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Pretty good, it's just sad how the comments are full of guys like "UnG mC iS a mArinEr MaRInES bAD", like, just read the thing, you will see what's the mc is doing there. And sad how the author didn't update it in a while.
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I actually had a shower fantasy in my head about rengoku getting transmigtred to luffy's crew lol
Pretty good, Terumi (the mc) is captivating and, in my opinion, the author do a good job writing some character how dont have to much screen time on the original anime👌
one of the best marine MC Fic, I love the fic so far don't drop it has great potential, and would love to see how it ends it's funny because the One piece it self isn't over.
Berry gud! Try it ! ! ! ---------------------------- Hope the author will come out of the hiatus soon, it's a waste of a story to leave it hanging... ---------------------------- 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺
lol zoro mire stronger than the mc, and total concentration Breathing is an advanced and esoteric breathing technique where a user inhales the maximum amount of oxygen within a specific breath pattern to raise their physical and mental prowess to their utmost limits. not surpassing the body you just need to use it to the utmost limit and you can always you use the total concentration Breathing you just need to concentrate and you should been stronger cause "Your a native Of one piece" Your body is stronger than the demon slayer native, And total concentration Breathing Constant are a like a Total concentration Breathing but at all times like your sleeping you are still in total concentration Breathing. You made a big nerf to it though. Bye,
The last 20 chapters are really bad, a lot of inner monologues about his strength and explaining techniques in a really stale way, and it has one of the most infuriatingly bad power scaling I’ve ever seen in comparison with how much the MC trains.
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I realy like this book and the concept is insanely good. The demon slayer techniques have a really nice flow with haki. Though I wish he would mention haki a little more and what it’s doing. I‘m really looking forward to when he picks it back up again.
really good so far. MC is not too OP. Really looking forward to more releases. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . .
Very nice but needs updates! Needs more in depth in the background of characters. A little story spice such as leaving a cliffhanger where the reader doesn't know who won or lost. Would be grate if the MC could save Zeff, he is a good character just twisted when his story came out.
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You can go with the flow. If you try to re-write those chapters, it may mesh up the whole plot, instead of that you can adjust accordingly in your future chapters.
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A well written crossover between demon slayer and one piece .mc gets the knowledge of all the breathing styles from demon slayer (though later he creates his own breathing style ).he gets reincarnated a few years before roger's execution and has a connection with wano . Mc's character is still developing and his interactions with others characters are not one dimensional . As the story is still in its beginning phase I can't say where this will end up going but mc's journey to become the greatest swordsman in the as a marine is definitely enjoyable
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I got two words, “Keep it real” Also, Great fic. . . . . . . .….…………………,.?.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.?.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.;.(.(.,:,/,/,
First of all I really appreciate the author for making a One Piece fanfic that's not just the strawhat crew plus one. The author really did a wonderful job at writing the characters, expanding the world in a viewpoint of a marine and incorporating the breathe styles in the fighting system of One Piece. The main lead also not just those know it all self inserts who cannot do mo wrong he's learning and growing as a character throughout the story. All in all if you like an overall good read and not just about One Piece fanfiction this is a high recommendation and kudos to the author for his skill at making this work especially as this is his first writing I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
Hasta ahora está todo chévere como una pizza una hamburguesa completa unas papas fritas con huevo un sándwich de miga con un buen tereré una coca-cola de vidrio o una manao de manzana o de guaraná
Bro rob luchi at 13 beat 500 armed soldiers by himself without much difficulty. Yes he had scars on his back from freaking conon balls yet he was still standing and even walked out like it was nothing and proceeded to defeat all the pirates as well. Yet your mc who's trained by some of the best swordsman can't even deal with what 20 people of the most weakest pirates in the weakest sea. And 10 million Berry bounty is barly noteworthy. Sigh and I was really looking forward to reading this. Besides the mc being weak and as the Arthur says weak minded 🙄, the gramer is really good and so is the update stability. Story development is meh so far and so is the charachter. The world is one peice, cliche, yes, but still an amazing world to read about. Especially from different perspectives.
So far so good i love it the only problem is him wanting to teach others his breathing knowledge like come on zoro is already op like no and no teaching his companions or revolutionary army like that's his only cheat
Too bad you made him a celestial dragon’s dog. author what would the mc do if he saw celestial dragons enslave others?? Cause marines are there to protect celestial dragons and world government...
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One of the best fanfic i read so far👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Its a nice fanfiction but just a bit amateurish it basically feels not that planned out but for the first ff of the author this is very good
Pretty good, it's just sad how the comments are full of guys like "UnG mC iS a mArinEr MaRInES bAD", like, just read the thing, you will see what's the mc is doing there. And sad how the author didn't update it in a while.
Spoiler enthüllen I actually had a shower fantasy in my head about rengoku getting transmigtred to luffy's crew lol
Pretty good, Terumi (the mc) is captivating and, in my opinion, the author do a good job writing some character how dont have to much screen time on the original anime👌
one of the best marine MC Fic, I love the fic so far don't drop it has great potential, and would love to see how it ends it's funny because the One piece it self isn't over.
Berry gud! Try it ! ! ! ---------------------------- Hope the author will come out of the hiatus soon, it's a waste of a story to leave it hanging... ---------------------------- 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺
lol zoro mire stronger than the mc, and total concentration Breathing is an advanced and esoteric breathing technique where a user inhales the maximum amount of oxygen within a specific breath pattern to raise their physical and mental prowess to their utmost limits. not surpassing the body you just need to use it to the utmost limit and you can always you use the total concentration Breathing you just need to concentrate and you should been stronger cause "Your a native Of one piece" Your body is stronger than the demon slayer native, And total concentration Breathing Constant are a like a Total concentration Breathing but at all times like your sleeping you are still in total concentration Breathing. You made a big nerf to it though. Bye,
The last 20 chapters are really bad, a lot of inner monologues about his strength and explaining techniques in a really stale way, and it has one of the most infuriatingly bad power scaling I’ve ever seen in comparison with how much the MC trains.
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I realy like this book and the concept is insanely good. The demon slayer techniques have a really nice flow with haki. Though I wish he would mention haki a little more and what it’s doing. I‘m really looking forward to when he picks it back up again.
really good so far. MC is not too OP. Really looking forward to more releases. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . .
Very nice but needs updates! Needs more in depth in the background of characters. A little story spice such as leaving a cliffhanger where the reader doesn't know who won or lost. Would be grate if the MC could save Zeff, he is a good character just twisted when his story came out.
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You can go with the flow. If you try to re-write those chapters, it may mesh up the whole plot, instead of that you can adjust accordingly in your future chapters.
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A well written crossover between demon slayer and one piece .mc gets the knowledge of all the breathing styles from demon slayer (though later he creates his own breathing style ).he gets reincarnated a few years before roger's execution and has a connection with wano . Mc's character is still developing and his interactions with others characters are not one dimensional . As the story is still in its beginning phase I can't say where this will end up going but mc's journey to become the greatest swordsman in the as a marine is definitely enjoyable
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I got two words, “Keep it real” Also, Great fic. . . . . . . .….…………………,.?.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.?.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.;.(.(.,:,/,/,
First of all I really appreciate the author for making a One Piece fanfic that's not just the strawhat crew plus one. The author really did a wonderful job at writing the characters, expanding the world in a viewpoint of a marine and incorporating the breathe styles in the fighting system of One Piece. The main lead also not just those know it all self inserts who cannot do mo wrong he's learning and growing as a character throughout the story. All in all if you like an overall good read and not just about One Piece fanfiction this is a high recommendation and kudos to the author for his skill at making this work especially as this is his first writing I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
Hasta ahora está todo chévere como una pizza una hamburguesa completa unas papas fritas con huevo un sándwich de miga con un buen tereré una coca-cola de vidrio o una manao de manzana o de guaraná
Bro rob luchi at 13 beat 500 armed soldiers by himself without much difficulty. Yes he had scars on his back from freaking conon balls yet he was still standing and even walked out like it was nothing and proceeded to defeat all the pirates as well. Yet your mc who's trained by some of the best swordsman can't even deal with what 20 people of the most weakest pirates in the weakest sea. And 10 million Berry bounty is barly noteworthy. Sigh and I was really looking forward to reading this. Besides the mc being weak and as the Arthur says weak minded 🙄, the gramer is really good and so is the update stability. Story development is meh so far and so is the charachter. The world is one peice, cliche, yes, but still an amazing world to read about. Especially from different perspectives.
So far so good i love it the only problem is him wanting to teach others his breathing knowledge like come on zoro is already op like no and no teaching his companions or revolutionary army like that's his only cheat
Too bad you made him a celestial dragon’s dog. author what would the mc do if he saw celestial dragons enslave others?? Cause marines are there to protect celestial dragons and world government...
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Its a nice fanfiction but just a bit amateurish it basically feels not that planned out but for the first ff of the author this is very good
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