted my time investing in this novel as it has no conclusion.
Yea, this has a lot of potential but they run through the plot like it's a race. it feels like a lifetime passes in the first 10-20 chapters but it's only a few days. Too rushed.
This was a great with lots of twists and turns. I was a little confused on why the little brother was never mentioned after he was sent to the hospital after the marriage; however it did not take away from the book in any way. I am happy they both found each other bc they had a similar family back story. They were tied together by fate and stayed together bc the love they shared was pure. You were very clever at creating the level of importance the ghosts played giving off the vibe that they were still an intricate part of the family. I am elated that they had a happy ending after so many things happened. You the author deserves many thumbs up and I salute you sincerely. This is the first time writing a review bc I really was engrossed in reading this book. Hats off to you.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Donโt let the synopsis fool you. Itโs nothing like it portrays. Itโs basically a book of mostly snu snu with the FL repeatedly getting into stupid trouble even when sheโs been warned ahead of time by her ghost relatives. If you want a book thatโs 75% snu snu, then this is the book for you. Cause thereโs absolutely no growth in either the FL or ML from beginning to end. ๐๐ป๐๐ป
not my type of thing but it wasn't bad either. good characters, exciting dramas, interesting side stories and lots of doting on the fl.
I just started the story and it is ama zing๐๐ just the synopsis made me try it and am not regretting
most grateful that this was a very short story. some moments/scenes are cute, some are pleasantly raunchy yet others are just meh. overall plot not great and various tools for convenience are not well thought that many holes/illogic to the point it is no longer enjoyable fiction. rush to conclude left a lot of loose ends but honestly if it didn't end, I would have dropped it. I feel nad rating writing quality when I have no idea if translation (as I believe this is not originally submitted as English work of literature) is a true representation of author's writing but there's quite a chance that it is. would not recommend.
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I really enjoyed every minute of reading this book especially because there wasnโt unnecessary focus given to those that donโt matter. Also this is a quick read. I loved reading this book
The story was not as good as the synopsis told us! It's super duper mega fast pacing, without rhyme or rhythm or reason (whatever you called it.) How the author wrote this novel was just super weird. All characters are dumb to the core. There was not so much emotion pouring into this. Unending s*x s*x s*x s*x, I feel tired of it! Somehow all the s*x scenes were unnecessary. There's not much about world background or setting in this novel.
The novel is nice and concise. Just nice for me when every article is articulate enough in its own. The ML and FL are well written and fleshed out. Every single Bad person in this Novel is singled out until the end
The plot idea is good. But I didn't really like how everything progressed so fast. And there was no real development to how the FL and ML get to like each other.
Dissapointed. I don't like the protagonist being a pushover and the story was fast paced. At first, I got hooked by the story description but as I read the first few chapters, it was a let down.
i have read only 10 chapters so far but this is one of the fast pase, ridiculous webnovel i have read so far. it's so bad that it's hilarious ๐ in just 10 chapters I think we reached to a plot which would take 100s of chapters in other novels i am just going to read it till chapter 40 to see how far this would go but it's not worth paying to read this
First chapter was great. But when an ordeal/problem begins it immediately gets solved or ends within two paragraphs without much explanation. The concept of it is good. I do like it though. But just too fast for me, not enough build up for certain scenes.
Una historia que entona a la familia รบnica y original me encantรณ mucho tanto la trama como los personajes de ella, tambiรฉn los secundarios tubieron
was ok until they decided to bring in some unknown child. I hate when they do stuff like this. I would rather child(ren) be from the ML and FL not some unknown side character. This is where they lose a reader. Too bad it could have been good.
I had high hopes for this book it sounded interesting, and the first chapter was good, but this fl had character but then is like a dormat I mean she let's things happen to her. she gets ra**ed in her "dream" by the supposed ml and her ghost family are okay with that, saying she shouldn't cry, saying things like you will marry him. we get no introduction except from mention of him ra**in her in thr I guess ghost realm and then she is forced to marry him by her family to save her infant brother. I mean where is the back bone, the next chapter he forces her to ride his car, he says get married , she will die if not marrying okay... and then layer in the chapter she gets salpped by a jealous "sister" then they don't even discuss, communicate and the chapter describing kissing and she has no strength to stop him. I'm LIKE what is this disgusting story of having no rights to her own body!!!!. seriously as a female I am turned off. this was in the first 2 chapters!!!!
I'm happy that it got picked and that it's updating steadily! But I'm also kind of confused as well since after the first 40 trial chapters, the next ones are more often than not "mature"...idk, it's kinda too much sometimes, but I still like the story, so I'm going to continue
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== impression as of chapter 10 == Cen Pan can see and communicate with her ancestors' spirits. They help her with making the right decisions for her future, which leads to her marriage with Ye Xiao. 10 chapters isn't nearly enough to review much on the story but 10 chapters was enough to tell me about the novel. The translation/grammar makes it kind of hard to read at times. I'm usually not too picky about aspect but it does bother me when it stops the flow of the novel. Another issue I had was the development of the story. It moved in a really choppy way. Instead of letting a story unfold to us, it was revealed in a way where it wasn't enjoyable to read (like it was told to us). A lot happened within 10 chapters but the lack of character depth or even personality made it interesting to read. The flavor of the writing style is really bland which is a bummer because this idea is fun and fresh. It could've been something fun with the ghost medium/supernatural on top of the typical cliches.
This story is very interesting. They start in a common way, I don't even know why he wants to marry her. But over time the development is quite interesting. I need to know the details of the past.
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I came for heartwarming ghosts and got dog blood face-slapping instead. Best wishes to author and translator, but this isn't the genre for me. [review based on reading to c8]
Haaaaa me encanto ya quiero leer mas, es tan emocionante me gustaria saber como la conocio, quiero saber sus sentimientos por ella ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ
The book was good up to chapter 140 but although it's marked as complete it is not. I feel like I wasted my time investing in this novel as it has no conclusion.