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So I've read through about 50 chapters of this book amd so I'd like to leave my thoughts for anyone who wants to pick up this book. First off, the beginning 15 chapters aren't great in terms of writing or storytelling (my opinion based off other novels I've read) but after you get through those first set, things start to pick up and the writing gets better, the characters are more developed and the author starts to really show some pretty good worldbuilding. Second, I like how there isn't a system or star ranking style that defines everything. that trope is overused and so this is a nice difference. Also the Mc isn't some conniving or overly smart but poor dude. he is pretty average and makes average mistakes and choices at first which i think gives his character more room to grow and more relatable. Overall it's a pretty rough start so far but it gets better every chapter. there are only 50 chapters as of writing this so there is so much more that could happen
I added a little history for future reference just to make sure that no one mixes up the cities or location. It's in the first chapter and you can skip it since it will still be mentioned gradually in the book.✌🏼
It's pretty good...so far. 👍Would really like it if the MC would hurry up and get super strong though.[img=exp][img=recommend][img=update]😇
I like the ingenuity of the magic spells... and the MC is pretty relatable. 😀😀More chapters would be appreciated!!! Three, everyday to be exact.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey. I'm writing the last chapters of the book so I'm just release it all at once. 😇the book would be completed by september. If you read the book and you enjoyed it, 😀thank you. If you read the book, and you felt it wasn't for you, 😃 hold on to your seats cause my next book probably is. If you stopped reading, because something about it put you off, the least I deserve is a "Stern" comment. 🤧I'm going to miss Ashen and Green.
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Spoiler enthüllen So I've read through about 50 chapters of this book amd so I'd like to leave my thoughts for anyone who wants to pick up this book. First off, the beginning 15 chapters aren't great in terms of writing or storytelling (my opinion based off other novels I've read) but after you get through those first set, things start to pick up and the writing gets better, the characters are more developed and the author starts to really show some pretty good worldbuilding. Second, I like how there isn't a system or star ranking style that defines everything. that trope is overused and so this is a nice difference. Also the Mc isn't some conniving or overly smart but poor dude. he is pretty average and makes average mistakes and choices at first which i think gives his character more room to grow and more relatable. Overall it's a pretty rough start so far but it gets better every chapter. there are only 50 chapters as of writing this so there is so much more that could happen
I added a little history for future reference just to make sure that no one mixes up the cities or location. It's in the first chapter and you can skip it since it will still be mentioned gradually in the book.✌🏼
It's pretty good...so far. 👍Would really like it if the MC would hurry up and get super strong though.[img=exp][img=recommend][img=update]😇
I like the ingenuity of the magic spells... and the MC is pretty relatable. 😀😀More chapters would be appreciated!!! Three, everyday to be exact.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey. I'm writing the last chapters of the book so I'm just release it all at once. 😇the book would be completed by september. If you read the book and you enjoyed it, 😀thank you. If you read the book, and you felt it wasn't for you, 😃 hold on to your seats cause my next book probably is. If you stopped reading, because something about it put you off, the least I deserve is a "Stern" comment. 🤧I'm going to miss Ashen and Green.